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Published: 2009-09-07 15:30:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 587; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 11
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tried out a new style with pixeling, how dose it look?
tried out other new things too~
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This will be my second critique so bare with me. Quite honestly you did very beautifully with the coloring and everything. Nice coloration, I like the green. Very pretty with the brown. The shading is a tad to light. Makes it hard to tell but it defines the wolf/canine very well. I like your originality with this. Very creative. Like the style and the collar. Definally draws people in to begin with. I do suggest next time to use a bit darker shading techniques as well as a darker outline to give it a better more dignified feel. Over all I think it's wonderfully and beautifully done right down to the finish. Keep it up and may God bless you and yours.
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This is my first critique, for today task on #deviant365 . So sorry if it's bad, I've never done one before.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/cā¦ " width="20" height="17" alt="
Well, to start off I guess, I'll critique the shading..
The shading is too 'light', It's need more shades of brown. I can't really see the shading unless I really look/stare at it.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/nā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
You'll need to add in more darks, and lights colors to it. The "X" and the eye markings are to bright, maybe try to darken it or blend it in more? The 'hair' seems good, but may need more shades of colors too. Also darkening the outline too, or brighten it depends where/how the shading is. The neckless also may need shading, and maybe moved down a bit?
Anyways I think thats all I have to say. x__x I hope this help a bit, great work to anyways!e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Seeing as you used a base, I'm gonna critique the shading. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/dā¦ " width="21" height="15" alt="
First off all, I think it could use a little more contrast- it may just be my computer screen, but I can barely see the shading. (In other words, the shadows should be darker and the highlights brighter- that'll help to give it more dimension.)
Also, the forelegs should continue up into the body a bit further. From what I can see in the shading, the definition seems to abruptly end when they reach the ribcage.
The hind legs are a bit better about this, but the way they seem to form a "bubble" in the middle of the body bothers me slightly. Consider continuing the hind legs up closer to the spine.
The glowing 'X' is nice, but it seems a bit flat on the surface of the leg. You might want to bend those straight lines so they follow the "shape" of the hind legs a bit better.
Other than that, I think you did a pretty good job- your shading is improving!
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