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Okulana — Investigation Cell in the evening light
Published: 2013-08-12 16:38:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1139; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 0
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Great light. Colorwise it feels a bit disorganized. I like the angle you chose though, makes for a dynamic composition. And the way the tree branches in the foreground almost have the character of fading memories is rather appealing!
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Sorry, what is colourwise? My english is not very good. ) These branches are my favourite part of this work. ) But I`ve made a wrong perspective and the first plan tiling is awful. 
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I hadn't noticed the tiles, so I'd say it doesn't really matter. Colorwise just means 'concerning the colors'
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Please then tell me what about disorganazed colours here. I don`t see it by myself.
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I think the walls of the houses in the centre and lower righthand part of the picture could have done with some warmer hues, either as accentuations or plainly applied. The way it is at the moment the picture has a good strong curve in the roofs and adjourning fascades, whereas the street and wall in the lower middleground are (for my taste, that is!) to insubstantial and a little disconnected ftom the rest of the picture. It's not easy to put into words, so I scribbled into your picture: sta.sh/01lrg3fuwfrx I think it's due to the very cool colors of the shadows (yes, I know, shadows look that way) and the lack of color in the wall and the ground. For the sake of the picture though I think you might have taken the liberty to temper a bit with reality and introduce some warmer colors. That needn't be much, sometimes slight differences in hue or a dominant color applied in very few places can really do the trick. Hope I managed to get my point across and it helps you somehow
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Thank you for a such complete answer even with a visual demonstration. Think you are right with to much difference in warm and cold colours and about an apart segment inside the pic. At least I can`t see it by myself, only can see that something is unsitisfying. Now I`m trying to correct it in Photoshop to see how it`ll work.
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It`s too high word for this. Thank you. )
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Хорошая работа. Притягивающий мрачноватый вид, но это все лирика.
Очень хорошая работа.
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Спасибо! Писала, пока мне читали мрачноватое фэнтези. Ну и тема специфическая, конечно.
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Да, мало кто СИЗО рисует.
Они все "немного" мрачноватые.
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This is a really amazing. I can't do detail like this using water colour. O_O
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It`s a bit too dry painted. But I tried.
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You're welcome. Keep it up, please!
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