Comments: 42
GuardsmanKoto [2009-06-23 21:23:07 +0000 UTC]
*shell shocked* this is a very very interesting piece i can say it begs a sequel. *fav's and looks to for other interesting stories he can find*
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GuardsmanKoto In reply to Oy19 [2009-06-25 15:54:59 +0000 UTC]
dang >< all good though. you got a certain flair for the writing
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darkpidgeot10 [2009-03-27 02:40:00 +0000 UTC]
cool story!
i am serious- this was very good! i read it two times! and i found some things that i missed...
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Uncle-Ben [2008-12-17 02:57:24 +0000 UTC]
Amazing!
I'd love to read other stories from you.
-goes to look-
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isoycrazy [2008-04-20 12:25:33 +0000 UTC]
Interesting premise. I like it. Nice work.
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Draconian-Satirist [2008-03-26 23:40:44 +0000 UTC]
A little from coulmn A, a little from column B.
I agree, it's not your best. Nowhere near your worst either, if a little "cheesy" with the ending.
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ZItheDRAGON [2008-03-24 02:57:59 +0000 UTC]
...............i wonder have u played any of the bloody roar games
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ZItheDRAGON In reply to Oy19 [2008-03-24 21:12:35 +0000 UTC]
well it looked like u were
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Oy19 In reply to ZItheDRAGON [2008-03-24 23:46:32 +0000 UTC]
It happens...
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ZItheDRAGON In reply to Oy19 [2008-03-26 00:13:28 +0000 UTC]
yess ^.=.^
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ZItheDRAGON In reply to Oy19 [2008-03-26 00:44:39 +0000 UTC]
well I do like it a lot ^.=.^
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ZItheDRAGON In reply to Oy19 [2008-03-28 22:03:58 +0000 UTC]
welcome ^.=.^
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Weredingo [2008-03-24 01:59:57 +0000 UTC]
See I knew something was being conjured up in that head of yours, good show! And Happy Easter and what not!
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NekoLLX [2008-03-24 01:41:40 +0000 UTC]
now that's a interesting set up for a story. I was kinda worried at the end they would all be predators and want to eat the rabit but since Kate was on knew he'd be fine...though the fact i wasnt sure how they would react when again Kate was a rabbbit struck me as odd
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NekoLLX In reply to Oy19 [2008-03-24 14:28:15 +0000 UTC]
Yeah i read between the lines and got that. It sets a interesting tone
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Tails230 [2008-03-24 01:27:19 +0000 UTC]
Great Story!
Merry Easter!
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