Comments: 16
PsiRadish [2007-03-15 04:51:00 +0000 UTC]
Potentially a very interesting story, but one technical problem: by the time they have a funeral her brain would have already been rotting in her skull for probably a few days. And I think just an hour of "death" is enough to cause irreparable brain damage.
But that aside, the rest is within the realm of believability for typical over-the-top science fiction.
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sophrosune [2007-01-23 14:03:45 +0000 UTC]
Err... So I guess Hotaru's happy that she's alive again?
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nathaniel2k [2007-01-23 10:46:14 +0000 UTC]
did you come with the story or can i buy it somewhere cos i luv the sound of it
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OrbitalWings In reply to nathaniel2k [2007-01-26 18:29:37 +0000 UTC]
Unfortunately it's entirely my own creation - you'll just have to wait for me to write it. Shame really, I'd like to read it too...
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nathaniel2k In reply to OrbitalWings [2007-01-27 09:51:25 +0000 UTC]
well even if it takes years i will read it... ill be a famous games designer
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junosunderland [2007-01-23 07:11:10 +0000 UTC]
Wow, pretty nice ^^ Lovely... assets she has too x3 The green glow is indeed very well done, it's very pretty. The story also sounds pretty cool, and don't worry about it sounding simplistic, they all do until they're written/drawn ^^ And yes, yuri, I'm so glad to see soemone who does a lot of it, it's so rare to find <3 Great job, look forward to seeing more!
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shanejayell [2007-01-23 03:22:59 +0000 UTC]
Not bad. Dark fic or romance, tho?
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OrbitalWings In reply to shanejayell [2007-01-26 18:28:37 +0000 UTC]
Both in fact. And for some reason I only just made the connection between you on DA and you on FF.net - I must say I'm quite honoured to have the writer of Third Genesis commenting on my work.........and damn I sound like a raving fan *slaps self* Right, I think I'm okay now...
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Akihabaragirl [2007-01-22 23:38:43 +0000 UTC]
i like the green glow OwO
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Akihabaragirl [2007-01-22 23:38:13 +0000 UTC]
i like the green glow OwO
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Biohazard-Kitty [2007-01-22 21:07:58 +0000 UTC]
Hrm... interesting. Good job on the coloring.
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mikeytron [2007-01-22 21:01:13 +0000 UTC]
Wicked man, lovin it, awesome background
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