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outcast910 — A Sense of Touch

Published: 2006-05-11 16:39:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description A sense of horror...it is called fear
A sense of passion...it is called love
But your light and tasteful touch...it has no name
Your pale and radient hands they follow track my every move
Your pale and radient hands they trace my very skin
That touch of yours like acid painted delight
A sting that I once endured and thought as life
Tis not of what I thought or dared
Your touch so light, like winding vines ridden of thorns
I cannot indure what you obesses
The skin you marred, like broken glass
Woven of deceit and shadowed lies
Gaze on what you have created
Every touch of yours my eyes deny
These hands of mine are damned to know
They gaze upon where you once resided
No longer do you belong, but why do I still long
They cut so deep attempting to remove scars straight through
Deeper and deeper breaking skin, eradicating every evidence of you
Digging down, leaving crators in what once skin
Sacrifing all to erase the memories
How much more can I with-stand
I dare you not to cause more tamed alure
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Comments: 18

Docco [2006-06-19 00:46:36 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love the intro, great use of imagery and I love the concept too. Nice work again I hope I get time to read more, keep it up though

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outcast910 In reply to Docco [2006-06-19 05:50:54 +0000 UTC]

I will thanks alot

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Docco In reply to outcast910 [2006-06-20 08:05:20 +0000 UTC]

No problemo senorita

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outcast910 In reply to Docco [2006-06-20 21:39:46 +0000 UTC]

gracies senor,

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Docco In reply to outcast910 [2006-06-21 15:36:43 +0000 UTC]

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outcast910 In reply to Docco [2006-06-22 00:14:15 +0000 UTC]

lol

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LostTomorrows [2006-05-15 04:36:07 +0000 UTC]

You should read my "Lost Luggage" poem. The premise and imagery of this poem is not NOT similar to it.
Well written, except the first two lines didn't really draw me in well.

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outcast910 In reply to LostTomorrows [2006-05-15 11:47:11 +0000 UTC]

I will get to read your stuff when I get the chance...thanks

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onewithdarkness [2006-05-13 18:07:53 +0000 UTC]

beautiful, the rhythm of the poem flows like water in a stream.
great poem.
total faving this.

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outcast910 In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-05-15 11:48:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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onewithdarkness In reply to outcast910 [2006-05-20 22:54:27 +0000 UTC]

yw

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outcast910 In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-05-21 03:50:35 +0000 UTC]

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onewithdarkness In reply to outcast910 [2006-05-22 00:24:54 +0000 UTC]

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Torvayn [2006-05-12 10:28:24 +0000 UTC]

I like it... You've touched on how I've felt lately.

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outcast910 In reply to Torvayn [2006-05-12 16:32:52 +0000 UTC]

Im glad I could describe more than just me

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Chaotic-Canine [2006-05-11 17:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Awesome imagery! Very well handled! Good job...

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outcast910 In reply to Chaotic-Canine [2006-05-12 11:52:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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Chaotic-Canine In reply to outcast910 [2006-05-12 17:30:28 +0000 UTC]

No prob! ^_^

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