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Description AFTER LIFE
my original story, and these are my cast of characters.

i love em. so much. so glad its done. they really aren't manga characters, i'm actually writing a story for them, which i might put parts on DA.

This sheet is my color reference for them, there outfits constantly change so these outfits are just something casual.


do not use any of my ideas <3.
INFO

Life
Life, is in literal terms life. She can give anyone life. She is extremely friendly, fascinated with inventions and technology. Her newest interest is human cloning, people giving life without her involvement.
likes: food-alot of food. baby animals, controlling others, playing games with peoples heads.
dislikes: when Death screws up her plans.

Death
Just like life, he is death. Death is very solemn and unemotional. he used to have a fascination with humans but now thinks they are all the same, and all deserve what ever 'fate ' gives them. Hates the games Life plays with him, and doesn't like useless deaths. (has never been the same since WWII)
likes: when people are happy, when everything goes according to plan, video games, horror movies.
dislikes: telling people they are dead, People who are stuck in limbo, children, animals, when people try to be friends with him, people who brake the rules

Sable
Recently deceased thanks to a game Life was playing. She is a Anima Mortis someone who is dead but died before fate played its course. she is not supposed to be dead, therefore stuck in limbo. Life decided she will be Death's apprentice and is now learning the world between the living and dead. (Sable is the main character.)
Likes: saturday morning cartoons, dancing, art, her friends
Dislikes: being dead, deaths rules, and that she is stuck in the world of the living but no longer able to see anyone she has ever known.

Sin
Sin is a Anima Mortis like Sable, but he is a different type, a creature not controlled by the fates saved him from dieing and now he has no actual life strings connecting him to this world. He was supposed to die when he was a child. Sin real name is Godric Dasilva but he absolutely hates that. He wears contacts for unknown reasons, and gives everybody nick names so he cant get attached to them. Nothing personal.
Likes: Sci-fi television, learning history, motorcycles, reading, (is quite the nerd), Doctor Who, women.
Dislikes: That he can never have a family, being alone, animals, stuttering, the fact that his emotions control him so much.

Loira
Oh Loira, a demon. Loiras real name is Magne; but since Sin is Portuguese he calls her Loira, meaning blonde.
Loira is a demon who loves to follow Sin around, she was once in an insane asylum in the demon dimension. she escaped and settled on taking over the corpse of a child. Loira doesn't age but she is much older then she appears. she likes to pretend she is a child, and loves the taste of human flesh. She thinks of Sin as her older brother.
Ability: Animate objects ; mainly toys.
Likes: humans, toys, flowers, cute stuff
Dislikes: Other demons. people who hurt sin.


- side info about the world -

Anima Mortis
Anima Mortis
Species 1 are people who died before there should have.
Species 2 are people who lived when they should have died.
+ Get sick easily
+ No one remembers them
---- meaning. you remember them on a day to day basis, but if you don't interact with them for lets say about a week, you will no longer remember they ever existed.
+ Can't change other peoples fates
---- if person X was supposed to marry person Y then they can't force someone to marry someone else.
+ Cant have children.
+ People unknowingly don't realize that your there.
----if Anima Mortis people wave a gun around but stay silent no one will even notice they are there. if they scream though and make noises it will draw attention to them, but people are less likely to care and will keep walking like nothing ever happened.
+Some Anima Mortis go insane.
+How ever they died/ were supposed to die will effect them in different ways.
---- example; Sable was shot so when she see's a gun she starts to hyperventilate. Sin was supposed to drown so when it rains he gets very weak and tired.
(work in progress. :] i'll work on this more later.)

Shades
Creatures of the shadows that eat souls. Death's job isn't to watch over every person that dies, but to take care of souls/humans that Shades are tracking.

Demons
Demon Dimension have there own rules. The fates watch over regular humans so that they follow there appropriate destiny. But Demons like humans for many different reasons; food, sex, slavery. But they specifically like Anima Mortis humans because they are not protected by Fates.

More information to come, this is also so i can keep track of everything. so if i forget here it is so i can look at it. :] things may change but yayyy im happy to finally submit this!!!

Ask questions if something confuses you, because it helps me work out the bugs in my story.



ps: much bigger if u download
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Comments: 69

Pancake-Senpaii In reply to ??? [2011-06-17 17:11:55 +0000 UTC]

i would love that C:

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darkmoon-13 In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2011-06-18 15:41:42 +0000 UTC]

yay thanks ^^ and done [link]

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StillDollSawaii [2011-04-10 06:21:25 +0000 UTC]

SO COOL O.O

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to StillDollSawaii [2011-04-12 16:29:28 +0000 UTC]

hehe ty!

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RachelUchiha [2011-04-09 00:27:37 +0000 UTC]

amazing ^^

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to RachelUchiha [2011-04-12 16:28:25 +0000 UTC]

lol ty

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darkmoon-13 [2011-04-06 14:13:51 +0000 UTC]

wow life has awesome style and i love deaths casual pose (wow there are so many things in that sentance that i never thought i'd ever say O.o)

still...i want lifes bag!!! gah so cool

anyway cool concept, having a story with the main characther being deaths apprentice seems like a cool idea. can't wait to see more pics with them.

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to darkmoon-13 [2011-04-06 15:33:40 +0000 UTC]

lmao u right. life has an awesome style, deaths casual pose. definitely not words you would think to put together!! XD woooo

and hell yes i want to buy that purse as well!

thank you i look foreword to drawing them more :] yayy i can't wait to draw them more ^^

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darkmoon-13 In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2011-04-07 22:44:54 +0000 UTC]

lol deaths casual pose would make an awesome emo band name though

ah if only i could sew without doing serious damage to fabric and fingers *sigh*

yay well if the sin pic is anything to go by then....

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chiapple [2011-04-01 00:52:42 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THE STORY!
Really, when I saw the characters I said 'cool' and then I read the info and I was like It's a veryy original and well planned story :3 Your characters are amazing, their designs too and the info you put here is so fcking interesting that I reaally want to read your story! :3

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to chiapple [2011-04-02 18:13:42 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad you took the time to read it thank you very much, ^^ i am still working on figuring out the entire plot but im glad so far you approve ;]

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chiapple In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2011-04-05 21:42:54 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't stop my eyes! Especially because your characters are very original and not a copy&paste with different colours from other cliches.
I totally approve it d(ouo)b I hope I can read it once you publish it somewhere x3

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to chiapple [2011-04-07 15:55:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks, yeah i dont want to be average, i wanted to be original :] and not follow any other designs.
thank you

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No9E [2011-03-31 22:09:28 +0000 UTC]

can loira use woodoo dools?

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to No9E [2011-04-02 15:54:49 +0000 UTC]

hmm nvr thought of that, but i dont think so ^^

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No9E In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2011-04-02 21:49:20 +0000 UTC]

so it's ok? ok^^

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akira144 [2011-03-30 23:07:32 +0000 UTC]

I really like Life's color combo's Her design is really nice

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to akira144 [2011-03-31 03:14:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^-^ <3
Life was fun to make XD

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NeelaSinteen [2011-03-30 19:36:26 +0000 UTC]

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Life is so beautiful but she seems like the flirty type when I first looked at her (just saying ).

Death is really hot but he kinda scares me (life scares me too with all her "plans").

Poor Sable, going through that must be a nightmare.

Sin is awesome as always.

Loira is so cute but she looks like one of those creepy dolls thats eyes follow you.

I have a couple of questions but I'm ask you one now
just a random stupid question

there is a sin, but what of virtue?

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to NeelaSinteen [2011-03-30 20:12:50 +0000 UTC]

wooo long comment XD

Life is the flirty dangerous type C:
>]
lol yesh >] loira is supposed to be like those dolls, those little porcelain dolls that are creepy beyond belief.

lol well sin is just a nik name, cuz in korean it means God. C: wuhahaha >D but you can always make someone named virtue ;]
nxt question?

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NeelaSinteen In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2011-03-30 23:27:06 +0000 UTC]

O.K. dump time! Feel free to answer as many or as few as you want

1.Is Anima Mortis another world? if it is does earth even exist? does that make them aliens?

2.If Sable's a ghost or something like that can she interact others like her?

3.does death and life have each their own lair or something like that or do they basicly live among others?

4.If Loira's a demon in a child's body then what does she really look like?

5.This is the main cast right so when do we get to see your minor characters, if any?

6.If Sin has no actual life strings then he can't actually die? what happens if anyone calls him by his real name?

AND thats all I have. hope I asked some significant questions, even if I didn't atleast I got it off my chest

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to NeelaSinteen [2011-03-31 03:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Woooo i get to think <3 lol helps me figure it out so thank you for the questions

1. Anima Mortis is latin for Death's Soul. They are really people with souls that are dead. they are not attached to this world. more like a ghost then anything. Ghosts with a physical body. they are not aliens <333

2. yes she is a ghost, and yes she can interact with others. She can talk to other Anima Mortis people, and people who are alive. She can do simple interactions like checking out at a store, paying the cashier etc. but people that she interacts with sorta just remember her as that person they passed on a street... familiar.. but... no idea who she is even if she talked with them for hours :]

3. They both don't really live any were. i didn't really think that. Death sometimes will stay at recently deceased peoples houses. he knows they will be empty so he will sometimes stay there. him and life don't sleep or eat unless they are pretending/ acting.

4. i am gonna draw her in her demon form >] one of the pics I've been working on.

5. actually Sin is a minor character, and you will see them if i draw them, but i highly doubt it :] this is mainly a way so i have a color palette for future pictures. i dont know how much of the real story i want on DA so i am keeping a good amount of it off of DA so not to much information on them :]

6. nothing happens if someone calls him by his real name, he just HATES his real name. and resents being called it. he can die but its really hard to kill him. chain saw him in half and he will die. :] If he dies he dies entirely. there is an idea in the story that when people who die when they were supposed to they go to "heaven, hell, etc what every they believed in" but if an anima mortis dies then they completely no longer exist. i havn't completely worked out what becomes there purpose for trying to continue to exist, or if they just become immortals like Death and Life. :] still thinking that one through

thank you for your questions !

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Gothicangel4040 [2011-03-30 19:31:07 +0000 UTC]

amazing! don't know about u but, it's the most fun to me to make a charter seem oh so young but are 10x older then they look

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to Gothicangel4040 [2011-03-30 19:34:02 +0000 UTC]

lol i love those character types as well :] had to make one
<33
thank you

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Gothicangel4040 In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2011-03-30 19:37:49 +0000 UTC]

welcomies!
yesh i sadly make them ALL the time cuz i can't draw mine to look older then 16 some reason...

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Narkissa [2011-03-30 02:41:26 +0000 UTC]

So cool! I. Can't. Wait. To. Read. It.

The only thing that I can't help but point out: nicknames usually create greater attachments to people rather than just calling them by their actual name. I think you should have Sin call people by their last name or even their full name. That way he really is not getting attached.

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to Narkissa [2011-03-30 16:00:06 +0000 UTC]

>] i cant wait to have a chance to work on it some more. and pursue this story further

that is a thought. i am not sure. since i have never done either. always escape the formalities was my thought. i have no idea who you are so i call you by a feature that i see. ... hmm

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Narkissa In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2011-03-31 00:40:39 +0000 UTC]



That could work. But you should probably explain why he does that so that people don't think how I did.

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to Narkissa [2011-03-31 03:12:56 +0000 UTC]

lol trying not to give tooooo much info on them lmao XD idk i was having issues spoiling there whole stories on them C:

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Narkissa In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2011-04-01 03:23:10 +0000 UTC]

If that's the case, then you should of just uploaded the drawing and said nothing at all. Suspense. I think you should say nothing about it from now on, even if people ask.

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to Narkissa [2011-04-02 18:25:47 +0000 UTC]

lol i mite for certain things, and then there are things that wont be in the book and will only be on DA <3333

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Sanxsasuke [2011-03-30 01:01:30 +0000 UTC]

dude I fucking love this XD

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to Sanxsasuke [2011-03-30 15:41:41 +0000 UTC]

haha thank you never :]

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Sanxsasuke In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2011-03-30 23:36:21 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

ill look at your contest later

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MsRaggaMuffin [2011-03-29 22:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow looks like you've really put thought into the concept of the story. It should be a comic though, what with the prettiness of the character designs and their visuall appeal.
I kinda really like this.

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to MsRaggaMuffin [2011-03-30 15:41:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you
well i thought i'd put some digital comic versions of it on here. but mainly i'll be writing it :]

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Maka--anime [2011-03-29 21:02:32 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! The characters are awesome too. I wanta read the story.

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to Maka--anime [2011-03-30 15:34:54 +0000 UTC]

ha thank you!!

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daaku-no-tenshi [2011-03-29 18:59:08 +0000 UTC]

Life.

I'd hit that.

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to daaku-no-tenshi [2011-03-29 19:20:18 +0000 UTC]

xD

hit it hard

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BubblesTea [2011-03-29 18:31:21 +0000 UTC]

Well holy crap. I love this. The whole idea. Everything is awesome, like the characters, setting-- EVERYTHING. I want to rad the story.

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to BubblesTea [2011-03-29 18:47:52 +0000 UTC]

yay i'm glad you like it
i cant wait to get a chance to work on the actual story some more :]

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BubblesTea In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2011-03-29 19:31:13 +0000 UTC]

And I can't wait to see more!

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to BubblesTea [2011-03-29 19:32:06 +0000 UTC]

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WaterdragonTonx94 [2011-03-29 18:30:12 +0000 UTC]

fantastic i love the colour of death

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to WaterdragonTonx94 [2011-03-29 18:47:57 +0000 UTC]

ty!

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Jempower [2011-03-29 18:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Awww I LOVE all the character designs!!! XD sin is niice

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Pancake-Senpaii In reply to Jempower [2011-03-29 18:23:25 +0000 UTC]

hehe why thank you jemmy :] giving in to my whorey needs

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Jempower In reply to Pancake-Senpaii [2011-03-29 18:25:36 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure

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AxiasAlexa [2011-03-29 18:02:10 +0000 UTC]

sable kinda looks like you?
Like and loira have pretty colour palettes. pink, or warm colours
which suit them
well maybe not loira that much she's not what she seems, it appears.
(butshessogoddamnadorable)


I think death's story is interesting "(has never been the same since WWII)" i think that's very
interesting, there's a lot of reasons for that. and it fits the story really well. Although I
also think his appearance is deceiving. eh that's just me...



I have to admit i didn't understand the limbo thing,im really dumb when it comes to fantasy stuff.
although the anima mortis err people/species seem cool !
(it sounds like something out of a dream you want to continue the next time you go to bed)

I really like the demons here (even though i do not like demons in general these seem so....
I dunno, when you mentioned food,sex,slavery i thought of Axi.

Anyway.
Life-I think she's my favorite at the moment, mostly because she seems so nice (and I always like the nice characters in your stories)
and her appearance too!

Death-also really cool, and I love his eye colour -highfives a fellow greeneye-

Sable is also lovely and I think most human-like of all the characters. Plus she looks like you
So i like her even more. and totally unnecessary-i love her orange accessories!

Sin-yep...good old sin.......that sounded wrong, forget it
you know i love him

And Loira, aaagh i can't decide between her and Life, they are both so lovely!!!!

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