Comments: 13
MikadoIsBoss [2011-11-21 19:55:41 +0000 UTC]
YAY another one! keep continuing with the amazing art
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Mo8 [2011-11-21 18:21:49 +0000 UTC]
I'm liking this so far. Especially how you showed movement in the 5 panel. The only critique I have is that you should probably vary up the line weight a bit. Daniel gets a little lost in the background sometimes. You could either make his line weight heavier or the backround lighter, or your could give him a stronge outline. That way the image will read more clearly.
Other than that, keep up the good work. Can't wait to see more.
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Panfake In reply to Mo8 [2011-11-22 10:59:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your critigue : )
yes I know,Daniel often gets lost in the Background, I guess its because I usually draw the Background,then on another Sheet of Paper Daniel and finally put it together in Photoshop...you know, he`s gonna be animated later,so he must be able to move over the Background...at first I tried to give him a thin,white Line but...that looked a little bit weird,well I might try out to lighten up the Background a little bit where he appears next time.
Thanks for the Advice!
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TechnoShadowBlood [2011-11-21 18:21:29 +0000 UTC]
I love your line work! FTW.
It's very detailed and creative! I adore it.
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Panfake In reply to TechnoShadowBlood [2011-11-22 10:54:21 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
Those Lines are driving me crazy xD gotta stay brave and patient.
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Jadethefirefox [2011-11-21 17:44:03 +0000 UTC]
eeeeeeeeeee i love it
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Sanzyes [2011-11-21 17:23:32 +0000 UTC]
wow
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