exeo [2002-10-24 21:53:29 +0000 UTC]

man this is powerful....i feel you 100% on this one...gosh, it does depress me when i read it, but thats what makes poetry do great, when it makes you "feel"...and youve done an excellent job with this one....awesome piece

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ghostchild [2002-10-10 22:13:10 +0000 UTC]

Really like the second stanza. Great poem

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skankinshorty [2002-04-27 02:53:15 +0000 UTC]

straight from the heart, thats what counts!
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haletski [2002-04-26 02:37:01 +0000 UTC]

im no poem expert or anything, but i like this one. I like the all the emotions presented.

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overkil [2002-04-24 19:02:21 +0000 UTC]

dammit now im depressed reading it haha.

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kat22788 [2002-04-24 16:58:43 +0000 UTC]

That was a great poem one day you will find that person who will be able to touch your heart.

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lostprophet [2002-04-19 01:47:29 +0000 UTC]

Heh, I'll try Jim, and don't worry man.

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overkil [2002-04-19 01:42:56 +0000 UTC]

hey guys sorry bout making you sad this was just an exageration of a jealous mind, the first part of the poem is the only part i meant to write the rest just got away from me. I think im not going to post stuff like this anymore lol.

and no need to kick her ass hehe im going to see her this weekend everything should be great. thanks anyway haha.

Cheer up people, especially you m@ hehe.

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jilian218 [2002-04-19 01:27:33 +0000 UTC]

maybe i shouldnt read this stuff, it just makes me want to cry. too sad. i'm sorry i'll kick her ass if you'd like.

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lostprophet [2002-04-19 01:23:11 +0000 UTC]

Now I'm depressed......not like I wasn't already.

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spunefed [2002-04-19 00:09:45 +0000 UTC]

That's sad Jim...
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