Comments: 25
StudioMikarts [2012-04-22 08:18:30 +0000 UTC]
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This piece works well both as a statement about the original artist and about many artists in general. The pure color flowing from the Earth-like iris of the eye in the top half is a beautiful visual metaphor for the world of an artist who works with color or paint. The eye is also an interesting subject because it here acts as both mirror and window. The eye is a mirror for the artist to whom it belongs and it is a window for the viewer to see the world of that artist.
The top half of this piece is wonderfully well-rendered. The shading around the eye works well to place it firmly within the dark background by gently fading into the black surrounding it. There is lots of detail and decoration in the stylized eye, making it both a believable and unique depiction. A faint glow from the color pouring down was a good decision by the artist; it gives the image a further dash of fantasy and mystery, almost seeming like a spiritual element.
The lower half of this piece doesn't fit as well as it could with the finely detailed and well-worked eye above. The message seems to be that the artist, as a white outline without detail, is a blank canvas ready to be created and ready to create with the colors flowing from above. Because the eye above is so incredibly detailed, the striking contrast with the figure below makes the lower half of the image seem unfinished or hurried. The top and bottom halves of this piece could easily be reconciled in many ways, one of which would be to fill in the lower figure with white and paint the colors from the eye dripping down the figure's left arm, creating form and volume wherever the color touches. The other hand could also be 'fleshed out' by the color covering it.
The color spouting from the lower figure's brush seems to be a representation of the artist's creativity or artistic endeavors or goals. As it is, the color has no destination or target, turning the metaphor a bit sour. This could be remedied by providing a subject on which the color is landing, such as a canvas or even another blank figure. Another remedy for the aimless color could be to crop the right side of the image, letting the eye at the top become centered and the color lead off the side of piece, as the color at the bottom does.
Overall, this piece is divided between existence as a beautiful, detailed depiction of symbolic imagery and as an idea waiting for more work on composition and execution. Unifying and bringing it into full-bloom looks to be easily reachable with some effort.
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OryxPixie In reply to HisGeenky [2012-04-21 20:26:51 +0000 UTC]
thank you :} Its really good to have honest feedback!
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HisGeenky In reply to OryxPixie [2012-04-21 20:32:10 +0000 UTC]
Isn't it? I know the feeling, thank you for yours as well. I know that when it comes to Critiques some people seem afraid to point out anything that they feel could be adjusted.
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indybrito23 [2012-06-04 18:26:08 +0000 UTC]
impacting
O.O
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stitched-up-heart [2012-04-28 23:45:30 +0000 UTC]
Wow. This is so beautiful. It may be a bit overused, (the whole "eye" concept I mean), but you give it a fresh new vibe. The detail of the Earth inside the iris, and then the person below catching the rainbow liquid that falls... MAGNIFICENT! Might I ask what program(s) you used for this?
~Stitchy
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OryxPixie In reply to stitched-up-heart [2012-04-28 23:48:09 +0000 UTC]
I used paint tool SAI, and thanks so much, it means a lot :}
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stitched-up-heart In reply to OryxPixie [2012-05-02 00:10:42 +0000 UTC]
No problem- and thanks for telling me what program you use. (Lucky for me i have Paint Tool SAI) ^w^
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Saviroosje [2012-04-23 20:11:12 +0000 UTC]
lovely work. I really like the concept! The eye look real good!
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ImInMyDreams [2012-04-23 17:05:07 +0000 UTC]
This is really great, I love the rainbow colours in it!
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OryxPixie In reply to Sunnada [2012-04-22 19:18:51 +0000 UTC]
haha yep it is a planet :}
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Sunnada In reply to OryxPixie [2012-04-22 21:27:01 +0000 UTC]
:3 well you did a great job then xD
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Hearts-Are-Cold [2012-04-21 20:25:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, I really like this one. It's quite an interesting piece. Maybe it's just me, but I don't think I've ever seen something like this. It's a very cool idea. All the colors go together very well, and the image does a good job of directing the eye.
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naturediva99 [2012-04-09 21:27:43 +0000 UTC]
sooooooooooo COOL i LOVE thiiiiiiiis
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