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OptimusXStarscream — Dreams pt4
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shut up Optimus! you know you want it!
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Color it, please! And show us a kiss!! A good one! Mmmmhmmm...a kiss...
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Hopefully XD
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Oooh, so many ideas, so devious, and yes you should color it.
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Interesting!!
Mmm, it should be colored and most of all, Optimus should interface the slag out of Screamer
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Lmao! "I don't think we thought this through." No, really Optimus? Was it after your ememy TOOK YOU FLYING or after he STARTED GETTING FRISKY? lol
I would love to see this colored! It's so hard for me to draw the Animated version of the robots so I applaud your work ethic.
Can't wait for the next!
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it would be cool to see this in color and to see what happens nexted
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What's so awwwww O_O
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YES I want it coloured! 83
Can we have some full-body flight scenes? Pleeeeeeeeeease? ;3; And ends in interface like any and all good doujin. If you want my two penneth. <33333
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Of course there's gonna be interacing and full body shall be done and colours yesssssh! thank you very much
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If you're writing a comic based around the idea of the majesty and liberty of flight, you should, in my humble opinion, try your best to convey that to the reader with art. Doujin have an admirable way of conveying their ideas and meanings in pictures rather than words, speaking directly to the reader with the imagery. (I'm working on a set of free-fall Seeker sketches right now so this subject is somewhat dear to my spark 
Personally, I would suggest having two climaxes of plot, one in a flight scene and the second in a sex scene. But maybe you already have it planned out.
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Confession to make...I'm totally stuck could you please help I have an idea of like Screamer talking about these dreams he's been having but he's starting to believe that they're not just dreams but pasts of an alternate universe then tends to link to him when he recharges and and in them they're flying together.
(meaning I'll be adding in some pics of armada >_< even though they're bitches to draw and some gen one pics).
And in them he's asking Prime to join him and take control of the universe, Op is shocked by this seeing as he's dreamt this to but doesn't say anything but "Are you asking me to?"
SS doesn't answer but simply kisses him then of course that leads to way load of passion
and Screamer asks during interfacing.
Which I'll have three pics of Primes answer
Gen one answers No Amrada MAybe
TFA Prime being so young and sick of Sentinal and no one giving him the proper respect he knows he deserves smiles and says Yes then I'll probably have a pic of him and SS ruling the world MWHAAAAAA ..... ummmm yeah what do you think of that idea >_<
and he tells him that it might be telling him th
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imho, I think it would be best to keep it to TFA - the lovely thing about TFA is how personal and individual it is, and I think that branching into other continuities would ruin that.
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Okay ^_^ but what should I do next just a little idea will help and I'll credit you as well
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Hmm. Well, the panel you've ended on is *begging* for a kiss. And perhaps mid-air interfacing?
I think it depends a lot on what tone you want it to take. Angsty, you could have say... Starscream saying he'll never do it again unless Optimus gives him... maybe the allspark fragments or something. And naturally Optimus does the honourable thing. Or you could just have it as a sweet romance sort of thing, Starscream drops Optimus back and flies off, something touching happens... I don't know, it depends how long you want it to go on for?
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Mmmh, not sure. I'd rather would have it stay in the Animated universe, but only because I can't remember much of Armada and rather like this universe. In the end, it's up to you.^^
Besides, the way SS looks it's like he wants straight going to the "having fun with each other"-point - especially his part in it.
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Like in part 2, you'd also better edit what is spoken and thought in the bubbles because there are some mistakes (like in the first panel: "what" has to be capitalized after the exclamation mark) and the sentences are a bit hard to read.
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Okay thank you again for pointing out other mistakes,
but these pages aren't finished, I probably would have noticed that W after Wait! needed a capital, because just like the question mark they almost serve the same purpose as a full stop.
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No problem, I'm glad I can help.
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