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And so starts the second day I’m being stalked by this weirdo. He hasn’t let me out of sight since yesterday. He kept on talking about his dreams which he believes were about me. I’m not sure how I should be feeling, the whole thing is just so unreal. Like he’s not only a weirdo who’s persisting that I’m his fated other but also a demon. Yes a demon. I wouldn’t have believed it either if it weren’t for his very visual demonstration. At first he scared the shit out of me but his behavior is so non threatening it doesn’t seem like he’s out to hurt me. Especially with the whole being the mare of his dreams thing. I rolled my eyes at the thought, I mean I knew I wasn’t the most buff of stallions but to actually get mistaken for a mare. Well at least my life wasn’t in danger. I wasn’t sure I could say the same about my sanity though. His constant talking and trying to get my attention was driving me crazy. It might sound pathetic but this is already the longest time I’ve had company in months. I’m not all that social one could argue. So I wasn’t at all comfortable with being together with someone for so long who I didn’t even want to spend time with in the first place. It had been a very tiring day though so I thought I could make my escape at night. Since I’m an insomniac and he should have been tired. The reality didn’t quite meet my expectations. Instead of sneaking away I spend half the night peeking at him for him to fall asleep. He in turn stared at me relentlessly and we wound up staring at each other for hours. For me it turned into a bit of a match as well since I didn’t want to look away before he did. But he never did. I fell asleep halfway through and slept for hours. This was rare for me and to be honest felt very nice. However waking up and having to see his face first thing in the morning didn’t improve my mood. So now I was grumpily grazing about trying to figure out how to get rid of him when I caught him giving me a very strange look. “What?”, I asked through gritted teeth, ears pinned back. “You know you’re eating dead grass when there’s green grass all around, don’t you?”, he asked me in return with a cocked eyebrow. “Yeah I prefer the old grass”, I replied not explaining any further. Not that there was some sort of reason, I just liked the taste of dead grass better. I could see him processing that thought, not understanding me. “So what do you demons eat then?”, I asked him before he could pry any further. He perked up immediately at me showing an interest in him, he sure was simple to read. “Well I seem to get by on the same diet as normal horses here on earth. Though I do prefer the green grass”, he grinned at me and my pluck of dead grass in my mouth. I looked at him without giving him any kind of reply and dunked my head for another bite. It was silent for a while more. Maybe he would just grow tired of me eventually anyway. No matter how you look at it I wasn’t the most enjoyable company to have.”So I was wondering”, he started breaking the silence again and causing me to look up at him. “Don’t you have a herd or something?”, he asked me tilting his head to the side. My heart throbbed at the word herd. This was exactly why I didn’t like company they always needed to ask troublesome questions. “No I don’t”, my voice was composed but the look I gave him was to make sure he didn’t ask any further. “Why not?”, he asked having to be the least subtle horse I’d ever met. He completely ignored my warning. “Because I was banned”, I replied still perfectly civil though with a dismissive tone. I never felt the need to lie about it I just really disliked talking about it. I could see him giving me some sort of caring look and then he pried even further with absolutely no thought of how I felt about the subject at all, “Why were you banned?” I threw my head up angrily now. How could he be so intrusive? “Do you have absolutely no sense of privacy, you socially incompetent fool!”, I snapped at him raising my voice. He cringed back at my tone and let his ears flop to the side. “Sorry”, he mumbled looking hurt by my sudden outburst. I huffed and turned my head away from. I knew he didn’t mean any harm but I hadn’t told anyone about my past for a long time and I wasn’t about to change that. It never ended well anyway. My thoughts took me back to when I was banished reminding me of the other reason I didn’t like company. Nobody could be trusted, in end all everyone cared about were themselves. I turned my face back to Chinmay and couldn’t help but roll my eyes. He looked just like a lost puppy thinking furiously of something to say to get me talking again. Why did this weirdo give me the feeling he was so different? Not the fact he was a weird stalker demon but something else about him...I couldn’t quite figure out the feeling. I shook my head with closed eyes. What was I thinking? I only met him one day ago. I sighed giving the flustered stallion another look. “I was banned because I wasn’t my father’s son and my mother’s lover apparently wasn’t a horse”, I told him my voice sounding slightly annoyed but that was more because I was already regretting telling him this. “When the herd found out they labeled me as dangerous because I was partly something they didn’t know and then they banished me”, Even though I never did anything wrong, I added in my head. I didn’t look him in the eye, turning my gaze elsewhere instead. I already knew I was either going to get fake pity or resentment anyway. “Why would they do that, it’s not like you did anything wrong”, he said with confusion in his voice. When I looked at him I could see he was genuinely confused frowning trying to figure it out. “Those were the rules”, I replied calmly even though I was thinking the exact same thing just a second ago. “But that’s not fair”, he told me his tone sounding quite childlike. I let out a chuckle unwillingly but this guy was just too weird. He was getting upset for me even though he hardly knew me. But for some reason I did believe he was genuine and that wasn’t something I was used to. “That’s life for you”, I grinned confusing him even more. “That’s not something to laugh about”, he said with a pout not getting why I was grinning. “No you’re right”, I nodded still smiling. Weird, he didn’t even say much or try to comfort me but it felt like I wanted this reaction. Not freaking out because I was different not trying to make me feel better with some touchy feely life quotes. Just some confirmation that’s all I needed. I started to walk along the river getting my hooves wet. Of course he followed me immediately and was back by my side in mere seconds. “Weirdo”, I laughed and flicked my tail towards him. Maybe having him with me for the time being wouldn’t be the worst thing in the world…

To be continued...

New part of Chinmay and Chintya's story! A bit of a long story but I do hope you'll read it
So yeah Chintya opens up a little bit and reveals he is indeed as Chinmay expected not quite a normal horse. Next part will cover that subject some more. This was more about Chintya sort of getting used to Chinmay. Though believe me they still have a long way to go xD And Chintya also conveniently forgot about the part where Chinmay's intentions do lie more in the romantic department not the friendship one

I'm glad with how the story turned out but not with the drawing. I don't know the expressions are not what I wanted them to be at all.. Especially Chinmay, he's supposed to look confused here he looks kind of bored :/ Oh well I whatever I'll put more effort into the next part.

Hope you'll enjoy the story and drawing! Wow I'm really on fire with this story aren't I?

Chinmay & Chintya: Me *Paardjee
Chinmay's design: *EternalStarTrail
Pose Reference: Christiane Slawik.
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Comments: 22

WhiteKnightt [2013-04-28 20:36:39 +0000 UTC]

awwwww this is adorable!!! <333

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Paardjee In reply to WhiteKnightt [2013-05-12 11:28:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much hunnie!

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WhiteKnightt In reply to Paardjee [2013-05-12 22:19:03 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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NaporieRizia [2013-04-25 22:17:09 +0000 UTC]

OMG! I almost didn't comment on this because of a very stupid mistake! I saw this when you posted it on my I-pod but I don't' usually comment on my I-pod just because it's very annoying, especially when I want to write really long comments on my favorites of pictures like this one so... So I saved it and left it in the messages but somehow I accidentally deleted it and so I almost forgot about it! But... thankfully I remembered it.

So anyways, minor crises taken care of, shall we get to the picture and story? Ok, sounds good to me. ^^

So yes, this is awesome! I absolutely love Chintya's expression. And the story is so freaking cute! It's nice to see things from Chintya's point of view. And how sweet that he's finally being treated kindly... even though it's a little awkward. Ooo and I can't wait to learn more about that boy! He's so secretive! I must know all of his secrets and everything about him, including who he is.
Oh, and by the way, I envy how well you are able to draw a roan like that. I mean, Chinmay's colors look great!

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Paardjee In reply to NaporieRizia [2013-05-12 17:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh I had that problem as well with my cell phone

But thank you so much for the lovely comment! I'm really glad you like the story And you'll know more about Chintya as the story goes on so patience my dear ;D

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NaporieRizia In reply to Paardjee [2013-05-13 00:16:49 +0000 UTC]

Darn cell phones, they make everything so complicated. :/

You're so welcome. Well.... I can try to be patient, but I've been pretty bad with that lately as there is a certain bid that is using up all of my reserves so.... HURRY UP! ;]

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Paardjee In reply to NaporieRizia [2013-05-14 10:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah your bid for Leo, When will you know if you get him?

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NaporieRizia In reply to Paardjee [2013-05-14 20:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Well... I really don't know. I would have hoped that by now we would know, but we're still waiting. I can understand that it would take a while, but dang am I ready to know!

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Paardjee In reply to NaporieRizia [2013-05-16 21:37:31 +0000 UTC]

I can understand that I hope they'll let you guys know soon. I'm actually pretty impatient as well because I just want you to have the poor boy already ;A;

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NaporieRizia In reply to Paardjee [2013-05-17 01:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Dang I sure hope so too, I'm not sure how much longer my heart can take this. But thanks.

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jannaphia [2013-04-25 09:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, those two are gorgeous xD I don't know, I really like the type of relationship they have
Can't wait to find out who or what Chintya's father was/is
Anyways, I love his grin and dayum..that forelock It's so puffy
Also, Chinmay's eyes look great and that puzzled look on his face is priceless

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Paardjee In reply to jannaphia [2013-04-25 14:07:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much Chrys! I'm really glad you like them I'm going to really devote myself to this story so I promise I will not leave it unfinished
Next part is going to cover their background a little more so you'll see

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jannaphia In reply to Paardjee [2013-04-28 14:40:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!
Wooh, sounds interesting! Can't wait to see the next part

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xXInsaneSoulXx [2013-04-25 00:54:49 +0000 UTC]

Awwww how cute c: little by little theyre going to get used to eachothers company cx
Theyre so cute! lol this story is... Amazing so far! ^~^

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Paardjee In reply to xXInsaneSoulXx [2013-04-25 14:05:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes, though chintya is going to need some time
Thank you so much!

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xXInsaneSoulXx In reply to Paardjee [2013-04-25 22:42:14 +0000 UTC]

seems like he sure will cx

And your very welcome c:

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EternalStarTrail [2013-04-24 16:01:53 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWW Chintya is openign up a abit, way to go Chinmay!!! <333
This picture is absolutely gorgeous, I just love Chintya's expression here, and of course Chinmay looks gorgeous as always. I cannot wait to read more about them, and learn more about what makes Chintya different from normal horses.

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Paardjee In reply to EternalStarTrail [2013-04-25 14:04:54 +0000 UTC]

Yes he is Though they're on a whole different level intention wise
But thank you very much dear!! I'm really glad you like them C:
And I am aiming to update this story as much as I can so you won't have to wait too long ^^

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EternalStarTrail In reply to Paardjee [2013-04-25 22:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Lol well opening up is always good even if its on different levels of intentions

You are very welcome sweetie! I absolutely love them <33

Yay!!!!

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Vivid-Myth [2013-04-24 10:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Guess who read the whole thing as everyone should!
It really adds another amazing visual to the storyline besides the art! And your literature skills are impressive to say the least!
I love that your using Chintya in the first person narrative for this
I seriously look forward to reading and seeing more of the story!
And your art FFFF as gorgeous as ever, putting that new tablet to good use
xxx

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Paardjee In reply to Vivid-Myth [2013-04-25 14:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Goedzo!
Heel erg bedankt! <33 Ben echt blij te horen dat je m'n schrijven goed vind. Ben er soms een beetje onzeker over :3 En ja volgende deel wordt denk ik Chinmay's point of view en daarna weer hij/zij perspectief of alleswetende verteller moet nog even kijken c:

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Vivid-Myth In reply to Paardjee [2013-05-05 20:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Ja je schrijven is echt super! niks om onzeker over te zijn hoor!
Ik kan echt niet wachten om meer van het verhaal te lezen! Vin het zo leuk!
xxx <3

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