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KidgellB [2014-06-15 16:34:21 +0000 UTC]
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Overall, I would like to start by saying this is an excellent effort, with a good, clear objective. However, there are points that could be improved.
To make it more realistic, I feel that you could add some droplets of rain onto the image surface, which would give the illusion that the screen is wet. Also, So lighting in the background would also add to the effect of the image, helping it to stand out.
The horse, on the other hand, is pretty much perfect, However, I suggest toning the spots brightness down a little more, which would help to make the image seem a little more realistic.
As well as that, I think that the clouds at the very top of the image could be given some more detail, as right now it seems to be quite basic in and around that area. However, As I already said, overall I really like this piece, and hope to see more like this from you soon.
Regards,
KidgellB
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ZoraLena [2014-06-09 10:43:27 +0000 UTC]
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I love everything about this, the coloring, the shades, the expression... Although if I can give you a tip; soften up on the pink marks on the horse's back. If they were a softer tone of pink, I think they'd come over as more realistic, life like markings e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
Furthermore, I love how you integreted the horse into the sea, they fit perfectly. The front of the sea could have been alittle darker I think, but that's more of a taste then a critique I would say e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Apart from that I have absolutely nothing to criticise you on, so well done!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Hope you appreciate this, and keep it up! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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ARGENTICIDE [2014-06-05 17:29:35 +0000 UTC]
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The shading on this is excellent! Although my style deviates away from a softer shading technique, the shadows and highlights are in excellent for ere. I might recommend sharpening them in some places, however, as it can make parts of the body look soft/squishy where they are not. An example would be on the horse's jaw, which to me looks a little more voluptuous than most horses' cheeks are The shading on the swan is excellent! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
While I don't believe you need to edit the raindrop splashes (they look fine to me!) I would recommend adding some light mist over the horse's haunches and in the background to really tie together the rain, horse, swan, and background. I find a good technique for mist is t use a soft brush and then gaussian blur is a bit to get rid of your brush strokes.
Finally, while the colors match really well together, I feel like the horse's marking look like they're floating about the horse's back. The markings don't have any of the shading that the body does, so they look out of place here. Compared to the light blue/silver/white on the legs and underbelly, the colors of the markings and just much too white and bright for the setting of the piece. If you move the shading level up over the markings, this would be a really easy fix c:
Thank you for submitting! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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osowyn In reply to ARGENTICIDE [2014-06-05 18:01:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! I'll get right on that and try and fix those and let you know! c: I like to do everything I can to produce the upmost quality of art I can <3
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ARGENTICIDE In reply to osowyn [2014-06-05 18:34:24 +0000 UTC]
hey, no problem and no rush!! i'm glad you found the feedback useful <3
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Idhrill [2014-07-09 16:35:38 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful!
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LucieG-Stock [2014-06-12 22:45:18 +0000 UTC]
I love this, the markings on the horse, the swan, really beautiful work!
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osowyn In reply to LucieG-Stock [2014-06-14 00:19:42 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much! c:
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osowyn In reply to Lucrexcia [2014-06-11 21:24:03 +0000 UTC]
thank you! c:
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frenziiied [2014-06-07 00:24:02 +0000 UTC]
so
this is perfect
you magician
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osowyn In reply to frenziiied [2014-06-07 01:38:45 +0000 UTC]
you're perfect
you magician
thanks :')
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HevonenStudios [2014-06-06 22:39:52 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful!!
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Fforestwolf [2014-06-05 18:22:23 +0000 UTC]
The markings look like the algae in a pond I saw! Lol!
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osowyn In reply to Fforestwolf [2014-06-05 18:31:09 +0000 UTC]
I thought algae was green... lol
thanks? x'D
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elixir-studios In reply to osowyn [2014-06-05 18:06:42 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait to start on my manip but I am too lazy to cut the horse
out cause i just wanna work on hair but I can not find any of my friends that want to help me xD
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osowyn In reply to elixir-studios [2014-06-05 18:22:29 +0000 UTC]
bahaha x'D well I'm the opposite, I like cutting/eyes/repainting but loathe practicing hair XD
i'll cut it out for you if you want c:
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suuslovertje [2014-06-05 12:53:58 +0000 UTC]
thanks for using the stock! i have added it to my group: Livine, but i don't see credits???????
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osowyn In reply to suuslovertje [2014-06-05 18:03:47 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome! oh? Well I used the removal stock, it should be under horse I think in the description, it's linked. Let me know if you find it! c:
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Lullivy [2014-06-05 10:34:07 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing!!!!
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