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onek1995 — The Plan Is Real

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Published: 2018-11-12 04:20:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1219; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 8
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Description In theory Allison’s thinking was sound…. And flawed.  

Sound in that it was time to refocus on the real task at hand.   Not her sister, not her gym, but the well-being of her gym member.   She was now hellbent on taking that to full task; to get herself between Holly and her foe.  Valerie was going to feel it if it came to that.  

Flawed in that she turned her back on her step sister.   Easily the most violent and biggest person in this room.  She made Allison pay in the form of a double fisted blow square between the shoulder blades.    

“Unnggggghhhhh…..” Allison howled as she stumbled forward, pain radiating from the blow but amazingly kept her feet.   She saw that Valerie had hoisted up in the air ready to slam her back down again.   

Katie had been a master of setting this whole thing up.  She knew Allison would be on edge.  She knew she'd be easy to play to get her distracted.   She knew the last girl was likely her weakest and Allison would do anything to help her.   That last hadn't been exactly true.   The older woman had proven to be more than Valerie or her had expected so The Lioness had to accelerate her plan.  Get involved.  Get Allison away from the ring.   Let Valerie just pummel the lesser wrestler.   It was going well and successful.  Now she could get a win, punish Allison's wrestler, and get in some shots on her sister.   It was beautifully executed.  Allison would be forced to witness the beatdown from the outside as Katie kept her occupied.  It would be a mental defeat as well as a physical one.    

Then a new voice cut through the noise of the match.

“HEY!!! What the fuck is this??!!!!!”
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Comments: 30

RichelleW [2018-11-13 14:01:49 +0000 UTC]

So, I predicted this from the moment Ally went on the offensive.  Am I clairvoyant?  Nope.  You simply made this all obvious to everyone who was not directly involved.  Holly and Allison may have fallen for it in the moment, but the rest of us could see what was coming... just like you wanted us to.

Well planned and well executed.

That said.. no more WWE for you!

So, now... wait.  What's this about a new voice?  Should I be excited, or concerned?  Sounds like I should be excited, but I'll play it conservative and go with worried for now.

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RikkiWrsl In reply to RichelleW [2018-11-15 17:43:04 +0000 UTC]

no, be excited, it's Micko Rumble coming to the rescue with Katrina Macbeth !!!!

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onek1995 In reply to RichelleW [2018-11-15 00:06:27 +0000 UTC]

That's funny.  My whole DA idea was very likely shaped on a WWE mentality formed by years of following along but I freely admit I rarely watch any more.   (Although I do admit I'd love to go to an event.  I imagine it's quite a spectacle.  Lights, lasers, chanting, signs.  Probably a fun couple of hours.)   That said it really didn't enter my mind (at least not consciously I don't think) to form it this way.  For now I'll leave it at that and give a better response after the next update.   

I can only say that I had hoped to conceal the plan for as long as possible and when it happened Allison and Holly wouldn't recognize it until too late.  Seems I've maybe pulled that aspect off.   Now lets just see what happens next.  

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RichelleW In reply to onek1995 [2018-11-15 17:04:31 +0000 UTC]

You concealed this moment just fine until things started to unravel.  After that... it's easy to understand why we were able to see what was happening much better than Allison and Holly did.  Holly for sure.  Wrestling in general is still fairly new to her.  I'm certain she hasn't gotten to the chapter on Down and Dirty Tactics, yet.


As for Ally... there's lots of different ways to look at it, but I see it the way you intended, I think.  She's already emotional about how this whole event has been unfolding.  People are getting hurt on her behalf.  Now, she needs to protect Holly.  That's how she sees her role at this moment.  If she took a second to think things through, she might have been able to see the grander scheme at play.  But those emotions are still very raw and her role is clear, and so she just reacted.


And now we got trouble.  Miles and miles and miles of trouble.

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DixieRamone [2018-11-13 13:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Good question, Oney... and only YOU can answer it!

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onek1995 In reply to DixieRamone [2018-11-14 18:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Its coming.....  someday.

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Wilson-39 [2018-11-12 22:51:29 +0000 UTC]

when this is all over i hope Alison gets her hands on janie or at least some form of pay back

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onek1995 In reply to Wilson-39 [2018-11-13 12:55:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh!  I like the way you think.   Thank you so much for following along, it really is fun to hear people's feedback on the events of the gym as a whole.

Janie has one coming for sure....

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RichelleW In reply to onek1995 [2018-11-13 14:04:05 +0000 UTC]

Like?  No, I LOVE the way Wilson-39 thinks on this!


Janie deserves a world of pain for what she did.

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onek1995 In reply to RichelleW [2018-11-13 15:26:31 +0000 UTC]

Let's win the gym first.... then we will address that business.

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RichelleW In reply to onek1995 [2018-11-14 19:19:23 +0000 UTC]

Sure... we can wait.  But that doesn't mean we can't dream about it while we're doing that waiting.

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onek1995 In reply to RichelleW [2018-11-16 21:15:50 +0000 UTC]

I actually have a half assed scenario for Janie rattling around in my head...

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RichelleW In reply to onek1995 [2018-11-17 00:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Press on, my friend. Everything I've ever done started with a half-assed idea. Some with far less than that!

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onek1995 In reply to RichelleW [2018-11-20 14:55:24 +0000 UTC]

Im a long way from completing this storyline before I worry about the next one!   Im so far behind now....  sometimes that's just how it goes though.  No sense fretting on it!

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RichelleW In reply to onek1995 [2018-11-20 15:11:47 +0000 UTC]

No sense whatsoever (and you can give that grander meaning, if you like! ).


The truth is, you're fine right now.  The fight for the gym storyline is still ongoing.  Yes, it's getting stretched out... but we all know how that goes.  Meanwhile, there's been no massive time gap that you have to fill in.  It's not like you gave us the final scene of a story, then let over a year go by, only to have the next story pick up the very next morning.


That would just be silly.  Who would do a ridiculous thing like that?

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Darkmagician333 [2018-11-12 15:15:38 +0000 UTC]

I love Katie's wicked tactics.
Beating Allison up while making her watch her last wrestler get defeated...

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onek1995 In reply to Darkmagician333 [2018-11-12 18:35:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.   A good heroine needs an equally good villain ... or 2

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Wilson-39 [2018-11-12 12:45:30 +0000 UTC]

I think it could be Laura as her and holly are real good friend's
 

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onek1995 In reply to Wilson-39 [2018-11-12 14:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm... 

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contender1976 [2018-11-12 07:48:51 +0000 UTC]

Yes! God I love a good heel. Great job Onek.

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onek1995 In reply to contender1976 [2018-11-12 14:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.   If I've made Katie hated (or loved for how she acts) then I've accomplished what I set out to do.

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grapefan [2018-11-12 05:39:23 +0000 UTC]

haaaa.........  a new voice!  surprise !   we got someone stepping up!  

putting my money on...........

Stephanie!  

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onek1995 In reply to grapefan [2018-11-12 14:40:30 +0000 UTC]

Nice!   We will see.... once I render it and tell the story that is! 

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grapefan In reply to onek1995 [2018-11-12 23:39:54 +0000 UTC]

I could see someone behind the ring post....  didnt look like Steph....  ;>(

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grapefan In reply to grapefan [2018-11-12 05:40:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm seeing someone...  cant tell who it is though....  ring corner is blocking her.....

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FabledHeroes [2018-11-12 04:30:28 +0000 UTC]

Leona: this is bad 

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onek1995 In reply to FabledHeroes [2018-11-12 14:40:07 +0000 UTC]

Very...

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JjeanPhoenix [2018-11-12 04:22:37 +0000 UTC]

....,

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onek1995 In reply to JjeanPhoenix [2018-11-12 14:40:01 +0000 UTC]

Trouble is brewing!

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JjeanPhoenix In reply to onek1995 [2018-11-12 15:22:43 +0000 UTC]

I noticed..... 😒

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