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Panmiro — On a Beach by-nc-sa [NSFW]
Published: 2010-12-11 00:44:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 168; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description On a Beach in the Midst of a Storm

The slap of gasping fish
hauled aboard the groaning rigs
as they wriggle and kiss emptiness
is the only sound besides...
Palm fronds swishing through the airy brightness.

Five fold tendrils creep upon the sand
as a sussurant (grown) sea (now) secures the sighing
of the wind as it whips through the forests bushy hair.
The sweet perfume of wild petals,
a sighing fragrance of passion flying,
is infused within the sunny air.

The swish of fronds is fabric slipping,
letting the sun stroke land made bare.
The warm waves invite skinny-dipping
caressing the beach's smooth and sandy skin,
before, with a heaving sigh, they move out,
Leaving the naked shore a-glistening
Wating for the warm and lurid sun
to infiltrate the reflections of the beach
and slip unnoticed between the cracks
adding lustre where it lacks, shining from above
Gazing upon its verdant beloved:
A great eye which I cannot look into.

To think, I came here to forget you
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Comments: 8

theblueberrybush [2010-12-11 17:36:44 +0000 UTC]

Super ooper dooper good!!

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Panmiro In reply to theblueberrybush [2010-12-11 19:08:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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hxcvisionary [2010-12-11 14:25:26 +0000 UTC]

teehee.. so erotic!! i love it

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Panmiro In reply to hxcvisionary [2010-12-11 19:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm gonna have to write a few more philosophical ones to make up for it.

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hxcvisionary In reply to Panmiro [2010-12-12 16:41:02 +0000 UTC]

lol well i cant wait, me and my boyfriend think your writing is like..immaculate

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Panmiro In reply to hxcvisionary [2010-12-12 19:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Ha. Thanks that makes me happy.

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hxcvisionary In reply to Panmiro [2010-12-12 20:58:21 +0000 UTC]

yay!
just..dont read my poetry cause...except for "toxic sludge" its pretty old and..really stupid. i hate it
my bf is a much MUCH better poet

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Panmiro In reply to hxcvisionary [2010-12-12 21:16:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm afraid you can't stop me from reading your poetry, and I'm sure it's fine. You are right about ~theblueberrybush poetry though. It's quite good, and I'm sure yours will be too ^_^

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