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Published: 2007-12-02 14:44:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1245; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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Description This took a while today but passed the time.
I was listening to Coming Undone by Korn and the lyrics made me want to do the souls in her scythe escaping (don't think it happens in the story yet though.) after listening carefully to the lyrics...
Wanted to go for something different to usual.
Ai again, now with comfirmed information for those who don't know much about her.

Name: Ai
Age Unknown, looks about 13 or 14
Likes Candy and snacks, particularly chocolate pocky, Plushies and her scythe.
Dislikes: Arrogance, liars.

WARNING: NEXT PART IS LONG, PLEASE SKIP IF YOU DON'T WANT TO READ.
There was a clan of people in the underworld who were put at peace. The clan got along with one another, but they were gifted. They could use powers and talk to spirits. Even capable of seeing into the future in some cases. But they were not bad demons. All were, apart from one girl. She was a half-demon, her genes having traces of a normal human in as well. She was usually accepted among the other demons, maybye the occasional joke about her being part human. Until one day, an evil aura took over the underworld, possessing any demon it could grab. Soon enough, Ai's clan was not at peace. There was fighting and nobody was who they used to be. Except for the half demon. The clan was taken over by several days before the leader had told Ai the charm on her scythe was capable of saving their world- The leader knew this evil was coming, but had to keep a low profile. Once Ai was told that her loved ones were soon to turn against her, she had known she had no choice.


Ai left to the normal world, but soon enough they sent other demons and monsters out to get her. Having no choice, she had to fight them, but she found the charm on her scythe could absorb and store any souls defeated- only the evil ones. She can purify simple demons, but some are too powerful for her yet to purify, but for the time-being, they have to stay under her control, stored away in the charm ("soul taker") on her scythe. The more Soul Concentration (amount of souls stored in the soul catcher) the stronger her scythe becomes, and of course the stronger her scythe is, the more defence she has against enemies. Her aim is to rid the world of the demons after her, and finally to put an end to the dark energy possessing her clan. Ai is the only human who can resist the energy because she is only half demon and not full, meaning the evil did not affect her.
END LONG BIO TYPE BACKSTORY.

Still working on her background.

Anyway, I don't know whether or not I will be able to keep this up, I need to check something first...:/

Art and character (C) Moonlight-Echidna 2007
Lineart was a sketch.
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Comments: 55

oreokeki In reply to ??? [2007-12-16 20:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Um...thanks? XD
Guess it is...

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gdpr-4925904 [2007-12-08 02:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Hah I love that song too,and Ive been planning to do a pic with Oddball with this song...cos everytime I here the song I instantly think of him.

Anyways great pic! I love her expression and how you did her hair in pigtails.And love all the crazy weird creatures in the background too

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oreokeki In reply to gdpr-4925904 [2007-12-10 19:15:04 +0000 UTC]

Awesoume! and I'd love to see if you do. :3

Thank you so much! <3

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luckymanga13 [2007-12-07 20:31:51 +0000 UTC]

you should do a pic with this song[link] do u know it

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oreokeki In reply to luckymanga13 [2007-12-08 09:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Indeed I do! I love that song. ^^ Maybye just maybye if i get time I will.

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Alet-Maon [2007-12-05 18:47:25 +0000 UTC]

That's cute. Very colorful.

Somehow your style really, really reminds me of how my younger sister draws.

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oreokeki In reply to Alet-Maon [2007-12-06 19:21:23 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you much! ^^

and does it? I wouldn't mind seeing her art sometime. :3

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Alet-Maon In reply to oreokeki [2007-12-06 19:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Her deviant art account is:
[link]
..Although what she has in her gallery right now isn't quite what your style reminds me of. It's mostly pencil drawings she hasn't scanned. But there is this certain feeling I get. A bit hard to explain.

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fishtankbabe [2007-12-04 23:10:50 +0000 UTC]

Very cool, the girl looks cute. Some of the ghosts are kinda cute too lol.

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oreokeki In reply to fishtankbabe [2007-12-05 17:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
and your avatar is cute. <3

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EvilLizard [2007-12-04 21:30:07 +0000 UTC]

oooh interesting O.O

I love the colors you used ^___^

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oreokeki In reply to EvilLizard [2007-12-05 17:42:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Glad you like. ^^

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BloodlustBakura [2007-12-04 20:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Colorful demons behind her...nice!!

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oreokeki In reply to BloodlustBakura [2007-12-05 17:42:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! hehe, anything rainbowy is instant win. <3

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BloodlustBakura In reply to oreokeki [2007-12-05 17:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Yes it is!!

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Mattissimo [2007-12-03 21:38:20 +0000 UTC]

i love it!! she looks very cool and the souls have so much personality!!!

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oreokeki In reply to Mattissimo [2007-12-04 19:14:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much!

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CassiNova500 [2007-12-03 19:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Oooh! Pretty colors! I love her expression. Faved!

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oreokeki In reply to CassiNova500 [2007-12-04 19:16:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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CassiNova500 In reply to oreokeki [2007-12-04 20:58:25 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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Deamond-89 [2007-12-03 19:28:21 +0000 UTC]

It looks really great!! The ghosts in the bg are awesome!! xD Cool pic, I really like it!! ^^

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oreokeki In reply to Deamond-89 [2007-12-04 19:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I am glad you like it ^^

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Daemon107 [2007-12-03 08:21:17 +0000 UTC]

uahah lovely nice style and colors as always good job

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oreokeki In reply to Daemon107 [2007-12-03 19:21:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks as always!

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Dancing-Queen-Yuki [2007-12-02 22:54:00 +0000 UTC]

Wow Moonie~ I love all of the detail in this. So many colors >w< I love the story too. Its so creative, this is amazing~

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oreokeki In reply to Dancing-Queen-Yuki [2007-12-03 19:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, Yu-yu.

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sakurablossm512 [2007-12-02 22:40:13 +0000 UTC]

oo wow thats really good haha just look at all the colors

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oreokeki In reply to sakurablossm512 [2007-12-03 19:20:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
XD It was supposed to be duller but everything I draw ends up rainbowy in someway

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Pidgeot [2007-12-02 20:37:36 +0000 UTC]

ooo very colorful. I love the different variations of daemons in the background. :3

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oreokeki In reply to Pidgeot [2007-12-03 19:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I try to make them look different XD

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Xorikcin [2007-12-02 19:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Creepy but Cute.

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oreokeki In reply to Xorikcin [2007-12-03 19:20:24 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thanks

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TheSmai [2007-12-02 18:44:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow I really like the story <3 It's brilliant
The picture is fab too C: I adore the colouring.

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oreokeki In reply to TheSmai [2007-12-03 19:20:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^

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AetherealBunny [2007-12-02 18:29:06 +0000 UTC]

My my, this is great work, Moonie.

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oreokeki In reply to AetherealBunny [2007-12-03 19:19:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much. ^^

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AetherealBunny In reply to oreokeki [2007-12-03 22:36:50 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Helsaabi [2007-12-02 16:50:59 +0000 UTC]

great work ^^

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oreokeki In reply to Helsaabi [2007-12-03 19:19:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Helsaabi In reply to oreokeki [2007-12-03 20:06:44 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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CoolBlueSonic [2007-12-02 16:50:38 +0000 UTC]

The idea is great

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oreokeki In reply to CoolBlueSonic [2007-12-03 19:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks CBS. =3

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Shadow-Element [2007-12-02 16:41:05 +0000 UTC]

wow, awesome OwO, she looks realy scary and the ghosts behind her to, some slightly look like chao's 👍: 0 ⏩: 1

oreokeki In reply to Shadow-Element [2007-12-03 19:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! and yeah lol, I guess a couple do, my friend said that today XD

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Hanzzy21 [2007-12-02 16:17:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow <3 She looks really nice! I love the shading <3
I love all the souls <3

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oreokeki In reply to Hanzzy21 [2007-12-02 16:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Hanzzy! :3

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Faerie-s [2007-12-02 16:13:15 +0000 UTC]

awww, she so cute! I love the strange monster thingys in the bg ^^

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oreokeki In reply to Faerie-s [2007-12-02 16:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much. :3 Yeah, they're souls that take shape of familiar forms. Some of them have resemblence to animals.

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Faerie-s In reply to oreokeki [2007-12-02 16:52:24 +0000 UTC]

oooo, cool ^^

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Kiira-Chan92 [2007-12-02 14:55:19 +0000 UTC]

Nice story idea. =3

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