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Hey there! Thank you for submitting to for feedback!
The cropping is almost spot on. Since you submitted for feedback I do have a/a few suggestion(s) for you:
- The cropping is just a tad too far to the left (I'm picky about these things, don't take it personally hahaha), but aside from that, I might suggest maybe getting rid of the plant to the right as it's a little distracting. If possible.
- Color is always something I suggest. Adding a bit of vibrance or playing with selective colors would make the photo pop more.
I love how the swans are in this photo as well; a nicely formed photograph. I hope this helps, and if you have questions, please ask!
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Hello! After reading you suggestions I gave them a try and resubmitted to show the difference.
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Merci chère amie
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Thanks for taking your time for this. It is food for thought indeed. I will definitely have another look...
I had thought abiut blotting out the vegetation but then I was looking for some imperfection
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