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Published: 2011-11-21 17:23:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 3615; Favourites: 98; Downloads: 16
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Another Sketch for my current Project I am working on.Yeah, I know, the 4 and 5 Panel are somehow Confusing...because you can`t see whats happening:
well since this Comic is going to be animated later, the Door will open by itself and Daniel...well gets scared and trips.
Sissy.
But I hope the Rest is Fine!
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Amnesia the Dark Descent (C) Frictional Games
Art (C) Me
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YAY another one! keep continuing with the amazing art
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I'm liking this so far. Especially how you showed movement in the 5 panel. The only critique I have is that you should probably vary up the line weight a bit. Daniel gets a little lost in the background sometimes. You could either make his line weight heavier or the backround lighter, or your could give him a stronge outline. That way the image will read more clearly.
Other than that, keep up the good work. Can't wait to see more.
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Thanks for your critigue : )
yes I know,Daniel often gets lost in the Background, I guess its because I usually draw the Background,then on another Sheet of Paper Daniel and finally put it together in Photoshop...you know, he`s gonna be animated later,so he must be able to move over the Background...at first I tried to give him a thin,white Line but...that looked a little bit weird,well I might try out to lighten up the Background a little bit where he appears next time.
Thanks for the Advice!
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I love your line work! FTW.
It's very detailed and creative! I adore it.
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thank you!
Those Lines are driving me crazy xD gotta stay brave and patient.
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patience is a virtue.
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