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Published: 2012-03-25 05:57:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 182; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 8
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This ugly little baby was my first and last horrible attempt at sequential art. Like all my stories it never got past the conceptual stage.
My original name for this story was "Touched" and it featured the two characters from my "rave" piece. [link]
It was about two "gods" that came from space and gave the two main characters powers but nether character knew that the other had been chosen despite being best friends.
Like always criticism is welcome. I like the abuse.
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It's pretty ugly...
NOT!
I like how you gave it a somewhat cool color scheme, and the lines/detail is simple, yet effective. :>
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Why, thank you! The positive reinforcement is appreciated.
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Oh my god this isn't ugly! You have so much talent- please don't doubt yourself ^.^ the muted colors, lines and expression make this so lovely!
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I agree with Kri, this is totally awesome, the small details with the hatching and what not..very nice. Love it.
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Why, Thank you! Comments of encouragement are always welcome.
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ugly? I hardly think so
The colour and atmosphere is really well done
but I am confused as to what is happening (but im a confused person in general)
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Thank you for the compliment.
Yeah, I'm going to have to work on my coherency If I'm going to try and tell a story. Right now it just looks very confusing and random.
I believe its supposed to be a robot following him down the side walk but its just the antenna sticking up through the ground disguised with a coat and hat.When he notices it it busts out of the ground.
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ah the following part i understood
just the pipes or robot parts
Thought the sewerpipes came up to eat him
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Yeah, I really spent absolutely no time trying to design a robot.
I think it would have helped if I had put a panel showing the robots head coming out. Maybe show the coat and hat falling off or something. It might have made it a little less confusing.
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haha its no issue, experimentation is fun
anyway i can't complain, I can't do anywhere a good as this
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You have some really really nice drawings. I think if you tried you could do a lot better job then me.
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haha, i've tried many a comic strip
lets just say my characters change height, gender, age in every panel
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Its hard for me to get my characters facial features to look the same every time I draw them.
I do a lot of erasing and redrawing, and some times even then I just can't get it right. Its really frustrating!
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I still have pose problems and anatomy
only really started doing bodies a month ago or so
They still look hilariously disproportionate
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I know what you mean.
I still have problems with anatomy and usually have to look at a reference to get it right.
A lot of times the poses of my characters also turn out very stiff and unnatural.
I should probably just get off my lazy buns and do a ton of figure studies. That would probably help me more then any thing.
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im in a refusal to use references
Probably slowing my down, but heck
I prefer taking notice of the awkwardness myself
I usually put the drawing away for 2 weeks, then look at it (and cringe )
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