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UnbearableME [2014-07-27 18:34:41 +0000 UTC]
very good theme/idea
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FlickingFire [2012-01-17 05:35:17 +0000 UTC]
I see the hands of the man committing suidcide...
--
I saw the best minds if my generation being run down by the drunken taxicabs of Absolute Reality.
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smudges34 [2011-10-23 08:24:06 +0000 UTC]
nice perspective and use of shadow, i really like this piece
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GemmaKate [2011-09-29 23:01:31 +0000 UTC]
FAVE!
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DaseinDesign [2011-09-29 16:26:06 +0000 UTC]
Is this for sale? This painting is lovely
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Citeron [2010-02-04 19:47:58 +0000 UTC]
The jumper is a nice touch.
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madness-discovery [2009-12-02 15:05:02 +0000 UTC]
good color,beautifull topic. Nice the shadow of the falling man.
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sonnet-contempo [2009-05-21 08:38:18 +0000 UTC]
congratz for the DD
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bunnylittleodd [2009-05-18 07:15:34 +0000 UTC]
I cried a little.
Fabulous work
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funkyjunky [2009-05-17 13:53:26 +0000 UTC]
Very very cool!
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amidarosa [2009-05-17 07:51:55 +0000 UTC]
why is there a hand on top? is that the shadow?
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amidarosa [2009-05-17 07:51:02 +0000 UTC]
is that a witch on the wall
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amidarosa [2009-05-17 07:46:28 +0000 UTC]
its such a coencidence, i analysing this poem for english and browsing DA at the same time and found this. WOW, i love the fact that they are faceless,
its like passing through time passively. hey i got an idea for analysis thx to this
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mindless-sheep [2009-05-17 06:39:40 +0000 UTC]
i love those hands hanging out at the top...and then i just realized it was a falling body! great illustration, my friend.
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redchinese [2009-05-17 06:11:39 +0000 UTC]
i love how you need to stare at the picutre for a few seconds before the suicide registers.
the blunt truth of it is even better
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freakdearts [2009-05-17 06:05:20 +0000 UTC]
how oblivious they are to the impact eminent...
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Nessiana [2009-05-17 04:13:14 +0000 UTC]
It's awesome that you did this with watercolour. It's interesting to see a grayscale watercolour piece, as they're usually so colorful.
You mentioned that it's loosely based on a short story, but I think it also fits nicely with T.S. Elliot's poem "The Hollow Men":
We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are quiet and meaningless
As wind in dry grass
Or rats' feet over broken glass
In our dry cellar
Shape without form, shade without colour,
Paralysed force, gesture without motion;
Those who have crossed
With direct eyes, to death's other Kingdom
Remember us -- if at all -- not as lost
Violent souls, but only
As the hollow men
The stuffed men.
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get2knowmyworld [2009-05-17 03:29:30 +0000 UTC]
I like how you can barely see the man falling at the top
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Maferfuerana [2009-05-17 01:56:54 +0000 UTC]
Really nice!
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KaosNoKamisama [2009-05-17 01:35:30 +0000 UTC]
Great.
I have never read "The Hollow Men", but this reminds me a lot of the gray men who smoke time in "Momo", by Michael Ende.
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Durloth [2009-05-17 01:31:19 +0000 UTC]
The most perfect usage of watercolour I've ever seen! Truly a disturbing and yet so truthful piece.
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Slothboy3000 [2009-05-17 00:41:13 +0000 UTC]
Really fitting way to portray the subject. Didn't notice at first, which is obviously all the better. + fave
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cascarin [2009-05-17 00:41:07 +0000 UTC]
Β‘The Gray Men! Like the men in MOMO by Michel Ende.
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FaDemian [2009-05-16 23:02:12 +0000 UTC]
wow that's so interesting and the painting is really cool !!!!
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BeatingDeadHeroes [2009-05-16 22:36:44 +0000 UTC]
Great composition, strong sense of values. You really worked the concept well too with all the faces vague and shadowed. Congrats on the DD!
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AnilaStar [2009-05-16 21:50:17 +0000 UTC]
This is really, really good. I love your use of tones, of shadows, the details you provide and the details you choose to leave out. This is fantastic.
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oberst444 [2009-05-16 21:24:29 +0000 UTC]
nice perspective!
i like it very much.
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MouseDenton [2009-05-16 21:11:45 +0000 UTC]
I like the ambiance.
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bakubreath [2009-05-16 20:45:22 +0000 UTC]
Amazing piece. It actually took me a bit to find him, but when I saw the hands and shadow at the top and left I jumped a little! Congrats on the DD.
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orangepeacock13 [2009-05-16 19:59:56 +0000 UTC]
thats amazing.and it really fits your description.i love it.
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INFZ [2009-05-16 18:53:13 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous, gorgeous gorgeous! I am without words.
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offbyzero [2009-05-16 18:40:48 +0000 UTC]
Good illustration of that. Totally get it across with just how you colored and drew all of it.
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Floatingtshirt [2009-05-16 17:32:28 +0000 UTC]
does the story this is based off of have any connection to "The Hollow Men" by T.S. Eliot? That's my favorite poem XD
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cloftw In reply to Floatingtshirt [2009-05-17 06:10:41 +0000 UTC]
yeah i agree. similar themes, the short story might have been influenced by it.
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ron67 [2009-05-16 16:31:48 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant.
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irishelim [2009-05-16 15:34:20 +0000 UTC]
Awesome picture. Kind of along the lines of a piece I did too.
[link]
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bananako [2009-05-16 15:31:27 +0000 UTC]
amazing.
the title actually reminded me of T.S. Eliot's "The Hollow Men"...totally different idea, though.
good work!
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cloftw In reply to bananako [2009-05-17 06:10:58 +0000 UTC]
yeah i agree. similar themes, the short story might have been influenced by it.
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Rolomie [2009-05-16 15:26:16 +0000 UTC]
nice !!
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Charongess [2009-05-16 15:14:06 +0000 UTC]
When I saw this I was actually reminded of the book, A Brave New World.
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