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Paladin360 — MLP: Nuriel the story of Beginning war

Published: 2017-09-05 06:18:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 321; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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Description Sorry for bad photo shot ;u; hope you like it ^u^ which is my hand is getting really tired to do lots of detail, color and trying to add more stuff in it ;o; Even though? I keep forgetting what kind of stuff to add :c

You can fix my story 

Nuriel Shire : Thank you Solace
Solace: You're welcome. Enjoy yourself and don't work too hard, ok?
Nuriel Shire: I will *watches him go and walks to the desk* *sigh* well... Hope the others are alright. I'm Going to figure out how to push them back... *starts sitting and places her mind magic on the table* I'm Going to tell you something about our first war and defense of our city. It began in Winduiume City, and was recorded by a surviving soldier. His name is Talia

Beginning of the war at the Winduiume City.

Talia: *wakes up from being unconscious* Ugh...
Soldier: Wake up! WAKE UP! Talia? GET UP soldier
Talia: *stands up* Huh?
Soldier: This tower wall is being hit and the ceiling might fall on you. Luckily you were just unconscious, but we have move on. This city wall cannot handle much more any longer *gives him a sword* we must keep defense at all cause understand!?
Talia: Yes sir
Soldier: Very well. *goes to other place*
Talia: Dang it *runs outside and sees the raining fire arrows, and fire ball firing at the wall. continues watching them*
Soldier 2: *continues firing arrows*
Soldier 3: Keep firing, Keep firing... *gets hit by fire ball*
Talia: This is a nightmare... *looks over the outside wall and sees a huge battle on the ground* 
Sky Stream: Talia? WATCH OUT?! *tackles the void army and finishes him with her sword*
Talia: Thanks, Sky!
Sky Stream: You have to look out for yourself, ok? our defenses cannot handdle it no longer
Talia: How about our reinforcement?
Sky Stream: They will come at dawn...
Soldier 4: Commander? our enemy has reached the wall
Sky Stream: They already reached it? They mean business! Talia? we most push them back.
Talia: Yes ma'am.
Sky Stream: We need 30 troops to come with me NOW!!!

Talia and 30 troops follow Commander Sky Stream. Winduiume City is the biggest battle in the entire world. If that City falls? They will start an invasion to crush the Guardians. Just like Crimson and the Lost Empire. They've already fallen, but not the Guardian. Oh the wall.

Sky Stream: *slashing and dodges every attack*
Soldier 5: There's too many!
Sky Stream: Don't retreat. We must not let them win no matter what... *feels shaking on the ground*
Soldier 6: VOID EATER!!!
Sky Stream: DON'T GIVE UP WE MUST... *sees more void eaters coming out from the ground* There is... too many... *looks up at the sky and sees over wrath flying* It's over...
Talia: SKY?! *dash slashes the Void army and hears it*
Aquarian Raiser: *is blasting every Void Eater* RED THUNDER!? NO MERCY!!!!
*60 Red Thunder bolts start attacking*
Aquarian Raiser: Commander!? *walks toward her* Snap out of it!!!
Sky Stream: Huh? *shakes her head*
Talia: Grand Guardian?
Aquarian Raiser: You need to keep your mind together. We must stay alive no matter what.
Loon Night: Aquarian? I have to head over to west wall. They need help
Aquarian Raiser: Ok, and good luck. I'll have to deal with this place.
Loon Raiser: You two, FOLLOW ME RED THUNDER!!! *flys away to the west wall*
Aquarian Raiser: Commander? You need to keep fighting ok?
Sky Stream: Ok...
Aquarian Raiser: Good, You? take care of her, ok?
Talia: I will
Aquarian Raiser: I'm going to help them out *flys and blasts them with mega aqua blast*
Talia: Sky Stream?
Sky Stream: She's, right. I have to stay alive and we must fight, and do whatever we can... *watchs every soldier being killed* There are so many of them... 3 against one? we're being outnumber
Talia: I know... but we have to try
Sky Stream: Try? how long do we hold this city? I know this city is going to fall soon. Without our Three Guardians' help...

Nuriel Shire: And that is? I or we are the coward. But then thanks for Aquarian who's convinced us to join them in battle. It is getting late anyway and I have to get some rest. I'm Going to tell more stories about them later. I have to head over the Great City now.
Music I've listen
www.youtube.com/watch?v=j-iD0R…

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Comments: 17

Frollo7797 [2017-09-18 04:16:26 +0000 UTC]

You always manage to create such wonderful and amazing scenes!!! :clalp:

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Paladin360 In reply to Frollo7797 [2017-09-19 03:16:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I've did try there to add more stuff ^^ but then, I keep forgetting what to add there >.>

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Frollo7797 In reply to Paladin360 [2017-09-25 23:12:05 +0000 UTC]

I undertand

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AquaPegasus [2017-09-05 18:56:09 +0000 UTC]

I love her expression, and of course I love your backgrounds!   

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Paladin360 In reply to AquaPegasus [2017-09-07 02:30:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^ well I might going to update for story there, because? I'm getting tired of people said to my difficult to read and bad grammar. Going to update later there. But? you can help me edit or fix my story if you want ^^ getting tired of people keep saying difficult to read DX 

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AquaPegasus In reply to Paladin360 [2017-09-07 20:27:17 +0000 UTC]

No problem, and I'm sorry to hear that. I would most certainly want to help if that is what you want! You would just need to tell me what to do!   

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Paladin360 In reply to AquaPegasus [2017-09-08 02:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... :c can you help me to fix my story? if this is ok for you there *being nervous*    

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AquaPegasus In reply to Paladin360 [2017-09-08 14:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Of course it's ok with me! This what I think we will do! (if you have any problems with any of this let me know.) I'll go a head, and edit any grammar mistakes that might be in there, send it to you, and see what you think. If you find something you don't like edit that, and send it to me so I can check for grammar mistakes again. Just make sure to explain to me what I messed up please, that way I know what to do. We'll be doing all of this through the DA note system if that's alright with you!

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Paladin360 In reply to AquaPegasus [2017-09-09 06:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for huge help there ;u; I really like them to read what I've did for my fantasy story ;u; and ok ^^ I'm going to see what you've did there for fixing my grammar mistake ^^ and I'm alright with that also take your time to edit ^u^

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AquaPegasus In reply to Paladin360 [2017-09-09 15:27:28 +0000 UTC]

No problem!   

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MindyLunar [2017-09-05 13:50:29 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS GORGEOUS!! >w<

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Paladin360 In reply to MindyLunar [2017-09-07 02:28:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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MindyLunar In reply to Paladin360 [2017-09-07 15:43:58 +0000 UTC]

Youre welcome my friend! ^^

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shazzz999 [2017-09-05 12:43:31 +0000 UTC]

Sweet. S

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Paladin360 In reply to shazzz999 [2017-09-07 02:28:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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Crazysimsgirl4 [2017-09-05 11:29:17 +0000 UTC]

OOooooo, this is so awesome!  

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Paladin360 In reply to Crazysimsgirl4 [2017-09-07 02:28:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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