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oliviacolomar β€” flicker flame
#flame #love #mirror #romance #sad #unrequited
Published: 2016-06-02 20:23:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1526; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 0
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Description you are so delicately edged.
midblue spring, candlelight whitewash;
i bet your face would look good
behind the flame-
on the other side
of this godforsaken
cracked mirror,
where i am.
where
i
am,
grasping at the flicker
only to get singed



and recoil into darkness
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Comments: 30

AcrylicHeart [2016-09-14 04:27:39 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely gorgeous and speaks to a really deep level of all of our hearts in one way or another, I'd like to think.

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oliviacolomar In reply to AcrylicHeart [2016-09-14 04:33:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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AcrylicHeart In reply to oliviacolomar [2016-09-14 04:36:53 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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angelserum [2016-07-04 21:47:33 +0000 UTC]

well done. i adore the title of this one: the alliteration and just how fun it is to say it, i suppose. i adore the second line, and the enjambment of the entire poem. certainly deserving of a dd!

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oliviacolomar In reply to angelserum [2016-07-05 02:45:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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angelserum In reply to oliviacolomar [2016-07-05 02:46:09 +0000 UTC]

you're so welcome!Β 

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peaseblossoms [2016-06-29 23:39:28 +0000 UTC]

CONGRATS IZZI!! im so happy for u AaaAaAAAAAA and also this is fantastic!!!!!!!

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oliviacolomar In reply to peaseblossoms [2016-07-03 23:31:34 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU!! : ) <3

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Smiles9125 [2016-06-26 03:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Claps

My good sir, you have done an amazing job!
(Even if your a girl...cause I have no idea...)

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oliviacolomar In reply to Smiles9125 [2016-07-03 23:31:41 +0000 UTC]

haha, thank you!

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PenguinTranquilizer [2016-06-24 23:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!

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oliviacolomar In reply to PenguinTranquilizer [2016-06-25 01:13:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much!

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PenguinTranquilizer In reply to oliviacolomar [2016-06-25 02:32:12 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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LindArtz [2016-06-24 16:51:25 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on your much deserved DD!

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oliviacolomar In reply to LindArtz [2016-06-25 01:13:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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SenpaiiKoko [2016-06-24 16:43:10 +0000 UTC]

wow.. incredible.

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oliviacolomar In reply to SenpaiiKoko [2016-06-25 01:13:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you dearly!!

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hatecrewertushar666 [2016-06-24 16:39:11 +0000 UTC]

My goodness, so tragically beautiful. Amazing.

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oliviacolomar In reply to hatecrewertushar666 [2016-06-25 01:13:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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LostGryphin [2016-06-24 12:11:33 +0000 UTC]

wow - very powerfulΒ - congrats on the DD

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oliviacolomar In reply to LostGryphin [2016-06-25 01:12:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much!!

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Lintu47 [2016-06-24 11:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!

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oliviacolomar In reply to Lintu47 [2016-06-25 01:12:51 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you!!

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Lintu47 In reply to oliviacolomar [2016-06-25 21:04:34 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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ilyilaice [2016-06-24 07:37:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow.

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oliviacolomar In reply to ilyilaice [2016-06-25 01:12:42 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!!

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moonlit-daydream [2016-06-03 22:46:02 +0000 UTC]

everything about this makes me smile.
from the title to the imagery to the description.

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oliviacolomar In reply to moonlit-daydream [2016-06-03 22:52:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you dearly!

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emsoileau [2016-06-02 21:48:24 +0000 UTC]

for that ending.

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oliviacolomar In reply to emsoileau [2016-06-02 23:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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