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Published: 2010-01-28 00:15:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1157; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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2nd Lt. Harumi 'Sunny' Sanemoto. Acting commander of 1st Platoon of Task Force 14-1.Character for my planned story. She wear Adaptive Combat Suit, a same kind like those 'Crysis Suits'.
Rifle are based from Kinetic Rifle component from cancelled XM-29 OICW assault rifle. AHndgun ae based from Glock Pistol.
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She's on our team?
Well, we're officially fucked.
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Lieutenant can be very young, as young as mid-20's, since they don't have to get through from private rank to be lieutenant. You passed officer academy, you become lieutenant.
But maybe it also because my drawing style.
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Hi, I am Muramasa91, one of the critics from the OC-maniac's critic crew! Allow me to critic on your works please.Although there isn't much time for me to make a comment, but I gurantee it'll be good! And i'll try my best to reduce the harshness~
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Well, go on.
More critiques more better for me to find my fault.
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You know what dude? You made me feel like playing Dawn of War soulstorm after seeing this pic. Reminds me of the Sisters of Battle!
Screw the harsh criticism! I like how this went. Perhaps fog and mist would show how she is going through in the battle, since this is a tactical battle! Wooooh, and God, how much i love those battles!
Small hands, yes, i know. But let me tell you, do not let those faults hinder your passion for drawing more special suits! Here are some examples to boost further your passion, my brother!
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For the Emperor, fight with vigilance, and do not let your insecurity hinder your brave spirit! Good job, comrade!
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Hi there, I'm one of the critique crew of #the-OC-maniac ^^
Okay, here goes the crit.
I personally think that drawing robotic (or mecha, some would call) pictures is not easy...but you did it nicely with the design of her outfit. I also love how you put a lot of details into it, but not overdoing it, which makes everything looks just right. The gun is also a nice addition to the pic, and you even draw the details of the gun neatly too. Simply say, this is pretty good.
If I can give an advice for you, though, please re-size her hands a bit. Just a bit. I understand the concept of anime drawing, where the head is drawn comsiderably larger than the other body parts, since I myself prefers anime style of drawing more than everything else. But I think it won't hurt to make her hands and arms a little bigger to match the proportions of her body. And some people probably won't notice, but her right fingers can use some fixing too. Other than that, you did a good job on this.
Have a nice day
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my,now thats quite interesting character..a moe girl in a battle armor,I like it..
okay for the drawing though,the only thing I have to pinpint her is her hands,they look so small..and somehow look shorter than it should've been(probably more because of how she hold the gun though,but still look a bit weird)
ah yes,I think its her palm that look to small..but thats all really..keep up the good work..
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wow, jauh lebih bagus dibanding sebelumnya.
somehow saya seperti mau bilang bahwa anda telah menemukan"M. Adhi Setiadi" Style.
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hahaha...
style udah ada, tinggal niatnya aja dicari wkwkwkwk
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selamat mencari "niat" sekarang
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Aaa..!!!
Kakkoi-desuuuu!!!
I like her outfit very much^^
Umm,btw,please visit my gallery if you wanna^^
Thanks a lot for your attention..
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