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TenderlySharp [2010-04-12 01:29:55 +0000 UTC]
frightening and beautiful
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NITROS124 [2009-09-19 02:16:54 +0000 UTC]
EPIC WIN!
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Enavi [2009-07-23 22:34:41 +0000 UTC]
I looks'a'tight!! XD
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Otacon144 In reply to Enavi [2009-07-24 09:22:04 +0000 UTC]
(a deep, baleful moan, not quite the grinding of metal, not quite a vocalization, and the distant sound of clanking and steam hissing...)
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Enavi In reply to Otacon144 [2009-07-27 18:18:27 +0000 UTC]
lol
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Solomon7589 [2009-07-19 17:56:16 +0000 UTC]
I agree with Jared, to much black in my opinion. Even if it is night time. I like the shot though.
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Solomon7589 In reply to Otacon144 [2009-07-20 03:03:55 +0000 UTC]
I see, they looked like black to me. Maybe lighten them a bit.
*shrug*
Just a suggestion, feel free to disregard.
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JaredGrammer [2009-07-19 16:20:17 +0000 UTC]
Give the robot the mind of a child, not literally thou. Just a suggestion.
I think you could push the blue and red lighting more, giving him more of a silhouette. Don't be afraid to draw the two out, give them basic colors, the shade and light them on separate layers to see what you get.
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Otacon144 In reply to JaredGrammer [2009-07-19 21:33:20 +0000 UTC]
In a way, it does have a child's mind. It's very docile, and it's made to follow orders or work as a part of a "Hive-Mind" - it can't function on its own, which is why it starts following him.
I did this without linework - just blocking in colors. I wanted to keep it simple, and I think if I'd gone into how the light from the eyes reflects off of the pipes and dents and everything on the head, it would have taken away from the effect I was looking for. I want the floodlight and the eyes to be the main focus on the robot.
I also didn't want to reveal its exact shape, because the floodlight is so bright, it creates a hard silhouette on the human. I thought it'd be an interesting balance to have a strong one and an ambiguous one.
Granted, You probably have a point - there isn't any real light coming from the background...
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JaredGrammer In reply to Otacon144 [2009-07-19 22:16:09 +0000 UTC]
Yea, I just think you could go farther, and could add more detail, your not going to reveal too much info.
Or just a cool thought that I'd like to see, is the light coming from the ground, like a flare or a knocked over flood light, just to reveal him but not the guy, to create an ominous feeling.
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WILIZIN [2009-07-19 06:59:21 +0000 UTC]
Sweeeeeeet.
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Otacon144 In reply to WILIZIN [2009-07-19 07:02:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much.
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