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Pa-le — suicide note

Published: 2007-09-23 19:43:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 2302; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 57
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Description Every night
You wrote another line
With a bloody, borken, bottle
And every day
You wish it away
Why don't you pull the pin
On that grenade
You cuddle

I wanted to believe
Bodies swinging from trees
Struggling to stand
With your head in your hands
A stoic last stand
Of a dying man

I wanted to believe
As I watched your world
Crumble in your hands
I wanted to believe
As you raised your glass
To your last stand
And I wanted to believe
You would win
The war in your head
That I did not understand
That I did not understand

Every night
The questions poured out
Of your wounded eyes
Damn dark things
Every day
You used to pray
Listen to the black raven sing
You wanted to believe
As you were falling to your knees
Struggling to stand
With your life in your hand
The sad last stand
Of a broken man

I wanted to believe
As I watched your world
Crumble in your hands
I wanted to believe
As you raised your glass
To your last stand
And I wanted to believe
You would win
The war in your head
That I did not understand
That I did not understand

I wanted to believe
As I watch your world
Crumble in your hands
I wanted to believe
As you raised your glass
To your last stand
And I wanted to believe
You would win
The war in your head
That I did not understand
That I did not understand

And the questions pour out
And the questions pour out
I did not understand
I did not understand
I did not understand
I did not understand
The sound of you falling
I did not understand
As the trembling heart of a man
Did not understand
The sound of a trembling heart
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Comments: 24

StapledSlut [2009-06-24 23:30:41 +0000 UTC]

is this you?

[link]

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cleopandasaur [2009-06-16 19:54:14 +0000 UTC]

I love the green lighting, the entire piece is so raw and beautiful.
May I ask, what song is that (written in the artists comment box) or did you write the poem yourself?

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neverXmore [2008-07-12 12:25:19 +0000 UTC]

A beautiful painting if there ever was one.
Sad that there aren't more comments for it.

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joelvfaria [2008-07-01 10:12:10 +0000 UTC]

just to say that in Portugal some bunch of fellows gave you an applause to this one

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Seelenbestie [2008-06-20 20:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Woah... *sprachlos um Worte ringend herumfuchtelt*

...das ist einfach wunderschön!

*üben geht*

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Joss54 [2008-06-19 21:24:54 +0000 UTC]

woe....beautiful on every point of view !

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ArtDoge [2008-01-26 23:43:51 +0000 UTC]

Very sad, very powerful... and great tones you've used for her skin!

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holdingtheflare [2007-11-19 22:30:40 +0000 UTC]

So sad but also beautiful.

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Bruenjes [2007-10-01 10:15:04 +0000 UTC]

Sehr schön
Klasse Farbwahl und schöne volle Lippen ^__^

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bynico [2007-09-24 18:16:43 +0000 UTC]

fantastic piece!!

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Pa-le In reply to bynico [2007-10-18 07:06:10 +0000 UTC]

hey thank you x)

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Asmodea [2007-09-24 15:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Sehr schöne Farbwahl, faszinierender Gesichtsaudruck und klasse Atmosphäre ...

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Pa-le In reply to Asmodea [2007-09-24 17:44:27 +0000 UTC]

hey danke sweetheart (:

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nelesia [2007-09-23 23:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Very nice emotion!

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Pa-le In reply to nelesia [2007-10-18 07:05:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks *-*

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telthona [2007-09-23 22:10:51 +0000 UTC]

ooh! her face is really fantastic! i love her emotion :>

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Pa-le In reply to telthona [2007-10-18 07:05:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you (:

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ZuluSplitter [2007-09-23 21:48:52 +0000 UTC]

hehe, da hatte mal wieder jemand bock zum zeichnen ^.^ schaut echt super aus

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Pa-le In reply to ZuluSplitter [2007-10-18 07:01:51 +0000 UTC]

danke xD

wie läufts bei dir eigentlich so, du fauler sack?

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ZuluSplitter In reply to Pa-le [2010-03-26 13:02:47 +0000 UTC]

das seh ich jetzt erst die nachricht >.< Fauler Sack, uiuiui, so ein schönes Wetter drausen und nun wurde die gute Stimmung zu nichte gemacht.... *schnief*


warte auf ein gallery update von dir, du faule *gg*

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algenpfleger [2007-09-23 21:11:52 +0000 UTC]

pale, warum so emo!
wahnsinnsbild. die farben sind unglaublich, und die augen...
allerdings sehen die lippen etwas zusammengepresst aus, der "spalt" dazwischen" (lol) sollte dunkler sein Ö_Ö

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Zlatolin [2007-09-23 20:58:39 +0000 UTC]

lol, nice yo ! Pretty impressive.

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Pa-le In reply to Zlatolin [2007-10-18 06:57:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you x)

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MarschelArts [2007-09-23 20:16:56 +0000 UTC]

also was gesichter angeht..macht dir echt keiner was vor! der gesichtsausdruck ist fantastisch! licht und schatten finde ich auch gut gesetzt!

ich hoff ich grig menschen aus bald so derbe gut hin wie du!
weiterso!

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