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Published: 2013-06-26 01:35:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 548; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 1
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I'm not exactly consistent with this sloppy character sheet.xP
I removed his goggles, I mean he's not like invisible or anything~
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Well, he's just one big freakin ray of sunshine, isn't he?
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That loves to give everyone sunburns!
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I saw this last night right before heading to bed, and I wanted to comment when I wasn't tired.
Its hard to make sense of any of your characters, I know you're still working on it, but it seems like there's a lot of back story, yet you haven't explained why they're all there, together in the first place, or what their roles in the cult are. Smoulder sounds like a pain in the ass no one can get rid of.
I like the way you fleshed out the appearance of him, the banages, furlined jacket, etc. This is just my personall preference, but I kinda like the idea of the bandages being a more permanent thing, like maybe if they come off his skin ignites or something and that hurts, or maybe its some kind of curse or punishment from him pissing off the wrong person. That sounds more likely to me. I could see him pissing some witch off or even perhaps Baron Samedi and this was his punishment.
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Now now,where's the fun in revealing everything about a character all at once?
Yeah, I'm pretty bad with explaining my characters anyway.
And that's a cool idea! But I'll stick to what I have for him and his brothers.
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True, but It all feels like its a step ahead of itself.
You kinda are, yeah. 
Well its your story thing. You do what you think is best.
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I'll try to make it make more understandable then.
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That'd help. I'm like your one fan/hardcore follower...and I'm confused. 
am I gonna see our note any time soon? You can cut it down or break it up into parts if you have to, it is getting quite lengthy.
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I'm getting to it!
Sorry I try to push things aside when I'm finishing up some pictures.
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Getting to explaining things or getting to the note? See because of the way I worded this I don't know which this is an answer to. 
Push what aside? What this whole thing is confusing me. WOMAN I AM NOT PSYCHIC I CAN'T READ YOUR LOVELY LITTLE MIND, THOUGH I WISH I COULD, EXPLAIN TO ME PLEASE WHAT YOU MEAN!
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