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Oilux โ€” War is a deadly thing...
Published: 2012-02-22 06:36:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 2725; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 9
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People tend to believe that the personification of a country gets no say in any matter, that he or she is just supposed to leave the decision up to their boss and stay out of the way. While this is true for most situations, there is the rare circumstance where the personification is the one that's needed to make the decision. For instance going to war, or making allies.

Or creating internment camps.

Alfred F. Jones placed his head on his desk, trying to get rid of the growing migraine. He felt like everyone was trying to force their opinion on his at once, and really Alfred just wanted to be left alone so that he could think.

His government was afraid of spies from the Japanese. Everyone was still trying to get over the tragedy that was Pearl Harbor, and Alfred hadn't seen his government this afraid since the revolution. His boss, Franklin D. Roosevelt, had created a bill that would make all the Japanese American people have to go into camps until the war was over, also it would allow them to capture and prevent any spies. The president needed Alfred's stamp of approval though, before he could do anything.

With a long stretched out sigh, Alfred wondered what his other options were. He could see no other options that would work as well as this one. Picking up his pen, Alfred scrawled his signature at the bottom of the form, knowing that people would be put into camps first thing tomorrow morning.

He knew he was going the right thing though.



Three years later, in 1945, Alfred set out to go and talk to Kiku. Alfred hadn't seen Kiku in years now, and he was wondering how the other was handling the war. Surely Kiku had heard about Alfred locking away his people by now. Alfred wasn't here to talk about that though, he was here to tell Kiku to surrender. With a strong hand he rapped on the Japanese man's door.

"Ohayลgozaimasu, how can I help you-" Kiku cut short when he saw who was actually waiting at his door.

"What do you want America?" He said shortly with a glare. Alfred almost let his shock show on his face, Kiku had never talked to anyone like that before. Alfred quickly regained his composure though.

"I'm here to demand that you surrender." Alfred said shortly, crossing his arms over his chest. Kiku stared at him for a second before laughing.

"Are-are you serious?" Kiku somehow managed to say in between bouts of his laughter. Alfred frowned at the other.

"Completely."

"That is not going to happen, America. I am doing fine in this war, and I will not give up." Alfred glared at Kiku.

"This isn't an option. Surrender now while I still give you the choice."

"I will not surrender to a man who has locked up my people!" Kiku shouted, looking
surprised even at himself.

"What?" Now Alfred was just confused.

"You heard me. You locked up my people, innocent people, who had nothing to do with this war. You locked them up just like Hitler did to the Jews." America snarled.

"Don't compare me to that bastard." He growled out. Kiku glowered back.

"You know it's true." That made Alfred stop for a second, was he like Hitler? No he was only doing what he thought was best for his country.

"I only did it to get your spies out." Japan was the one who was confused now.

"Spies? I have no spies America, I don't need them. Tell me, have you found one spy yet?" Alfred looked down ashamed.

"Well no, but-" Kiku cut him off.

"Exactly no. Get out of here America, you make me sick. I will win this war, and you will lose." Kiku turned around and slammed his door in Alfred's face, leaving the other standing there alone.



Alfred did win the war, but only by using the very first atomic bombs on Hiroshima and Nagasaki. He was also the one that had to sign off that those were okay to do as well. He didn't regret it for a moment. Still, it was years later and Kiku was still waiting for his apology.

It was a warm summer day when Alfred went to go and see Kiku again. Unlike last time he gently rapped on the door, as if he was afraid he would startle anyone behind it. After about a minute he heard someone walk to the door. Kiku stood, half his frame hid by the door, looking half his size. The bombs had made him lose about thirty pounds, and he had always been skinny before, but now he was just skin and bones. The cheery greeting to visitors was gone, Alfred noticed, along with the air of confidence that Kiku had had on him for decades.

"Can I help you America?" Kiku said softly, even his voice sounded strained. Alfred nodded but didn't say a word, Kiku waited patiently for him to continue.

"I'm sorry." Alfred suddenly blurted out. Kiku took a step back in shock; those were the last words that he had been expecting from the younger country.

"I'm sorry that I put your people in internment camps." Alfred elaborated after a second. Kiku nodded to show his understanding.

"It's been decades America. You just expect me to forgive you?" To Kiku's shock Alfred nodded.

"Well, ya." Kiku shook his head, wondering how he could make the American understand.

"America, what you did was wrong. It's wrong to just put people away like that, as if they are mere animals to you. Then you come back decades later and apologize for that, and not dropping the atomic bomb on me once but twice?" Alfred stood there, not knowing what to say.

"The only way that you ever won that war was by doing something drastic, otherwise we both know that I would have won. Come back, when you make a real apology." Just like that day years before, Kiku slammed the door in Alfred's face.

Alfred walked away, still thinking that he had done everything right during the war. He never did come back to apologize to Kiku for the bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki.
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Comments: 58

Oilux In reply to ??? [2013-02-18 05:40:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! That is just what I tried to do with my story

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Briarfox13 In reply to Oilux [2013-02-18 15:45:42 +0000 UTC]

That's okay. They are really good and I enjoy them because there are more historically accurate than some other stories (which are still good). Also you are a good writer

It's because I don't like inaccurate stories based around historical events but your's are good ^^ I look forwards to reading more of your stories

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Eirthbndr [2012-09-12 19:18:14 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if that is your opinion about how Japan would have won the war, but I seriously doubt they would have. It would have lasted a lot longer, but I don't think they would have won had we not dropped those bombs.

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QueenSerenity101 [2012-04-21 04:07:59 +0000 UTC]

whoa whoa WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! did.......did Kiku-san do what I think he did?????????? ................................................................. WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Oilux In reply to QueenSerenity101 [2012-04-22 03:37:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure! What do you think he did?

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QueenSerenity101 In reply to Oilux [2012-04-22 03:38:54 +0000 UTC]

did Japan just slam the door in America's face??????????????????????????????????????????????

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Oilux In reply to QueenSerenity101 [2012-04-22 21:31:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes that he did.

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QueenSerenity101 In reply to Oilux [2012-04-24 00:15:01 +0000 UTC]

whoa................................

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Oilux In reply to QueenSerenity101 [2012-04-24 03:19:03 +0000 UTC]

I know, Japan's can be an ass sometimes.

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QueenSerenity101 In reply to Oilux [2012-04-25 00:16:18 +0000 UTC]

thats true but i love him anyway XD

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pugglemuggle [2012-03-25 07:58:05 +0000 UTC]

I feel that the bombs were necessary to put an end to the war that could have gone on for much longer had they not decided to turn to such drastic measures. By 1945, fighting in Europe was over, but Japan was still holding out, even though they were obviously outmatched and had no hope of winning. Because Japan refused to surrender, the only way to make them do so forcefully would have been a full-scale invasion of the country, which would have led to the deaths of many more American and Japanese soldiers, not to mention huge expenses in order to sustain the countries at war for several more months.

However, I also think that the using something as powerful as the atomic bomb was going too far. The bombs dropped on Hiroshima and Nagasaki killed thousands of innocent Japanese civilians and Korean slave laborers who had nothing to do with the war at all. In fact, many of them even opposed the war. The people of Japan were starving because of the massive amount of resources the Japanese government was diverting away from its populace and into its military, which certainly wasn't helping sustain their country. In addition, there were large amounts of young Japanese men who were drafted into the war and killed. I recently read about how many of the fathers of young fallen Japanese soldiers cut off their own thumbs and sent them to the Emperor of Japan to protest the war. The Emperor never even knew that Japan was loosing the war until the bombs were dropped. I read that his advisers were too afraid to tell him when the lost a battle, so there were never any orders to surrender. As far as the Emperor knew, they were doing just fine.

This doesn't even mention the fact that the Americans didn't really even know what the long-term effects of the bombs would be on Japan. Roughly a quarter of the population in Hiroshima died from the bomb the day the bomb was dropped, but many many more people died later for radiation poisoning. Decades after the war, there were still people dying from cancer directly associated with exposure to the atomic bombs. Children who hadn't even been born yet were affected. In addition, the radiation soaks into the plants and animals who live on the land where the bombs were dropped. This means that if anyone eats products made from those plants and animals, then they'll get radiation poisoning as well. The entire area around those two cities became a dead-zone; and not just for a couple of years, either.

In America, we learn about the bombing of Pearl Harbor, which resulted in a total of 2402 casualties, 48 of which were civilians. It never ceases to amaze me that this is what they choose to put the emphasis on when they teach us about America's battle against the Japanese, when in truth, the casualties of Pearl Harbor are insignificant compared to the 150,000 to 246,000 people we killed at Hiroshima and Nagasaki in return.

Furthermore, the internment camps the American government set up for Japanese-Americans during the war weren't quite as horrible as people make them out to be. Yes, it was disgustingly unfair for the Country of Justice to force them from their homes and put them all into barbed-wired camps with cramped living quarters and little privacy to do pretty much anything. But somehow, it's not surprising. At that point in time, the Civil Rights Movement hadn't even happened yet. Unjustly segregating a certain racial minority on the basis that a few of them might, just might, be spies is just the sort of thing that our racist country would have done back then. While it was by no means 'good', it wasn't particularly remarkable considering everything else in American during that time period.

To wrap this all up, while a harsh solution was needed to end the war, it'd probably have been better if we'd resorted to something a little less harsh that didn't involve quite so many deaths of people who weren't really our enemies. In addition, the Japanese government would have done better to accept defeat as soon as we warned them we would drop the bombs. It would have been more appropriate for them to to sacrifice their pride instead of sacrificing the lives of so many of their own people. The attack on Pearl Harbor was the attack that brought us into the war, but it's important to remember that it was nothing more than just that; an attack in a war. During wars, people tend to fight people, and it's not really necessary that they apologize for every battle they participate in during a war, as long as it is, in fact, against the enemy. There really isn't an excuse for killing civilians. If anyone deserves an apology, it'd be an apology to Japanese civilians, not to Japan itself, since I would say the governments of Japan and America are equally at fault for the deaths.

....Sorry... I didn't actually intend for that to be a huge long history lesson. DX Man, I'm such a nerd... The saddest part is that I knew all of that off the top of my head besides the exact casualty numbers... Again, I apologize for leaving this long-ass comment. I really did think that your writing was good, and that you're doing very well to address important topics like these... I just felt like a few facts needed to be corrected.... Sorry... XD You don't have to read all that if you don't want to...

~Puggle

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sealandmintbunny In reply to pugglemuggle [2012-12-17 02:32:08 +0000 UTC]

thats okay, i canbe a ranting history nerd to XD
but i do think the atomoic bombs were unnecessary. and i find it a bit annoying that, like you said, in history books at school they say how horrible pearl harbor was, yet the only briefly mention hiroshima and nagasaki and say that it was necessary, like it was okay. they dont even mention that we had concentration camps in the U.S., yet when hitler had the it was horrible (whichh it was!.)

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pugglemuggle In reply to sealandmintbunny [2012-12-27 08:18:51 +0000 UTC]

I agree with you. Dropping something as horrible an atomic bomb was going way too far. Although it did end a war that could have gone on for many more years and cost countless more soldiers' lives, it also resulted in the permanent destruction of two cities, and the deaths of thousands of innocent civilians. Killing citizens is not okay, no matter the circumstances.

I haven't heard about the concentration camps in the U.S.... Do you mean the internment camps? XD That was a major injustice against Japanese Americans, and deserves to be properly taught and acknowledged, but the internment camps were no where near as tragic and brutal as Hitler's concentration camps. It was unlawful of the United States to forcibly evict people because of their race and make them live in prescribed camps, but the camps weren't designed for killing people at all, like those in Nazi Germany.

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sealandmintbunny In reply to pugglemuggle [2012-12-29 00:52:59 +0000 UTC]

yeah, thats what i meant sorry i got the name wrong..i get things confused alot XD
the nazis WERE messed up. verry. -_-

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pugglemuggle In reply to sealandmintbunny [2012-12-29 02:51:44 +0000 UTC]

Hehe I do that all the time, it's fine. XD Especially with names of people.... That's really embarrassing.
And yeah, they were pretty horrid... Just shows the power of propaganda and strong leadership.

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Oilux In reply to pugglemuggle [2012-03-25 22:40:58 +0000 UTC]

Well, I read most of it, but I knew almost all of it. I just bent a few facts for the stories sake.

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pugglemuggle In reply to Oilux [2012-03-25 23:36:36 +0000 UTC]

No, yeah, I understand how that goes... Sorry, I wasn't meaning to criticize you, I just wanted to make sure the real facts were available so no one would get mixed up... Gosh, I really am a history geek, aren't I? XD This morning, my sister asked me why I was so tired, and I was rather reluctant to tell her that instead of staying up late playing video games or watching movies or doing the things that normal teenagers do, I'd been typing up a comment-turned-essay about WWII... What is this madness?? XD

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Oilux In reply to pugglemuggle [2012-03-26 00:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Lol I've done that before, but only for my own research.

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pugglemuggle In reply to Oilux [2012-03-27 21:51:25 +0000 UTC]

Haha it's easy to get caught up in that sort of stuff, isn't it? XD

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Oilux In reply to pugglemuggle [2012-03-28 02:20:51 +0000 UTC]

It really is

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pugglemuggle In reply to Oilux [2012-03-28 04:47:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm just imagining how lame of an excuse that would be...
Teacher: Why didn't you do your homework?
Me: ...Uh... I was researching the War of Austrian Succession.
Teacher: ...What?
XD Yeah, that would be a pretty awkward situation...

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Oilux In reply to pugglemuggle [2012-04-01 02:31:31 +0000 UTC]

Lol I've done that before and they always say well that's great but do your actual test.

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pugglemuggle In reply to Oilux [2012-04-02 05:15:35 +0000 UTC]

Haha if I did that, they'd probably react the same way... Except they'd probably be a little bit less understanding, since not doing your homework is pretty much a death wish. XD

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Oilux In reply to pugglemuggle [2012-04-03 21:11:20 +0000 UTC]

Lol I know, I have really understanding teachers.

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pugglemuggle In reply to Oilux [2012-04-04 04:06:23 +0000 UTC]

Haha... That would be the life... If only they could realize that some of us have lives... unlike them XD

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RS-Kyra [2012-02-29 03:19:57 +0000 UTC]

You make Japan out to be completely innocent. We didn't torture and murder the Japanese in the internment camps like Hitler did, for starters, and these were Japanese-Americans. They weren't even Japan's people anymore. I'm not saying it was right, because it wasn't, but it wasn't absolutely evil.

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Oilux In reply to RS-Kyra [2012-03-01 03:08:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm not saying he was innocent at all, but really the internment camps weren't all that great either. Sure we didn't torture people but they still weren't treated greatly. I feel as if your ethnicity defines as if you were from. If your English then your English, even if you were born in America.

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RS-Kyra In reply to Oilux [2012-03-01 04:01:30 +0000 UTC]

Of course they weren't, it's wrong to separate an ethnic group from the others. I'm just saying America should really be getting more scrutiny for the bombs, because those actually killed people. I'm sure there were deaths in the camps too, but not on the massive numbers as in Europe and they weren't intentional.

Well, I may be Irish by blood, but my family came to this country before it was even a country. I have no ties to Ireland other than bride in my heritage, and I certainly don't expect anyone in Ireland to care if I was wrongfully arrested.

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puppyloverpearl [2012-02-26 14:27:16 +0000 UTC]

I really, really love this I'm still writing my entry, and it's going in a way different direction then yours XD But anyway, very well written, I love it

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Oilux In reply to puppyloverpearl [2012-02-28 00:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I can't wait to read yours.

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Yuriko-chan24 [2012-02-23 00:54:02 +0000 UTC]

this was great, don't change a thing, don't write another, keep this one. it's about time some more people started focussing on this side of world war two rather than with germany and italy and england and all that, everyone knows about that, a handful of people know about pearl harbor, fewer know about the events that happened just before, during, and after.

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Oilux In reply to Yuriko-chan24 [2012-02-24 00:26:37 +0000 UTC]

You really think so? I'll keep it just like this then. Thank you. I agree as well, a lot of people in Hetalia don't know about what happened besides the stuff with Germany and Italy.

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Yuriko-chan24 In reply to Oilux [2012-02-24 00:32:25 +0000 UTC]

not even hetalians...just...people in general are starting to forget...it's kind of sad...

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Oilux In reply to Yuriko-chan24 [2012-02-24 00:38:42 +0000 UTC]

I know it really is. :/

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Yuriko-chan24 In reply to Oilux [2012-02-24 00:45:53 +0000 UTC]

every time they go over pearl harbor and the island hopping part of the war i always want to know more, but it seems like we're getting lazier in teaching about it, pretty soon world war two in general is just going to be a "what?" kind of event.

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Oilux In reply to Yuriko-chan24 [2012-02-24 06:55:14 +0000 UTC]

I know, I remember when it was December 7 (which is remembrance of pearl harbor day) and I tried to talk to my teacher about it, and they didnt even know what it was.

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Yuriko-chan24 In reply to Oilux [2012-02-24 14:44:42 +0000 UTC]

................a TEACHER didn't know what pearl harbor was? A FREAKING TEACHER?!

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Oilux In reply to Yuriko-chan24 [2012-02-28 01:07:04 +0000 UTC]

He knew what it was, but he didn't know that it had a rememberance day, or the date that Pearl Harbor was....I was so disappointed

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Yuriko-chan24 In reply to Oilux [2012-02-28 01:44:51 +0000 UTC]

......*resisting the urge to find this teacher and smack him with both hetalia and a history book*

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Oilux In reply to Yuriko-chan24 [2012-03-01 03:38:24 +0000 UTC]

Lmao I so want to do that now.

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Yuriko-chan24 In reply to Oilux [2012-03-01 04:04:43 +0000 UTC]

i want to do that to any history nut that gets their facts wrong >.<

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Oilux In reply to Yuriko-chan24 [2012-03-07 04:55:24 +0000 UTC]

I know I mean if your going to be a history teacher you should know everything.(or at least most)

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Yuriko-chan24 In reply to Oilux [2012-03-07 04:56:37 +0000 UTC]

EXACTLY!

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Oilux In reply to Yuriko-chan24 [2012-03-07 05:40:07 +0000 UTC]

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TheCaramelColonies [2012-02-22 20:47:19 +0000 UTC]

I just want to go and cry now ;n;

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Oilux In reply to TheCaramelColonies [2012-02-24 00:26:42 +0000 UTC]

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takozilla [2012-02-22 13:09:43 +0000 UTC]

i keep forgeting about that war and the fact they hould be enimies. cute story. not too depressing

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Oilux In reply to takozilla [2012-02-24 00:27:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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matrioshka97 [2012-02-22 12:39:30 +0000 UTC]

Poor japan รงxรง

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matrioshka97 [2012-02-22 12:39:28 +0000 UTC]

Poor japan รงxรง

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