pynku [2004-07-08 23:29:38 +0000 UTC]
From the eyes up it looks like Dan...where you went wrong seems to be in the cheeks, nose, mouth (which look fine, just not all that Dan-like). Nice shading and such, though.
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Feleda [2004-07-08 04:38:11 +0000 UTC]
I'd say the main things that could change to make this look more "Dan-like" are to shorten the eyebrows (they don't go out that far in the pic), the front part of his hair is also somewhat more divided, and where the necklines start- they should be drawn somewhat deeper back. Er, yea, something like that.
However, I really like the shading, and his eyes are very Dan-like. Great jobs with the lips as well- somehow whenever I try and draw both lips on guys, they turn out loooking like a girl. Keep up the good work, and I hope my comments made sense.
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paleweevil In reply to Feleda [2004-07-08 06:14:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! That really helps a lot. ^_^; I know I did the hair a bit off ... Heh, that's because by the time I was at the hair, I didn't think it looked enough like him to try to make the hair perfect. *snicker*
Thanks, though!! I really appreciate your comments and help. ^_^;
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