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Oilux — Pink
Published: 2014-07-09 19:16:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 2181; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 0
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Description the boys gestured and jeered
‘what happened?’
‘what’d you do to your hair?’
‘boys won’t like you now.’

she turned away, smiling all the while
head shaved and pink scarf in place

‘because it’s too hot’
‘I want a fresh start’
‘I never liked my long hair anyways’

but at home she cries
though the tears won’t fall
because it was shave
or watch it fall out

no one comments on the lost weight
or the bags gathering under her eyes
for she hides it with pink clothes and makeup

chemo starts she throws up in school
the teachers send her home, but her parents send her back
normal is a luxury they can’t afford to lose

pink ribbons on cars
the color a badge she earns
blinds her delicate eyes

pink roses on her grave
for when she lost the battle
but never gave up on the war
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Comments: 44

erinkirland-mulby [2014-12-31 17:33:56 +0000 UTC]

This is really good.

that last stanzaaaaaa

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lenalamf [2014-08-26 00:51:13 +0000 UTC]

oh my god this is just powerfull! cogratulations, this one you should call perfect!  

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Oilux In reply to lenalamf [2014-08-26 01:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh my thank you so much!

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Neon-Gloom [2014-08-25 20:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Awww so sad, but very pretty 

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Oilux In reply to Neon-Gloom [2014-08-26 02:03:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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ALBDreamweaver [2014-08-25 18:21:50 +0000 UTC]

This...

I could never do anything like this. This deserves even more recognition than it's already received. this is beyond amazing, and I applaud it openly.

Do you mind if I feature it a bit myself?

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Oilux In reply to ALBDreamweaver [2014-08-26 02:04:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh I would love you forever if you featured me.

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MedeaSafir [2014-08-17 08:14:11 +0000 UTC]

wow, heavy stuff... very touching though

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Oilux In reply to MedeaSafir [2014-08-17 19:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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DomoSushiLuver [2014-08-07 05:18:04 +0000 UTC]

aww i loved it was sad and stunning 

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Oilux In reply to DomoSushiLuver [2014-08-14 21:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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DomoSushiLuver In reply to Oilux [2014-08-16 20:21:27 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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HowlingClockwork [2014-07-15 23:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very powerful. I especially like the fact that the color pink is recurring throughout. Great job!

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Oilux In reply to HowlingClockwork [2014-08-14 21:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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TheChesherCat [2014-07-15 17:29:29 +0000 UTC]

Wow...

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Oilux In reply to TheChesherCat [2014-07-15 18:39:58 +0000 UTC]

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BlackBowfin [2014-07-15 06:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DLR. It's a very moving piece.

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Oilux In reply to BlackBowfin [2014-07-15 18:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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DailyLitRecognition [2014-07-15 01:57:48 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLR (Daily Literature Recognitions) and has been selected as our “Pick of the Day”. It is featured in a news article here and on our main page.


Keep writing and keep creating.

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Oilux In reply to DailyLitRecognition [2014-07-15 18:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh thank you so much!

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DailyLitRecognition In reply to Oilux [2014-07-16 01:37:17 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Aifos96 [2014-07-13 07:28:39 +0000 UTC]

That is so sad and lovely both at the same time, impressive!

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Oilux In reply to Aifos96 [2014-07-15 18:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Aifos96 In reply to Oilux [2014-07-15 19:08:57 +0000 UTC]

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Basket-Of-Fruit [2014-07-11 01:03:55 +0000 UTC]

You have a lot of talent ;-;

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Oilux In reply to Basket-Of-Fruit [2014-07-15 18:41:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh my thank you!

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shep4life [2014-07-10 22:20:32 +0000 UTC]

sad and powerful

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Oilux In reply to shep4life [2014-07-15 18:41:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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shep4life In reply to Oilux [2014-07-15 23:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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MizzMoris [2014-07-10 14:22:21 +0000 UTC]

THis is beautiful! You can really feel the emotions coming from this piece.  Fantastic job!

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Oilux In reply to MizzMoris [2014-07-15 18:41:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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2020hawk [2014-07-10 04:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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Oilux In reply to 2020hawk [2014-07-15 18:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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2020hawk In reply to Oilux [2014-07-15 19:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Np!

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RepoRaccoon [2014-07-09 21:59:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh my that was amazing full of emotion

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Oilux In reply to RepoRaccoon [2014-07-15 18:41:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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RepoRaccoon In reply to Oilux [2014-07-15 18:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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Fameisdead [2014-07-09 19:51:36 +0000 UTC]

:c this was sad but really good  

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Oilux In reply to Fameisdead [2014-07-09 20:01:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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TerramArmsXIII [2014-07-09 19:33:00 +0000 UTC]

aww, such a sad but powerful poem! it shows that real people use pink! nice!

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Oilux In reply to TerramArmsXIII [2014-07-09 19:35:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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TerramArmsXIII In reply to Oilux [2014-07-09 19:35:49 +0000 UTC]

no problem at all! hey, would you mind reading a poem I made?

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Oilux In reply to TerramArmsXIII [2014-07-09 19:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Not one bit! Which poem?

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TerramArmsXIII In reply to Oilux [2014-07-09 19:37:37 +0000 UTC]

arcnovaxiii.deviantart.com/art…

this one if you don't mind!

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