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Published: 2006-09-24 19:14:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 817; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 7
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First thing first; I hate names. It should be randomized auto by DA!Red, blue and white is the colors of hte norwegian flag, she is norwegian, I am, the truck is, we are in norway. So I thought it would be a fitting tittle
Anway, day seven of my 1 deviation every day for 30 days.
Best picture so far I daresay
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Ill tell her you said so xD
Sure shell be glad ^^
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I live in america - rarely you see people of that skin tone(mine is exactly like that) well some but anyway - very nice
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I like the soft colors in it and the subtleness of it. The pose is good and the expression too.
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This is beautiful. The lighting, composition and focus are great.
The only thing I think this pic needs is a better title - one that says something about the model. She is just so intriguing to me, that "Red, blue and white" just doesn't do her any justice
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I hate names :/
Cant come up with anything
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Well, what does it make you feel? Your title doesn't have to be something that everyone can understand. Something abstract works well in many cases
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Very clear. When photos are crisp and clear like this, they are so much better. ^^
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If only the lighting was a bit better. The glare in the top left corner is a bit of a same. Though I like the coloured background and the model you chose as she kind of matches it (red hair, white skin, blue clothes). Great pose too.
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The glare is on purpose
Got one without it to, but this is better
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I like the soft lighting on the skin creating all these soft subtle tones against the hair which seems to grow more aggressive as it moves downward in the frame. The blue in the background also helps bring out her eyes.
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Wonderful photo. She has such fair skin that she glows in the low lighting. Very nice color and contrast balance overall.
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wow. I like how the red white and blue pertain to her face as well as the wall behind her. The red of her cheeks, the blue of her eyes, and the paleness of her skin. Love it
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Thanks once more!
Glad your liking my gallery
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Jippi, flere landsmenn! Bra jobba her, veldig fint bilde! Og det komiske er at jeg ogsΓ₯ har rΓΈdt hΓ₯r og heter Ingrid.. *lmao*
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You asked me to give you some feedback in regards to some of your recent glam images - so here goes:
I am gonna be nitpicky on this - as you asked me to help you improve your work. But before I go into specifics - I want you to know that I do like this image. There are just a few small things I would improve upon.
One is for Ingrid your model... I think her chin should have been up a little more - so that the viewer could see her neck. I think it would be more flattering.
What if you had moved her to the right side of the frame - as opposed to more towards the center? What if you lowered your frame - and chopped some of the extra headroom so you could keep her entire left arm (right side) in the frame?
Lastly... where is the rest of her right hand? It's hidden behind her head, of course... This is a really nitpicky thing that bothers me to no end in my own work... I would have had her move her hand just a little bit out - so you could see it all. It just looks cleaner that way...
Stuff to think about... but your work is improving.
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I agree generally with most, but specifically the tilt of the head. That needs adjustment. Shes a very lovely girl but the way her face is tilted is akward.
The modeling can be adjusted; the composition and more technical aspects are harder to work out
But this girl is so intriguing that you could throw her in a barren field in a potato sack and it would still be nice to look at...hehe
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Yeah, I agree with the modelling thing. Ive been looking around for poses and stuff today. Preparing for tomorow. If the wheater turns out ok!
Ill try to do another wall picture and do something similar to your suggestion and see if I also think its better like that. But it sounds reasonable.
Didnt even think about the hand before you mentioned it
Ill see if I figure out something clever by tomorow and see if I can get it even better ^^
Thanks for good comment!
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You will always be at a disadvantage being a male and dealing with females as subjects. Not to mention - there's always a difference between what a photographer sees... and what a model sees... in terms of a quality image.
The more aware you are of flattering poses for the female body - the better your photos will be and the more likly a model will be to work with you.
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Aye
Almost makes one prefer male models. But only almost.
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her skin and hair are a nice complement to the background. her rosy cheeks are very pretty too.
great shot.
how about patriotic as a title? don't know if you are or not...
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Nah, Ill keep the title for the moment
But thanks !
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THanks, Ill let her know you think so
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Quick! Someone call Spyderman because Mary Jane is found! lol You remind me of Mary Jane. Who kidnapped you this time?
XD . . .Sorry If I offended you in any way
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Its not me
Its my girlfriend xD
So I guess that makes me out as the kidnapper of mary jane!
DONT CALL THE COPS ON ME PLEASE!
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oops sorry about that. I see all your girlfriends pics on your main page. lol It looks like you are chaining her left hand to you. XD
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the only complaint i have would be the light in the upper left hand corner. it detracts from the clarity of the rest of the image
+fav
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^Agreed. I can't help but feel that the corner light is distracting to the eye.
However, the model is very nice, love the hair color, goes well.
Might have to book me a ticket to Norway!
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lens flares and light that white washes things....its my pet peeve because my camera does it so bad sometimes...or i will have the perfect shot and then in hindsight and editing i see something like that.
but its still a lovely image, i favorited it because it was unnexpected and i liked it
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Actually, it was my choice to keep that light, I got one version without it, I thought it gave the image some...spark?
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