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Published: 2011-03-08 09:13:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 6097; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 208
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First draft of the first page of my Susan paper doll. Something about the layout is bothering me...perhaps her name's too low on the page?Related content
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Wow! These are really awesome! I love the detail in all the outfits! I think the designs for the layout are great! The border is beautiful! Would you mind if I make a few suggestions tho? I think maybe you could bring the Susan doll up on the page a little a little more, making her more centered and also move the logo to the right side, and then move the dress a bit lower. Maybe you could make a smaller banner with her name on it and put it right under the "Narnia" logo? I think that might balance things out better. DI hope that made some sense...I confused my self a little!
I think the tabs look, and would work, very well. The tab on the inside of the hair makes perfect sense to me. 
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Whoops, good catch. Yeah, the round tabs are more convenient, but I wonder if it would look less retro...as these are designed as much for looking at as sheets as they are for playing with. I'm trying to keep the retro effect.
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*sneak sneak sneak* Boo!
Ok... I love these, of course!
As a paperdoll collector, I have one complaint, though.
The tab you placed inside the face space of the dress will not work unless you cut a slit between Su's hair and face on the doll.
If you need a stablizer in that area, it really needs to be more in the little corner area of her cheek. What would work even better than a tab-like stabalizer like that would be one of those more round, cheek-like things that you tuck behind the face.
Anywho...I don't know if you'd want to change that, or not, but that's my suggestion.
*snugs teh Fishy*
~Wrosie
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