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Published: 2006-05-19 16:02:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description Dormant lies of supposed allies
Severed ties make brittle minds
No place to fall back upon
With cautious strides on lucid plates of ice
Breaking through, the sting of glassy shards touch your lips
Gazing back at one last fragment of fading light
Giving up…I beg you not
You’ve got an angel looking down
Her tears fall free
Creating the rain that stains your face
I cannot make you feel, but lend a hand is in my part
No angel am I, nor devil do I play
I owe you this, a helping hand
Reaching out in hopes you understand
Take my hand, I’ll offer all I have to give
I’m not asking to take me as a rare god send
To you just take me as a passing aid
I’ll walk away if that’s in your desire
I just want to give you one more lasting breath
One more chance to see your love
Re-sew your broken wings
Let you soar on new-found flight
In hopes you can caress your angel within the clouds
Let these words mend your will
Your angel waits
I’ll stand below on departing ice
Maybe it’s time that I fall through
Maybe it’s time to cherish the suffocating waters
With one last privilege of watching your pride
One last question still remains…
Will I be in vain
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Comments: 20

onewithdarkness [2006-05-20 23:05:21 +0000 UTC]

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outcast910 In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-05-21 03:47:00 +0000 UTC]

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onewithdarkness In reply to outcast910 [2006-05-22 00:27:13 +0000 UTC]


oh, by the way, you seem the theatre type, would you like a part in a play i am producing.

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outcast910 In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-05-22 11:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Sure why not

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onewithdarkness In reply to outcast910 [2006-05-28 17:01:55 +0000 UTC]

kewl, you are quite the story teller i could use script assistance.
and you could get a part, brush up on my 4 fantasy novels, for a back drop.

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outcast910 In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-05-28 20:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Lol that sounds great... And starting reading those fantasys they rock...i think lol ;blackrose:

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onewithdarkness In reply to outcast910 [2006-05-28 23:39:32 +0000 UTC]

ha thanks, hope you enjoy them, brush up mate.

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outcast910 In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-05-29 04:35:13 +0000 UTC]

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onewithdarkness In reply to outcast910 [2006-06-04 19:45:45 +0000 UTC]

yep, say where did you get the black rose emote?

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outcast910 In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-06-05 11:45:53 +0000 UTC]

in the emotion legend

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onewithdarkness In reply to outcast910 [2006-06-06 23:47:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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outcast910 In reply to onewithdarkness [2006-06-07 16:51:09 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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ZachtheHurricane [2006-05-20 20:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Ahh how sweet. It is an amazing piece of writing. I am glad to know that I am not the only one always willing to lend a helping hand.

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outcast910 In reply to ZachtheHurricane [2006-05-21 03:54:03 +0000 UTC]

lol always willing open a hand out to the ones who need it

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ShimmyDancer [2006-05-20 00:43:47 +0000 UTC]

beautiful words of friendship

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outcast910 In reply to ShimmyDancer [2006-05-20 01:42:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks....

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Liameh [2006-05-19 21:56:50 +0000 UTC]

How touching! It's nice to know there's people like you out there! =]

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outcast910 In reply to Liameh [2006-05-19 22:45:43 +0000 UTC]

like me..Im just another person just trying on survive on what they've got lol

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Torvayn [2006-05-19 16:33:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad I met you. You hardly know me .. I hardly know you ... and, you've helped me far more than people I've known for five years... or people I've known my entire life. I don't know what I can say really, except.. Thank you.

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outcast910 In reply to Torvayn [2006-05-19 16:37:27 +0000 UTC]

You don't need to thank me, its just what i do. i like to help people walk on a path that I know I never could, its my turn to help where I could never have found help . And I'm glad I have met you too.

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