Comments: 23
ZanZanryu [2018-05-11 22:06:26 +0000 UTC]
Amazing drawing... *^*
I love Lilina..... >////<
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InkedLance [2012-05-03 11:36:53 +0000 UTC]
I don't think it is too grainy.
The only thing I might be able to point out is that the skirt is a bit TOO short.
Otherwise, your perception of shadow and light is very good (as I can see on the details of the clothes) and I like it how your strokes and colours are so neat unlike mine. I really LOVE this artwork of Lilina despite the fact there are so many pictures of her in this folder. ^_*
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Rivey-Roc [2009-08-24 00:40:38 +0000 UTC]
Mouth seems a little high to me and the hand on the left looks a little too detailed. Makes her look a little older than she should, but overall, great progression, especially in anatomy.
And BTW I know I'm commenting on this like 9 months late but whatever. |D I've been inactive for a while.
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OutOfTheOrange In reply to Rivey-Roc [2009-08-24 21:27:06 +0000 UTC]
Haha, well, it's never too late to comment on something. I do agree that 9 months is kind of late for critique-ish sort of comments like this, though. It might have been helpful back then, but at this point it's been long enough since I did this that it's sort of moot by now. :/
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KitsuneInari [2009-07-22 11:29:27 +0000 UTC]
I see her legs got slightly larger this time around~ Must be the influences of your most recent artworks, neh? The coloring came out better, I'd say, as did the lively expression, with eyes and hair being my favorite part. ^^
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OutOfTheOrange In reply to Eltras [2009-01-11 00:17:47 +0000 UTC]
I had no idea how to draw legs until I took my drawing class this semester, and the models we used all had normal-people legs and now I cannot do anything else. D:
Like someone said, though, it does make it look like her head is too small. BUT OH WELL.
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miss-tama [2009-01-08 05:42:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh, wow, your anatomy has improved /loads/ between this year and last year. The coloring's looking nice, too.
It's great to see that you're lightening up! 8D
-killed for usage of horrendous pun-
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CaTigeReptile [2009-01-02 21:39:26 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous. I wish I had improved that much in 4 years . . . Then again, trying would have helped.
She looks like she's growing up with you! She's got a figure now!
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P0W4H-L4D33 [2009-01-02 17:02:54 +0000 UTC]
THIS. IS. HOTNEEEEESS.
Seriously though, you're improvement is definatly shining through with this piece. I am really, really digging that pose-side views have always been criminally difficult for me. And the coloring indeed has become a lot more subtle-but-defined. My only complaint is that her head is a mite bit small. Other than that, dang lady, good work.
And I also like how you went the THUNDER route this year.
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mima57775 [2009-01-02 16:42:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh god.. you have seriously shown a lot of improvement! But it seems you've always drawn well <3
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OutOfTheOrange In reply to merriya [2009-01-03 02:08:01 +0000 UTC]
Well, it's fun to do, if nothing else. XD
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keiiii [2009-01-02 05:41:37 +0000 UTC]
Really liking the hints of warm colors throughout the picture. ^^
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Omega-Jester [2009-01-02 05:28:27 +0000 UTC]
oh wow very nice work Lilina is just to cute >v<
nice work on the coloring also ^^
looks like shes about to hit someone with a critical heh
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VanGuard6789 [2009-01-02 05:22:33 +0000 UTC]
Nice :")
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