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Published: 2011-02-24 09:18:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I'm the loser who want to win
I'm the clown who want to be the king
I'm the silent who want to break the crowd
I'm the pebble who want to turn into a diamond
I'm the prisoner who want to be free
I'm the deaf who want to make the world listen to sound
Thus,
I run for my first step
I shout so you can hear me
I grab the light so you can see me
I rip the curtain to stop hiding
I open every door
I step upon every ground

Right now,
I'm moving
to an ending,to the new beginning
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Comments: 8

orjuwani [2011-04-05 09:29:30 +0000 UTC]

You write rarely..what a shame..

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orasama In reply to orjuwani [2011-04-07 11:26:00 +0000 UTC]

really?i don't think writing is my ability since i'm not really good at word, i think this one is not bad because i was wrote it in writing mood

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orjuwani In reply to orasama [2011-04-11 09:38:23 +0000 UTC]

I want more of the "Writing mood" ^^ this one sounded terrific. and i really really liked it.

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orasama In reply to orjuwani [2011-04-11 13:16:14 +0000 UTC]

tons of thanks i hope i can gain my 'writing mood' soon

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toffie-tiger [2011-02-24 22:12:08 +0000 UTC]

wow poetry too! and in english! and it rymes ;D well done ms talented lol ^_^
poem is awsome! you can do well on your thesis ;D

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orasama In reply to toffie-tiger [2011-02-25 02:40:46 +0000 UTC]

huahahahaha you made my head grows 100 times bigger ahahahaha i even didn't realize if it's rhymes well thanks!i hope so

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toffie-tiger In reply to orasama [2011-02-25 19:59:49 +0000 UTC]

ahahah wow you didnt even try to make it ryme O.O genouse in disguise lol

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orasama In reply to toffie-tiger [2011-02-26 13:08:03 +0000 UTC]

ahahahahaha that's me (jkd) thanks anyway

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