SlytherclawPadawan [2018-12-24 18:50:43 +0000 UTC]
[Commenting with the spirit ofย Critmas 2018 .ย ]
I think it's amazing that with simple shading you've made the drawing already have a 3D/realistic effect on it, it's because you put all the light and shadow on the right places, well done. I also love how you cropped the canvas to the narrow center only maximumly framing the face, this composition leads the viewers' attention directly to the point of focus which is the diamond framed by the hair almost shaping like a heart which is also implied in the painting's title. And it's awesome that you didn't paint this in a perfect symmetrical positioning so despite the central composition the viewers wouldn't be bored by looking at the picture.
It's hard really to point out the flaw in this but if there's something to improve maybe it's to add a hint of shadows below the tears because this way the water drops don't look as realistic as the rest of the drawing - unless you purposefully intended them this way. So overall it's already a great work, keep on drawing.~
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