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Ailin-Templar [2010-09-24 21:23:22 +0000 UTC]

I love the idea it's very unique

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Equilonic [2010-07-28 15:18:41 +0000 UTC]

One general mistake would be that you make eyes too long. There's nothing wrong with very long eyes as long as they look proportional to the face, but you're really overdoing here .
I'm not sure if you want a classic anime style or a stylisation. I'll consider it a stylisation.
In terms of length you proportions are more or less correct, but your problem is that you don't show muscles enough. I mean, you show them too much for non-muscle style, but not enough for with-muscle style. And that look disproportional and very confusing. Another mistake on this particular picture is that you don't show enough limb joint notification (eg. by this picture I cannot define where her wrists and ankles are). There are problems with major joints - you define them as thinner place on the limb, which isn't the case most of the time. Arm will look the way you've drawn her straight arm only if you're looking from the side, but as hand rotates arm fill rotate too, so here you should've drawn a thickening where the elbow joint is. Knees are actually defined by a lump on the inner side and only then lower leg muscles are developing and I cannot really see such definition on this picture.
Wrinkles usually don't bulge THAT much .
General bad thing about your pictures (it's not a mistake though) is that you always draw them at the same angle - right from the front (sometimes side, but very rarely) with a slight tilt. And this angle is used very very rarely in mangas or other drawings.

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Vampireangel101 [2010-07-27 20:12:38 +0000 UTC]

Very nice dude Keep it up.

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