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OKami-hu — Fullmetal Lullaby

Published: 2004-10-29 07:03:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 815; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 216
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Description Fullmetal Lullaby

Feel the gentle wind tonight;
Full of tears and muffled laughter.
Everything seems clear and bright
Filled with deep despair and rapture.

Railways run into the distance,
Train engines hum soft and steady
Lulling me into a deep trance
I’m almost asleep already.

Folded red coat is my pillow,
Red eyes watch over my nightmares.
Short is my rest, the joy’s shallow;
Where’s the place where our journey ends?

Where is the peace of our young souls?
Vanished into sinful darkness.
In my heart the emptiness grows;
All my nights are cold and starless.

One thing keeps me moving forward -
A promise I made years ago;
If I can be true to my word
True happiness soon would follow.


OKami 2004-10-28  21:37
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Comments: 18

CaramellLuvr247 [2009-01-16 01:56:27 +0000 UTC]

I don't think I could have said what you just said in that poem/song better.

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im-narutarded2008 [2008-05-21 12:03:29 +0000 UTC]

that is beautiful!
my poems suk. tell me wat u think!
check out my gallery plz! tell me wat u think of my poems and story,
because i know they sux

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ColdFoxx [2006-09-25 01:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Love the angst and the flow of the poem! Awesome

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OKami-hu In reply to ColdFoxx [2006-09-25 13:31:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^^

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SketchingTigress [2005-12-18 04:40:36 +0000 UTC]

tis a beutiful poem. you are a very talented person! keep wrighting poems!

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OKami-hu In reply to SketchingTigress [2005-12-18 15:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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SketchingTigress In reply to OKami-hu [2005-12-18 16:08:34 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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blondealchemist [2005-11-27 21:05:45 +0000 UTC]

its... so... beutiful!

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OKami-hu In reply to blondealchemist [2005-11-28 15:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^ Hey, don't cry.

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blondealchemist In reply to OKami-hu [2005-11-28 21:05:28 +0000 UTC]

hehe. thats kinda funny! if he does shoot the cat and kill it ill kill him!

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Pure-Dax [2005-05-08 02:48:48 +0000 UTC]

good concept for this dev,

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Cofie [2004-11-04 15:53:28 +0000 UTC]

oO You talented biach! XD
That is soo goody! XD Muhahahahaaaaaaa
Damn I luv ur stuff.

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OKami-hu In reply to Cofie [2004-11-05 10:52:42 +0000 UTC]

*lazy smile*

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Kiske [2004-10-29 10:48:59 +0000 UTC]

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OKami-hu In reply to Kiske [2004-10-29 10:51:52 +0000 UTC]

I like these comments. They tell so much.

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Kiske In reply to OKami-hu [2004-10-29 10:59:15 +0000 UTC]

that's true one look and you know that your poem is very good

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OKami-hu In reply to Kiske [2004-10-29 11:20:30 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Sankyuu!

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lenihanfighter [2004-10-29 07:56:58 +0000 UTC]

... Whoa. Oo I love that. Angsty, good poem. Rhythm and rhyme are strong here and the whole piece seems to flow on and on. I LOVE it!!

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