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Published: 2013-04-07 19:33:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 2452; Favourites: 136; Downloads: 14
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Description I finally decided to paint Koriandre digitally. I haven't done any art since before I left for Jamaica. I thought I would be out of practice, but not too shabby. This is a scene from a fanfic called: 'Carol of the Bells.' You can read it here: [link]

Here's the scene: Garfield left her in silence. Only the crackle of the fire filled the emptiness that surrounded her. She expected pain. She expected a gaping hole in her chest slowly ripping open as the knowledge of his absence set in. But it never came. Instead, a warm fluttering feeling settled in her heart. It felt like a bird, light and vivid. She touched her chest in wonder.
"Richarde?" She whispered. The fluttering intensified and warmth spread throughout her body. "Is that you? Can you hear me?" The feeling responded to her and she couldn't help but be happy. "Oh Richarde, you are not gone after all!" She sang. Realization dawned on her. She breathed in his last breath, so along with it was his vapor. He was inside of her, she carried his spirit.
"I can feel you. I want you here, in my heart." She whispered. "Is it selfish to keep you here?"
Her heart palpitated deeply.
"Why did this happen?"
"Because it is planned." A deep voice spoke.
Kori spun around to come face to face with a man she had never seen before. He looked very familiar though. His red hair was bright like hers and his solid emerald eyes stared into her. She knew him...somehow. "Who are you?"
"You do not know?"
"Are you from my life before I came here?"
"Yes."
"I have no memory of back then."
He nodded. "That makes sense. I am your brother, Ryandre."
"I have a brother?"
"Quite a few really, and sisters."
"Do I also have a mother and father?"
"You have a Father who is great and powerful." He said vaguely.
"Where am I from? Surely not from France, for I have never seen any others like me."
"You are neither of France, nor of anyplace near." He reached out. "Take my hand and remember."
...
"Is this the end then? Have I failed in my job to protect and care for him?"
"No dear sister, you cared for him well. There is no end, only rebirth." He pointed to her chest. "You must let him go."
"But-..."
"He cannot stay there. You will always carry a part of him with you, but his spirit must be free. He will be alright."
She dejectedly released him. His spirit sat in her hands in the form of a bird. A robin, the sign of spring, rebirth. He flew around her and then took off into the night sky through the window.
Lonely tears made their way down her cheeks.
"You have done the right thing, my sister. I love you and will see you soon." With that, he disappeared.
She turned her eyes to heaven. "My Lord, I wait for you."
Across town, a bell in the graveyard rang.
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Comments: 8

Ninartistic [2015-04-12 13:48:36 +0000 UTC]

one of the most beautiful starfire imagines I've ever seen!!! *.* just loved her <3 <3

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Katsuyko [2014-03-06 11:25:40 +0000 UTC]

Really beautiful!

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MissSelinaKyle [2013-07-05 13:49:46 +0000 UTC]

Breathtaking...
Loved the fic as well it was so heartrending.

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Timmy-22222001 [2013-04-12 14:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Very deep you emotions are here KHchick101 and while you seem to carry over quite well the sympathy and release in your work itself, like even better how well you write up your ideas and give even more depth to the reasoning to your creativity.

Kudos to coming back from Jamaica though and stirring up this lovely piece and as sad as it may be, always like Kori for being a symbol of hope and having to really endure alot of emotions and mostly pain for the way she seems to be in in the realm of the comics, poor lass.

Either way you did well to show that feeling of letting go and not letting it all be in sorrow but having some light and something firm to keep hold onto. If Kori can keep her head up, why not the deviant viewing your art?

Regardless very clear and very well drawn work on Kori herself, the lines are even a reminder of the comic books themselves how very Western she looks with the blend of a realistic look with some softer lines to show her more feminine side, well done. Even the fact that you nail the small and delicate nature of her expression mixed in with those luscious lips, man its quite the challenge to try and look away from that beautiful part of your image, not kidding.

As for your coloring though, have to give you another tips of the hat. You seem quite natural how well you express both the colors of Kori from the fiery and flowing threads in her hair to even the warm glow you can catch from her eyes, but there's much more than that. Well played how you play from your story the way she releases the past from her heart and even the way you make the trail leave from her chest and fly around her like something truly as you said in your title as being released.

Smaller details you even take the time to add can see like the transparency of the bird to express its spirit-like nature, the pattern work and the differentiating colors on the dress to even the background itself and how it blends with her skin and the rest of the image. Very unique, sad, beautiful and just plain brilliant to what I can say the least of KHchick101, but please continue the promising work. *nods*

Later,

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P-Artsypants In reply to Timmy-22222001 [2013-04-14 20:04:49 +0000 UTC]

I am completely speechless right now. Seriously, I have no idea what to say except thank you! I have never had a review so in depth before. I am so glad you pulled so much emotion and sight out of this. Really, it makes me ecstatic! Wow! Just Wow!

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Timmy-22222001 In reply to P-Artsypants [2013-04-20 15:54:18 +0000 UTC]

Well you should be just as prod of yourself for your level of commitment and focus you paid to your artwork KHchick, besides not just pulling anything see of your artwork out of thin air mind you. ^o^

Besides just happy enough to hear your enjoyed the feedback, you earned it. *thumbs up*

Later,

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KoriandrGrayson [2013-04-08 02:00:19 +0000 UTC]

This is really pretty. I love this piece!<3

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P-Artsypants In reply to KoriandrGrayson [2013-04-08 18:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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