Tire-me [2004-02-05 08:15:29 +0000 UTC]
I like the concept of this one... such irony. I think we all at one point realize just how little time we have left, yet we do nothing and just let it fly by... I guess fear holds us back. Nice work.
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wynter-rain [2004-02-01 15:23:57 +0000 UTC]
Thats lovely. It feels good to see some more poetry up here on your space.
It is a kind of beautiful irony in itself. It looks like you were too afraid of being scolded in life to actually live it.
Favourite!
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julyshelied [2004-01-29 13:30:46 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... I enjoy this. Very simple wording, not too involved in itself. Sort of a 'pretty tragedy'. Lets do lunch, this monotonous life needs some thrills. Rapids maybe?
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