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If you let me --if you listened-- I would paint the sky orange just for you.

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Today, you are a dreamer with your broken eyes and the heady ecstasy of your smile. I don't know myself from the paper on the wall. I could fall for you. [the way you hold your words to your chest is beautiful.] I could fall for you and you would only look away.


If you knew --if you understood-- baby, I would make these words beautiful like you. Like your dark hair and how it flicks into your eyes. Like the callused poetry of your hands. I would will the sky with my romantic dreams. I would fill my world with glory. I would fill my life with you.


If you touched --if you trusted-- love, I would hold them all away from you. The monsters that haunt your dreams will answer to me. I will hold you through the nights and I will make you safe. Please admit it, love. Please confess you're hurting. Please show me the scars on your wrists, release the tears you've trapped behind your lids.


If you looked --if you cared-- baby, I would clip my wings so I could be with you. In your eyes I would find my own sky and in your arms the pain would fade away. I think it could be perfect. [i think we could be perfect. i wish we could be perfect.] The shudder of your skin and the wind whispering through your hair -- you're more amazing than you would ever imagine. I want you to see this in a mirror someday. I want you to remember this. I want you to remember me.

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if you loved --if you loved me-- babylove, I would paint the sky orange just to see you smile.
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Comments: 26

gothiksquirrel [2010-07-04 14:46:06 +0000 UTC]

well, i already know i'm wrong on this, because i sneaked a peek in the comments.
but i thought that the italics were representing a male. i think it's cause i don't know too many girls that say "baby". /:
oh well. i had a hard time, so don't worry about that.
i really did enjoy this. i liked all the imagery - i always do with you.

quick question. in a lot of your works, you mention painting the sky orange. why orange?
i love orange, and orange skies are lovely. but ... yeah. why?

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oneofthose-rachels In reply to gothiksquirrel [2010-07-07 11:31:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I always love your comments.
Orange? I didn't know I kept on mentioning it in my writing, haha, so I'm not really sure. But orange is my favourite colour and skies are beautiful so I guess that's why it just comes out xD How about you, what's your favourite colour?

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gothiksquirrel In reply to oneofthose-rachels [2010-07-07 23:17:08 +0000 UTC]

it's lovely. [:
uhm, well, probably silver.
but mostly it's because it reflects other colors, too. [:
it's a bit of a loophole.

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Lilahtov [2010-03-18 23:05:03 +0000 UTC]

=]

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oneofthose-rachels In reply to Lilahtov [2010-03-19 09:13:48 +0000 UTC]

<3

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platinummyr [2010-03-03 02:11:16 +0000 UTC]

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oneofthose-rachels In reply to platinummyr [2010-03-05 08:50:47 +0000 UTC]

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Squirrel-23 [2010-03-02 04:22:36 +0000 UTC]

ohmyfuckinggoodness.. o.o

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oneofthose-rachels In reply to Squirrel-23 [2010-03-05 08:50:21 +0000 UTC]

x 3205734-4336

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Squirrel-23 In reply to oneofthose-rachels [2010-03-06 02:12:18 +0000 UTC]

x twiceasmanyasthat

i adore your writing.

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storyofmylife054 [2010-02-27 04:05:45 +0000 UTC]

I think the italic is female, and the regular is male. (:

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oneofthose-rachels In reply to storyofmylife054 [2010-03-05 08:44:07 +0000 UTC]

that's what i thought too (:

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storyofmylife054 In reply to oneofthose-rachels [2010-03-06 04:35:17 +0000 UTC]

(:

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ksmsoccer89 [2010-02-26 18:08:22 +0000 UTC]

i think the italics is a female and the normal font is a male. just my opinion.
but this is a truly beautiful piece. your writing is always so pretty and imaginative. i really admire your talent =]

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oneofthose-rachels In reply to ksmsoccer89 [2010-03-05 08:43:45 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you so much
that means a lot to me.

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ksmsoccer89 In reply to oneofthose-rachels [2010-03-13 22:32:04 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome dear =]

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magnagloriousness [2010-02-26 17:15:10 +0000 UTC]

I would say that the italic is male and the normal type female. It's beautiful.

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oneofthose-rachels In reply to magnagloriousness [2010-03-05 08:42:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you <3

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magnagloriousness In reply to oneofthose-rachels [2010-03-05 20:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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harlequin-x-romance [2010-02-26 16:18:58 +0000 UTC]

would i be right in thinking the italic is a female, and the normal type male?
beautiful piece i think it strikes more of a chord because i can really relate

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oneofthose-rachels In reply to harlequin-x-romance [2010-03-05 08:42:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you
and yes, you're absolutely right. (:

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Ganymede314 [2010-02-26 14:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written, so tender and sincere. Well done!

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oneofthose-rachels In reply to Ganymede314 [2010-02-26 15:14:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much <3

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Solaces [2010-02-26 11:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, beautiful.

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oneofthose-rachels In reply to Solaces [2010-02-26 12:25:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you, beautiful

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Solaces In reply to oneofthose-rachels [2010-02-28 00:17:04 +0000 UTC]

You're just too fantastic for me.

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