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Published: 2008-03-07 18:10:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1765; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 6
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Description They had been sitting around the fire talking about their families, their childhoods. One by one telling a story that they remembered most, before the war really hit them hard. All except Zuko, who refused to say anything about his past.

“Come on Zuko. Tell us something.” Aang begged Zuko. He was the only one who really befriended Zuko and trusted him.

“No. No stories tonight. I don’t want to talk about it.” Zuko started to get up and leave. What stopped him was what Katara had to say about his family.

“Why not? Come on, it can’t be that bad. Let me guess you had a perfect childhood and got everything you wanted. Nothing bad ever happened.” Katara started guessing on how the childhood of Zuko would have gone. She did it to spit him. On and on she went, with her harsh tone saying how wonderful his life must have been.

The flames started to grow more and more when Katara explained this fabulous story of hers. Aang realized what was wrong and tried to stop Katara, but she went on, unaware of what was going on. It had gotten to a point that Zuko couldn’t stand any more. He had enough of it.

“ENOUGH! You don’t know what you’re talking about. You don’t know anything about me.” The flames shot up ten feet as he yelled at Katara.

“Really? And whose fault is that? You do nothing; say nothing, except stay to yourself. If you want to be part of this group like you say, you need to speak up. Say something.”

Zuko hesitated for a minute before continuing on. Should he say what he really felt or not? Might as well.

“What is your problem?”

“What do you mean? I don’t have a problem.”

“Ever since I have joined your group, you have done nothing but rude and mean to me.”

“Gee, I wonder why. Maybe it’s because of what happened in Ba Sing Se.”

“I told you I was sorry, what more do you want? I have changed. Haven’t you ever done something you aren’t too proud of yourself? Haven’t you ever done anything you have regretted?”

“No, I haven’t.”

At this point, Toph can not stay silent anymore. She has to speak up against Katara.

“You’re lying.”

“What?! No I’m not. Why would you say that? Besides, your feet are burnt.”

“Just because my feet are burnt doesn’t mean that I can’t tell you are lying. Everyone here knows you are. Even Zuko is sure that you are. You know what you did.”

“I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

“Really? You mean you don’t remember? Well that’s a shock considering you couldn’t stop crying afterwards. You haven’t forgotten, have you?”

By now, Katara is really upset and embarrassed. Toph caught her on her lie, but she wasn’t going to let Zuko know he won.

“No. There is nothing I regret.” Katara exclaims as she glares Toph.

“Oh, that’s good to know. Why don’t you just use what you know against the Fire Lord? That’s it Sokka, we have a plan now. On the next full moon, let’s invade and let Katara handle him. Sound good?”

“Stop it Toph right now.” Katara says as she is holding back tears in fear that what she fears most will come true.

“Why? You said you don’t regret it. So why not embrace it? We can use it to our advantage since you are so proud.”

“NO! Stop Toph. Just stop it right now. Leave me alone.” At this point Katara releases her tears she had been holding back. Zuko sees how much pain she is in and steps in.

“So you have done something you have regretted too. You understand what I feel. I’m sorry for betraying you, but I had my reasons. As I’m sure you did too. You don’t have to tell me what you did. I won’t ask. But all I ask of you is that you stop being so critical of me. I’m on your side. I left my father and everything else behind to come here and help you. I’m not about to change sides.”

With that, Zuko walks inside leaving them behind at the fire, with a confused Katara who finally feels it is time to forgive Zuko. At that moment she releases her hate towards him. She runs away from the group and towards Zuko.
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Comments: 44

shauhazl [2008-07-03 11:03:51 +0000 UTC]

i love the way you make the characters STAY IN character

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paintedbluerose In reply to shauhazl [2008-07-03 16:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Juria316 [2008-04-08 17:10:17 +0000 UTC]

Let's face it, this is one of the many reasons why I LOVE TOPH! She's the only one on the whole show who tells it like it is, and isn't afraid to smack some sense into someone when they need it. I'm no Zutaraian, but damn, someone needs to at least make Katara stop being such a bitch to Zuko.

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paintedbluerose In reply to Juria316 [2008-04-08 17:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Yep, pretty much! That is why I love Toph too! She's amazing! And she is the only one who would smack sense into Katara. Everyone else is too afraid. And thanks for the fav!

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Juria316 In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-04-08 17:37:22 +0000 UTC]

No prob. You're like one of few fanfic writers that, if I see your name, I know the story is gonna be good. Of course, we all know, if Avatar had a higher rating, Toph would be the Rosanne of the group, sarcastic, loud, but with a good heart. Knows when to be kind, when to shut up, and when to, both verbally and literally, smack some sense into someone.

Azula: Mommy doesn't love me!
Toph: *Smacks her in the face.* Get over it! *I was gonna have Toph give Azula a nickname, but I can't think of one for her.*

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paintedbluerose In reply to Juria316 [2008-04-08 17:41:05 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks! I'm glad you think that. I'm not too happy about some of my fics though. And yes, totally agree with you on Toph. I want to see her smack some sense into people in the show more! Smack them! Smack them! Hmmm....Azula, maybe "crazy flames" or something. Ok, so I'm not so good at making up nicknames.

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Juria316 In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-04-08 17:49:46 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, the only time I can honestly remember reading any nicknames for Azula, Toph called her the "Flaming Princess", but I think that was a gay joke as well. On the other hand, I see Azula as agay, so I guess it kinda works.

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paintedbluerose In reply to Juria316 [2008-04-08 18:03:43 +0000 UTC]

Same here. I mean, she seems to talk to girls a lot better than guys. Strange, isn't it? Or not...

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Juria316 In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-04-08 18:10:28 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, never noticed that. Personally, I like to see Toph as an equal-opportunity insulter and the "tell-it-like-it-is" character.

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paintedbluerose In reply to Juria316 [2008-04-08 19:04:45 +0000 UTC]

True, true. I really want new eps to come!

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Juria316 In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-04-08 21:41:35 +0000 UTC]

As do I.

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Kira73 [2008-03-24 01:29:48 +0000 UTC]

Nice chapter.

Katara was so hard on Zuko in WAT, but at the same time, look at what all he has done too. A little humility won't hurt him. Although I felt for him when they finally let him join their group only to walk away and leave him alone.

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paintedbluerose In reply to Kira73 [2008-03-24 01:31:31 +0000 UTC]

Same here. I know he has done wrong, but Katara seriously needs to take a chill pill! I mean, come on, Aang wasn't even that harsh with him!

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Kira73 In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-24 14:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Katara has needed to take a chill pill for a good chunk of Book 3. But then again, they have had so many failures, I would probably be worse if I were in their places.

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paintedbluerose In reply to Kira73 [2008-03-24 14:36:42 +0000 UTC]

True, true. But she was seriously PMSing alot of season 3! I know they weren't doing that good, but seriously, the rest weren't like that! Where's the midol when you need it?

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Kira73 In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-24 14:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah really

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paintedbluerose In reply to Kira73 [2008-03-24 15:10:46 +0000 UTC]

I guess in Avatar world there is no such thing as Midol though. All those poor unfortuante guys! As long as they have chocolate, it should be ok, right?

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Kira73 In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-24 15:22:52 +0000 UTC]

Chocolate and tea...

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paintedbluerose In reply to Kira73 [2008-03-24 15:38:17 +0000 UTC]

That always works! Maybe that's why Iroh always had tea with him.

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Kira73 In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-24 18:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Iroh is a smart man to carry some calming tea for PMS sufferers.

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paintedbluerose In reply to Kira73 [2008-03-24 20:04:25 +0000 UTC]

Very smart! Too bad he got captured!

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Kira73 In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-24 20:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank goodness he is free now. I am curious as to where he is hiding out...

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paintedbluerose In reply to Kira73 [2008-03-24 20:44:08 +0000 UTC]

Me too. I guess we'll just have to wait and find out.

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silver-scorpian [2008-03-17 17:38:11 +0000 UTC]

ooo... drama! Toph is so evil! isn't she fun to write? and good work incorporating Bloodbending in there! that was well though!

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paintedbluerose In reply to silver-scorpian [2008-03-17 18:53:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Toph is so fun! I like writing her, cause she is like the only one who smacks Katara around.

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silver-scorpian In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-17 20:49:57 +0000 UTC]

seriously! Aang is so careful around her so that he won't expose his feelings, and Sokka's pretty into his 'big brother' role. Toph's the only one with the guts to knock her around a bit!

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paintedbluerose In reply to silver-scorpian [2008-03-17 20:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Who else would there be? Aang is such a whimp! He's about to cry when she yells at him! He can't take her. That's why there should only be Zutara, no Kataang.

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silver-scorpian In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-27 00:46:00 +0000 UTC]

exactly right: Aang, if you can't take the heat, get out of the kitchen.

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paintedbluerose In reply to silver-scorpian [2008-03-27 03:20:35 +0000 UTC]

I don't think he understands that though.

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silver-scorpian In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-27 04:37:19 +0000 UTC]

nope. he's like that frog in 'An Inconvenient Truth'. i can elaborate if you haven't seen it.

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paintedbluerose In reply to silver-scorpian [2008-03-27 04:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, great stuff!

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silver-scorpian In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-27 23:51:58 +0000 UTC]

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LavaTigerArticWolf [2008-03-10 23:34:57 +0000 UTC]

Good story you show Zukos true attitude

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paintedbluerose In reply to LavaTigerArticWolf [2008-03-11 01:35:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. And thanks for the favs/collections.

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LavaTigerArticWolf In reply to paintedbluerose [2009-10-15 21:11:10 +0000 UTC]

np

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DragonJadefire [2008-03-08 00:53:21 +0000 UTC]

First comment.


Great job and don't stop! There needs to be more!

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paintedbluerose In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-03-08 01:21:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I don't know what exactly to put next. I just had that so far. The end kinda wasn't that good, but I don't care. Somebody needed to 'slap' Katara.

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DragonJadefire In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-08 01:43:41 +0000 UTC]

Make her go after Zuko and try to explain to him and he can be all hostile and firebender-y.

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paintedbluerose In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-03-08 01:47:20 +0000 UTC]

Alright. I don't know how good it will be, but I'll try something. And maybe add some Zutara fluff into it somehow. I like that 'firebender-y'. Is that even a word?

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DragonJadefire In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-08 01:49:38 +0000 UTC]

Um...I'm not sure. But I say it is!

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paintedbluerose In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-03-08 02:01:25 +0000 UTC]

Ok, if you say so. I just got an idea to continue it. Yeah, I'm gonna have to write it up in my head and see if I can collect all my ideas together. Hopefully I can post it up by Monday. Depending on how busy I am this weekend. And how well it is turning out.

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DragonJadefire In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-08 02:09:34 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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paintedbluerose In reply to DragonJadefire [2008-03-08 13:54:34 +0000 UTC]

I hope you're happy. [link]

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DragonJadefire In reply to paintedbluerose [2008-03-09 00:00:03 +0000 UTC]

Yes! I'm happy!

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