Comments: 21
Zeromune [2010-07-03 04:33:52 +0000 UTC]
LOL FOURTH WALL BREAKING
<333
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ladycowrie [2010-07-02 15:13:00 +0000 UTC]
As a reader of the original (like the one on paper. with the little scribbledy handwriting), we've discussed how I felt about it, and I basically watched you write the end of this chapter, whilst discussing why the crap you had writer's block among other things...blah blah blah.
I basically know every character in this story, soooooooooooooooo...it leaves nothing to the imagination. HAHA I KNOW WHO THE GUY IN THE DREAM IS BWAHAHAHAHAHA. Sorry. Just wanted to rub it into people's faces. Just sayin'.
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SourpatchGirl30 [2010-07-01 00:17:20 +0000 UTC]
EEEEEEEEVILLLLL CLIFF HANGER! This was a (no offense) boring chapter until the end. The beginning was interesting, though! And that's a good trick, as a writer. To keep the beginning interesting, then the middle boring, and then a BAM! exciting ending! ^-^ I liked it. I really want to know who the man in Sparkie's dream was, though!
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Okamichu In reply to SourpatchGirl30 [2010-07-01 03:08:19 +0000 UTC]
:3 EEVIILLLLL. Yeah, I knew it was boring. I considered scrapping it but then I just got that "MAN UP AND FINISH IT" attitude so ah did. I'm glad the beginning was interesting at least. Maybe the next chapter won't be so boring~
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Okamichu In reply to SourpatchGirl30 [2010-07-01 03:11:58 +0000 UTC]
Oooh yes I can. 3s are my curses, I've realized. Bad things happen to me with threes.
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SourpatchGirl30 In reply to Okamichu [2010-07-01 03:51:37 +0000 UTC]
I've noticed that. :[ some great series forgotten. but not this one, please!
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Okamichu In reply to SourpatchGirl30 [2010-07-01 03:53:26 +0000 UTC]
I won't! What other series should I bring back around, I'd love to try and fix some things up. I need stuff to do. I'm not quitting. The next chapter is already in writing process!
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Okamichu In reply to SourpatchGirl30 [2010-07-01 17:32:21 +0000 UTC]
I need to finish it. I want to finish it.....
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CJFer90 [2010-06-30 04:35:21 +0000 UTC]
You do a very good job in pulling the reader in, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Okamichu In reply to CJFer90 [2010-06-30 04:36:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'll try to consistently upload new chapters <3 Glad you liked it!
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CJFer90 In reply to Okamichu [2010-06-30 04:38:29 +0000 UTC]
Looking forward to it.
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Okamichu In reply to CatComixzStudios [2010-06-30 04:09:40 +0000 UTC]
Hm, unusual. It's a strange relationship they'll have.
WOO FOURTH WALL SHATTERED!
I'll get to work!
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