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outcast910 In reply to Docco [2006-06-19 05:50:54 +0000 UTC]
I will thanks alot
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Docco In reply to outcast910 [2006-06-20 08:05:20 +0000 UTC]
No problemo senorita
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outcast910 In reply to Docco [2006-06-20 21:39:46 +0000 UTC]
gracies senor,
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LostTomorrows [2006-05-15 04:36:07 +0000 UTC]
You should read my "Lost Luggage" poem. The premise and imagery of this poem is not NOT similar to it.
Well written, except the first two lines didn't really draw me in well.
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outcast910 In reply to LostTomorrows [2006-05-15 11:47:11 +0000 UTC]
I will get to read your stuff when I get the chance...thanks
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onewithdarkness [2006-05-13 18:07:53 +0000 UTC]
beautiful, the rhythm of the poem flows like water in a stream.
great poem.
total faving this.
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