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Published: 2008-10-17 01:22:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 603; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 3
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Something that turns someone ravenousAn uncontrollable virus
Something snaps in you
And then your soul splits in two
You hunger for another
And you cannot go hide and cover
This virus in you so intertwined
To the devil, your soul is signed
Your mouth curls up in an evil smile
And you attack wickedly, vile
Your friend screams in pain
You want to stop this, but it is all in vain
Tearing at his neck,
You know he will be a terrified wreckΒ Β
The fear of killing him sets in
As his optics grow weak and dim
You want to cry out and stop tearing at his neck
But the virus just has the effect
You pass out, wake up in the morning, not night
Then you stare at your victim with fright
He now bears this horrid virus too
And there is nothing you can do
Will you turn this whole ship into the night time terrors?
Quick quick... find a cure to spare us...
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Comments: 35
Er... in my head. Hahaha...
x///D
I will try to make more soon. It makes me so excited that you like my story.
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lol i dont like it i love it its been stuck in my head ever since i read it lol
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yes in a good way .....(or is it???)lol
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Really! I just whipped that poem up and posted it. >.<
I have been out of the poem gig for a while now. But this just popped out. Probably because It was so close to Halloween and I am writing such a scary fic.
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Creative!
I used to write poems when I was in school but they were generally about unicorns.
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I just whipped it up in 5/6 minutes yesterday. I love making creepy poems.
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I could probally write one if I tried, I just don't often get the peace to do so.
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Aaaah, busy life, ey? I write whenever an idea pops up in my head. Whether it is written down on a napkin, or on the computer in my leisurely time. I find that the spur of the moment works the best. When the emotions you have are fresh and raw, and could be melded into something beutiful.
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Well there's work, collage, I do some of the house work to help mum and shopping too, plus there's that fantasy world of mine I'm always getting ideas for, so I'm drawing and writting alot and then there's my sister who comes to visit with all 3 of her kids at once!
But at the moment it's mostly because I broke a rib a few days ago, so I haven't done much except rest.
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Well, thats a shame. D:
I do far less then you do... the upside is, is that it makes you appreciate your resting times, and times of relaxation. How did you break your rib? If you din't mind me asking. I bet you have already explained it a dozent times.
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I was taking out door pictures of trees and wildlife and I climbed a tree to get a better shot of a red squirrel and it had been raining earlier that morning. As I was climbing back down and had about seven feet more to climb to the ground, I slipped and fell on my side and felt something crack. I had to walk back home and my mum drove me to the ospital and they told me I'd cracked a rib. I was lucky I only cracked one and not all the ones on my left side. But theres nothing they can do, so I just have to take it easy and not go to the gym or bend too much till it heals.
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Do you go to the gym a lot? Are you a gymnastics type of gal? I was when I was little.
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I like to weight train a few times a week(love those barbells) but I mostly do walking and playing around the woods. I'm not a thin built person as I have wide, heavy bones and anyway I like abit of muscle......like wonder woman!
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I don't like girls who look like twigs on a tree. I prefer a girl who actually looks healthy. And I think you fit the bill. Go you! xD
I used to do a lot of karate, three times a week to be precise, but I couldnlt any longer, because my dad all of the sudden said that he couldn't pay for it anymore. I was a blackbelt, but I still had some degrees to earn on that belt. I was kind of mad. I need more excersise now though. X_x
Luckily I live in a very rural area and there is a lot of places to hike, climb, and walk to.
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Sounds like a nice place to live....wish I was there! Scotland of course is certainly not without it's own beauty and wonders. We do have a lovely looking country side and some of the moors and hilly mountainis areas are spectacular! It's just the way the neds behave that spoils it and we don't often watch who comes into the country. Like we just got heaps of Polish imagrints come in looking for work but we got bad ones as well and they make all the good, honest ones look bad through their selfish actions. the goverment needs to shape up in some area around here.
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We have the immigrant problem here too. Namely Mexicans though. But I don't mind as much as my dad does. And Whhhhoooooo boy he does. >_<
He is such a racist and a homophobe. I dont get how he can get by like that.
But yeah it is pretty here... I remember though, when I was a kid, I dreamed of going places like Scotland and Ireland. I still do.
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There's too many people around like that for my liking! ME,I'm not bothered by race, colour or sexual likes and dislikes. We're all people here is what I say. I just say punish the bad guys.
I'd love to visit CA and maybe texas.......even if texans do scare me a little.
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Heheheheh... Does them Texans scare you with thur' wierd accents and metaphors?
xD
Well, if you ever do, we should totally hang out. My Grandma was from Texas.
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Nawww not really....they just remind me of the red sargent from red vs blue. Guy scares the hell out of me!!
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I keep hearing about Red versus Blue. I have never watched it.
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It is very funny and silly, if a touch rude but I do like watching the series now and again. Grif's my fave character. the one in orange armour.
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Ohmigod! This is really eerie! Nice pacing, too! The idea sounds familiar . . . somehow.
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Thank you very much!
Its toe original count dracula type thing. xD
But put in Autobot form. I didn't like my poem as much. I whipped it up in about 5/6 minutes. xD
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I liked the poem because my whole Transformers fanfic is centered around a virus that infected the Matrix and it takes on a life of its own. It even calls itself Void.
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Coooool! I will have to read it some time!
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LOL!! Um, it took a friend of mine a full week of nothing BUT reading to read it all. And she managed to emerge without a frontal lobotomy! LOL I do have some of the shorter works in my gallery, however. Who's your fave character?
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Well, I thought my name would be a dead give away. xD
Well, my main favorites are Prowl, Optimus, Ironhide, and Ratchet.
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LOL uh, it's been my experience that names can be deceiving. And I see here that you're a G1 fan! 
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X_x
I am a severe Autobot girl. I only like teh autobots. Except for Blitzbabe, he is the exception. And yes, nothing can beat G1. And all of their wonderful corny, plot hole filled joyous episodes! xD
I kind of actually like Rodimus, but my friends would probably kill me if I said so, seeing his he wiped out almost everyone in the old movie with his horrible leadership. But looking at it, he really was just thrown into the leadership without any experience, so I do not blame him, he did the best he could.
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I think people who 'dis' Rodimus really dont' take the time to think about the character. Coversely (on the other hand) there are people who really dislike Optimus but more often than not, they are taking Optimus Prime at face value. they see the character only as he is represented on the TV show or in the comics, not as the complex individual who's been through hell. There is no glory in being an Autobot leader, only pain and heartbreak.
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EXACTLY!! I love you.
You aren't one of the stupid ones!
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