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SSUMA [2012-12-20 06:27:04 +0000 UTC]
I can't really tweak anatomy here but I think the front paws need to be facing more... front xD
First off, it seems like there are a lot of style switches in this piece which make it somewhat disjointed. The trees are cartoon, the character is semi cartoon, the clouds are realistic and the moon and path are semi-realistic. Personally I feel that your backgrounds need to loosen the edges a little. Where the ground meets the sky it would be nice if it wasn't a hard line. Same with the moon, the edges would look nicer more painterly in my opinion. Also, when coloring it would look good if you added some texture and different tones. Not different shades but actual different colors within say the grass. The moon could be a bit blue and a bit purple as well. The clouds could have some greens. It would just add more depth.
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Owl-Flight In reply to SSUMA [2012-12-20 21:37:17 +0000 UTC]
this picture was experimental and I was trying to shy away from my usual style, obviously I reverted back to it in some places and made it look bad. Thanks for the crit I'll keep it in mind.
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SSUMA In reply to Owl-Flight [2012-12-20 23:35:27 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome ^^
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sky-lover10 [2012-10-06 16:57:23 +0000 UTC]
Ohh those clouds are amazing <3 Great job.
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repdog [2012-10-06 03:53:32 +0000 UTC]
That looks awesome! Especially the background<33
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Owl-Flight In reply to repdog [2012-10-06 03:55:26 +0000 UTC]
thank you ^^
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repdog In reply to Owl-Flight [2012-10-06 05:14:55 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome c::
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Owl-Flight In reply to Spottedfire23 [2012-10-06 03:28:55 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the commission ^^ It was super fun to draw. I really wanted to draw her but I know if you hadn't commissioned me I never would have gotten around to it!
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Owl-Flight In reply to SSUMA [2012-10-06 03:12:31 +0000 UTC]
if you want the brush I used you can get in on the FAQ on my page (its for sai, and it's not like a stamp in PS)
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SSUMA In reply to Owl-Flight [2012-10-06 03:15:20 +0000 UTC]
*goes to cheeck*
yay cause I have sai and not ps...
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Owl-Flight In reply to SSUMA [2012-10-06 03:18:18 +0000 UTC]
sai is a lot better in my opinion XDD only thing that sucks is my art class doesnt have it so I'm gunna need to figure out a way to get a mobile version or something
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SSUMA In reply to Owl-Flight [2012-10-06 03:20:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow that does suck~
Never tried ps but my friend has it as well as sai and she uses sai. I told her she had to get it and as soon as she tried it she was sold, I don't think she uses ps to draw in anymore...
thanks for the link~
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Owl-Flight In reply to SSUMA [2012-10-06 03:27:02 +0000 UTC]
I have PS but I dont understand it, my art class has PS but I'd be so lost :/
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SSUMA In reply to Owl-Flight [2012-10-06 03:30:10 +0000 UTC]
that would suck major.
Trying to use an art program that you don't understand and then get graded on it?
not cool.
PS has more cheats and effects though right?
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Owl-Flight In reply to SSUMA [2012-10-06 03:34:54 +0000 UTC]
yeah it does, but I dont like how they look (like leaves, I hate photoshop leaves and grass) besides in my opinion everything looks better when its done by hand ^^
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SSUMA In reply to Owl-Flight [2012-10-06 03:38:08 +0000 UTC]
Yeah the brushes look fake, I especially hate the moon brush,it looks SO fake...
yeah, all that foliage looks better hand done, then it's more organically shaped. And more like trad media in a way..
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Owl-Flight In reply to SSUMA [2012-10-06 03:43:20 +0000 UTC]
mhmm. I'm really picky, I dont even use the line tool in sai, everything is hand done. It actually took a wile to convince my self to use any brushes besides pen, air, blend and the eracer
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SSUMA In reply to Owl-Flight [2012-10-06 03:54:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I use the pen, brush, eraser, water (not often) and blur tools as well as a liner tool I made myself from the ink pen and a light eraser I made for erase away shading. Oh and I use air brush~ But that's about it... Not to crazy on other settings, I think you can make any texture with those.
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Owl-Flight In reply to SSUMA [2012-10-06 03:56:52 +0000 UTC]
I've been experimenting with brushes a bit, its a lot of fun, got a fur brush, cloud brush, a weird paint tool that makes things look like scales. Its fun messing around with different stuff
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SSUMA In reply to Owl-Flight [2012-10-06 04:00:40 +0000 UTC]
I'll bet it is~ I am stuck trying to figure it all out from scratch. WOuld be helpful for bgs I'll bet...
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Owl-Flight In reply to SSUMA [2012-10-06 04:09:54 +0000 UTC]
look at tutorials on DA, they help a lot~
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SSUMA In reply to Owl-Flight [2012-10-06 04:17:04 +0000 UTC]
alrighty then, thanks for the advice ^^
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M7Fire [2012-10-06 03:08:33 +0000 UTC]
Ha ha, cute costume >w<
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Owl-Flight In reply to M7Fire [2012-10-06 03:10:36 +0000 UTC]
I know right? I love this character, it was super fun to draw <3
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M7Fire In reply to Owl-Flight [2012-10-06 03:25:47 +0000 UTC]
I love it!
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Owl-Flight In reply to Reiplaz [2012-10-06 03:13:17 +0000 UTC]
also, thank you for the watch ^^
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