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Published: 2017-03-21 06:19:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 595; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 3
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Description Star Chaser, he living in Sunset Town, which she always go to the forest and nighttime aswell, basically nighttime. She always going out at nighttime alot when she was a filly. Though she never getting tired when never going to sleep, well sometime she going to sleep though. At the forest she in. She go through the forest, well about to enter the forest. She then saw the armor and the machinery cover by the grass and vine. She take a look the Guardian Ballista hunter.

Star Chaser: Huh, this thing seem doesn't work any more... it is very old *take a little closer* Hm... *sigh* wish I can fix this machine up *looking around and saw broken old helmet from Guardians* huh another one heh, it look covering up by the grass... *hear the sound of screaming of war and look up fast* Who's there? *saw lots of the grave of Guardian being buried* it look very sad and it look like a war going on on this forest? *looking the town* Um, I should going back to the town.

She going back to the town, which she don't wanted to go in the forest. She being scare when she going in the forest. So she decided to go back to the town. When she in the town? she just went home seeing her parents.

Star Chaser: Mom and Dad? I'm HOME!!! *sitting in the sofa and doing nothing*
Cosmic Star: Hi, sweetie ^^ and welcome home! so how your days going?
Star Chaser: Well, my days is pretty good, just saw the old stuff in the forest
Cosmic Star: Yu- wait? did you say in the forest?
Star Chaser: Um, yes.. why?
Cosmic Star: Those forest is little Dangerous for going alone there. Beside some pony saw the old machine are still active
Star Chaser: Machine is still active?
Cosmic Star: Yup ^^ and please don't go inside that forest, please?
Star Chaser: Ok, mom. I won't

When her mom saying those forest is still little dangerous when the machines is still active and wondering around in it. Though, she still remember the screaming and battling in the forest. At night time. She then go outside to see some stars

Cosmic Star: Be careful sweetie D:
Star Chaser: I will ^^ *went outside at night while watching the star *running pass through the hill* This is gorgeous to watching some stars over the hill ^^ *hear something* huh? *is go after the sound and stop* that sound is coming from... *looking the forest* um... I should *hearing something in trouble* I'LL COMING D: *ran into the forest at night* Um... hello? *is continue hearing the voice and saw the bird wing being stuck on the tree logs. Saw two rampage Ballista Hunter is after it* Oh no D: *teleport on front of them* Stay away from that bird!!! *using the magic blast at the old machinery but doesn't affected* What? that impossible?

She being surprise when those Ballista Hunter doesn't take damage by the magic blast. She didn't know those machine is design for heavy frontline, ambush, and support the troops. Which they created those armor for resisted any magic attack during the great war. The only way is to smash it. When Star Chaser is about to being scare when they is loaded Ballista bolts. When she ran and tried to figuring out how to destroy it. Then she saw the boulder next to the hill, thingy... When the Ballista is falling into the trap

Star Chaser: HEY?!! SAY GOODBYE TO THIS *pushing the boulder and crushing the two Ballista Hunter and destroy* Few that was heavy then I thought... oh, that bird? *ran toward the bird* are you ok?
Bird: *is being stuck on the tree logs while watching her being nervous*
Star Chaser: Don't worry ^^ I'll get you out and I won't hurt you ^^ *using the magic to lift the tree logs away*
Bird: *continue looking at her while his wing is broken*
Star Chaser: *putting the tree logs down* Much better ^^ *saw his wing is being hurt* Poor thing. Your wing was broken. Well, I'll fix you up ^^ *using the magic healing to heal his wing* Much better ^^
Bird: *standing up while his wing is open and try to flap his wing. Flying around her being happy*
Star Chaser: *continue watching him* now your wing was fix, so, um... looking around the forest... I...

When she heal the bird wings? she didn't know where she go back home. She is lost in the wood. But luckily

Bird: *is trying to help her*
Star Chaser: Are you going to help me?
Bird: *is nod alittle and flying through the forest*
Star Chaser: Wait for me *ran after him and saw the exit*
Bird: *flying around*
Star Chaser: *watching him flying around her* thank yuo very much for showing me where is the exit was but I have to go. *ran to her home*
Bird: *land on the tree branch while watching her*

When she at home? she sleeping on her bed very long while she was a long night she is staying. When her friends show up.

Bird: *landed on the window and pecking her window*
Star Chaser: *is still sleeping on her bed*
Bird: *looking around try to get in and continue pecking her window*
Star Chaser: Huh? turn her body to the side and saw same bird* You? *standing up and go toward the window. Open up while the bird went inside there house* Why are you doing?
Bird: *chirping happy*
Star Chaser: Heh, you sound happy ^^ *saw him flying around her room* Oh, you wanted to stay with me?
Bird: *Landed her head and chirp*
Star Chaser: *giggle* well you can stay ^^ but I have to tell my mom first *went to see her mom* mom? can I keep this bird, please?
Cosmic Star: Huh? *looking at it* Of course ^^ but you have to take care with it, ok?
Star Chaser: Ok, I will mom ^u^ *ran outside while the bird is following her*
Cosmic Star: *sigh* She has a feather friends she has* 

Star Chaser and her bird are playing outside at the backyard. She having fun for playing her bird around. Hour later when the bird is falling asleep in her room. She not tired anyway. She just went back outside to watching the stars some more. Even though? She just realize she has no pony friends after all. She keep spending time at night all by herself with no friends. When she walking and walking she saw somepony wondering at night. She going to check it out. She check it out, she saw a colt while he is looking at the stars. Then?

Star Chaser: *cough*
Paladin: Huh? who goes there?
Star Chaser: *coming out being the bushes* it just me hehe ^-^;;;
Paladin: Oh... hi, why are you here?
Star Chaser: I just saw you while I was walking around by myself and you? why are you here?
Paladin: Well, I was here for being alone, and watching some star. I was about to ask my friends to see the star more. But he being sick
Star Chaser: Oh dare, hope your friends are feeling better
Paladin: Yeah, I was about to show him something, too
Star Chaser: Really? that be very cool you wanted to show your friends ^^
Paladin: Yup, here what I'm showing *using the magic of very bright light with mini star is flying everywhere*
Star Chaser: *watching it* wow, that was gorgeous
Paladin: I know right? I was proud of myself, when I learn difficult magic
Star Chaser: Yeah it look like it ^^
Paladin: Yeah which I getting tired for using all my magic there ^^ so do you like to hang out with me? while we're here?
Star Chaser: Sure, why not ^^

When they both hanging out together at midnight. they both talking about rescuing the bird in the forest, magic and more things they are saying. But sadly, he really miss his friends, High Night  which he was about to show his magic. So here decided to show him a next day if he feeling better. Even though, they become a friends. after all, she being shocked when he told his names, which he is a prince of the Diamond Empire. Tomorrow at night, Star Chaser, Paladin are visiting his friends.

Star Chaser: Is it his house?
Paladin: Yup *saw the door is opening* Hi High Night
High Night: *is holding the telescope with his magic* Hello Paladin, and *looking at her*
Star Chaser: Oh, hi. I'm Star Chaser, Paladin new friends ^^
Paladin: Yup, I just met her from yesterday while you are sick ^^
High Night: Oh, that great ^^ and I know you know my name while he saying my name, right, Paladin ;D
Paladin: Heh, yup X3
High Night: So lets start going, shall we?

When those three went to the hill. Setting up his telescope. Hight Night, is still little sick but feeling little much better by now.

Star Chaser: Is that your telescope, High Night?
High Night: Yup *looking through the telescope*
Star Chaser: I never seen it before or never using it
High Night: Really? huh, but luckily you can tried it ^^ *step back a little from his telescope*
Star Chaser: Thanks *looking through the telescope* Oh boi, lots of shooting star and some planet I can see!!!
Paladin: *laying down on the grass* Are you having fun, Star Chaser?
Star Chaser: Yeah, I am *continue watching*
Paladin: Oh, by the was High Night? I wanted to show you something about my best magic I've learn ^^
High Night: Oh, really? I can't wait to see you'll going to show me ^^
Star Chaser: *stop looking and looking at them* Yeah, his magic he using is gorgeous I've seen ^u^
Paladin: Yeah, she already saw it X3 well here goes nothing *using the magic of very bright light with mini star is flying everywhere*
High Night: Whoa, that was pretty gorgeous and look hard to using it to
Paladin: Yup ^^
Star Chaser: *middle of them* You guys seem like my best friends I've ever had
High Night: mhm, what she say
Paladin: yeah... but I have to go now in six days
High Night: Yeah... but we can meet together again, right? just like when you first visit me and become friends
Star Chaser: And me too you met me on yesterday

When they talking, and talking at night. They decided to going to sleep together at night. In six days later. Paladin have to go back home to the palace and waving at them. But, future further away.

Star Chaser message: Hi, Paladin my dare friends I am so happy when I met you. Even I met your awesome friends, High Night. Which he is nice. High Night and I was at the train together to see the city, which we both never seen it before ^^. And which we in the Diamond Hope, and saw your another best friends, Madame June  which she played cello. Which is pretty nice she playing it. After all that part? we were celebrating the Diamond Shire birthday? I was scare when the second war has begun. Even though? I seen Neo Fern  are saving me while I was surrounded by those Skeleton. But he save me. Which is all you friends I've met is pretty great and great idea for friend reunion you've sended ^^ and I'm glad I'm went to see all your friends to get a chance to meet them. So yeah see you later, Paladin
*end message*

Paladin friends from OC backstories

M=Mare                                 P= Pegasus
S=Stallion                              U= Unicorn
E= Earth

(M)(E) Sarina Ring  (living in Diamond Hope City) (She first met him while she walking around on the park when he being fall) [She use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(S)(U) Aeon Light  (living in Diamond Hope City) (He second met him during at midnight and wake him up while his music is very loud) [He use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(S)(E) Lone Star  (Living in Diamond Western) (He third met him while on rodeo in the Diamond Kingdom)
(M)(U) Star Chaser  (living in Diamond Sunset town) (She fourth met him while she taking a walk at night, by herself without any friends)
(M)(E) Sarry Tune  (living in Diamond Falls) (She Fifth met him while she on top on the rock playing some flute) [She use to live in Diamond Sea Shore City]
(M)(U) Golden Peach  (living in Diamond Falls) (She sixth met him while she's needed help gathering peach)
(S)(E) Neo Fern  (living in Sunset town) (He seventh met him while hanging around with his friend Thunder strike at the Castle) [He use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(S)(P) Thunder Strike  (living in Cloud Citadel) (He eighth met him while hanging around with his friend Neo Fern at the Castle) [He use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(M)(U) High Night  (living in Sunset Town) (He ninth met him met while he in the middle of the night, watching the star)
(S)(P) Cirrus Cloud  (Living in Hurricane city) (He tenth met him when he being nervous alot and never talk to no pony alot)
(M)(E) Judy  (Living in Diamond Rose City) (She eleventh met him when she is very shy and afraid) 
(M)(E) Madame June  (Living in Diamond Hope City) (She twelfth met him at the stage in the Royal Palace)

Music I've listen:
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Comments: 35

ashleythegamer200 [2018-01-28 12:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Lovely

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Paladin360 In reply to ashleythegamer200 [2018-01-29 04:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and XD thanks for lots of fav and comment there XD

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ashleythegamer200 In reply to Paladin360 [2018-01-29 11:21:09 +0000 UTC]

XD np

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ComfyDove [2017-03-23 22:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work.

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Paladin360 In reply to ComfyDove [2017-03-24 21:29:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks which I tried to do for the background and it turn out great ^u^

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ComfyDove In reply to Paladin360 [2017-03-28 19:43:13 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem! ^w^

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Finity-Splatter [2017-03-22 11:44:33 +0000 UTC]

I love the bird and the background scene!!!! ^^ You did a terrific job bub! :3

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Paladin360 In reply to Finity-Splatter [2017-03-23 04:38:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks I did tried my best for doing the background there ^^

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Finity-Splatter In reply to Paladin360 [2017-04-03 13:08:44 +0000 UTC]

You did really awesome bub!!! ^^

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Frollo7797 [2017-03-22 09:08:36 +0000 UTC]

The background and the scene are awesome, and so is the backstory!!

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Paladin360 In reply to Frollo7797 [2017-03-23 04:38:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^ I tried though ^^ when I reread what I did? I was like, "wow, so many miss type, and missing word there ' which I don't even feeling like it fix her backstories X3

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Frollo7797 In reply to Paladin360 [2017-03-23 07:22:13 +0000 UTC]

ah, the typos become secondary when the story has good content ^^

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Bio-Iridescence [2017-03-22 01:20:05 +0000 UTC]

beautiful background, and an even more beautiful story! you are simply amazing Paladin ^^

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Paladin360 In reply to Bio-Iridescence [2017-03-23 04:36:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^ which I'm getting tired for doing long stories there and lots of miss spell, miss type and missing word DX And I tried to do more background there ^u^

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Bio-Iridescence In reply to Paladin360 [2017-03-23 23:59:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I can see that haha. Your background work is improving a lot there

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Paladin360 In reply to Bio-Iridescence [2017-03-24 03:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Heh, yeah X3 and which I always getting tired though ;u; which I have to catch up so much deviation there lie a 831 there >.> and which I going to do there story in 8:00 PM ;u; which I schedule myself   

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Bio-Iridescence In reply to Paladin360 [2017-03-25 01:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I know that feel! Lol I have to catch up on my stuff too

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Paladin360 In reply to Bio-Iridescence [2017-03-25 02:32:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah X3 well, sometime is getting too much >.> for a Deviation stack there >.>

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Bio-Iridescence In reply to Paladin360 [2017-03-25 07:02:45 +0000 UTC]

Hehe XD I might have 4 things this weekend

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Paladin360 In reply to Bio-Iridescence [2017-03-26 04:34:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh, 4 weekend? X3

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Bio-Iridescence In reply to Paladin360 [2017-03-26 17:34:38 +0000 UTC]

possibly 4 pictures 

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Paladin360 In reply to Bio-Iridescence [2017-03-27 04:22:53 +0000 UTC]

Ah, ok X3

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Bio-Iridescence In reply to Paladin360 [2017-03-27 17:13:21 +0000 UTC]

jk just one X3

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IzzoSStv [2017-03-21 15:52:10 +0000 UTC]

I love the body motion 😍

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Paladin360 In reply to IzzoSStv [2017-03-23 04:31:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks and I tried ^u^

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Comet-The-Blue-Cat [2017-03-21 13:26:36 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful :3 

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Paladin360 In reply to Comet-The-Blue-Cat [2017-03-23 04:31:31 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Comet-The-Blue-Cat In reply to Paladin360 [2017-03-23 13:15:34 +0000 UTC]

You´re welcome

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Victoria-Luna [2017-03-21 13:13:34 +0000 UTC]

As always beautiful <3

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Paladin360 In reply to Victoria-Luna [2017-03-23 04:31:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks   

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Victoria-Luna In reply to Paladin360 [2017-03-23 06:56:04 +0000 UTC]

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colt785 [2017-03-21 13:09:20 +0000 UTC]

its looks cool  

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Paladin360 In reply to colt785 [2017-03-23 04:31:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Golden-Notes-Art [2017-03-21 06:59:27 +0000 UTC]

Nice. good job

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Paladin360 In reply to Golden-Notes-Art [2017-03-23 04:31:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks which I tried though for putting the background there ~w~ and the photo there >.>

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