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Published: 2009-03-12 12:29:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 9396; Favourites: 152; Downloads: 3359
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Take 2, added one frame to make the other step a bit smoother, moved head few frames ahead of the body, and added something nice to the end. ^^I think I need to make a small zoom in the end, though. It didn't go exactly as planned (shouldnotlistentomusicwhileanimating), but I don't have much time to correct it. This is only a part of my final year animation at my school, and the worst scene of the story is ahead next, so I try to reserve as much time to tackle it as I possibly can.
Since I had shown you the first loop of this scene, I thought I could show you the improved one too (which isn't exactly a loop anymore). ^^ Maybe the next one I'll show is the colored scene, but for the other scenes, you'll just have to wait untill I get the whole thing done. I'll keep you waiting. Hmm, maybe I should check how the DA's film submissions work...
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I can watch this hound walk over and over again |D Nice jobb
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Its awsome! BTW, how do you do stuff like that, I need tips thanx.
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Thats amazing! It would be awesome as an icon <33
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Mahtavaa työtä^^ Todella sulavaa liikettä. Kuinkas monta kuvaa meni tähän? Ja ihanko käsin paperille piirsit ensin ja sitten siirsit johonkin sorttiseen animaatio ohjelmistoon jatko käsiteltäväksi?
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well what can I say? it's a great animation, so fluid, and you also capture the weight and balance very well, but it still looks light, really great,
all that troubles me is the order in which the paws move, that forward crossed is more of reptiles, mammal tend to move the hind and the fore leg of the same side , and then the other side, like hR-fR-hL-fL
h for hind, and F for front
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Ihanan sulavaa!
Taidokasta animointia tosiaankin.
Oletko kenties jossain koulussa opiskelemassa animaattoriksi, vaiko kenties itseoppinut lahjakkuus?
Oli miten oli: tosi hienoa työtä!
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Kiitokset! ^^
Itse asiassa valmistuin juuri animaattoriksi (tai, noh, virallinen nimike on "animaatio painotteinen media-assistentti" mutta animaattori on helpompi sanoa). Tämä animaatiopätkä on pikku palanen opinnäytetyöstäni.
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Sori että vastaan näin myöhässä. x3
Mutta minua kiinnostaisi tietää missä olet opiskellut animaatiota?
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Mie Lybeckerin käsi- ja taideteollisessa itteni animaattoriksi luin. Koulu sijaitsee Raahessa, vähän Oulun alapuolella. ^^
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Aa, hyvä tietää että sellainenkin koulu on olemassa. :3
Kiitos kauheasti! ^^
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This is beautiful! Amazing! Only thing I'd change: not have so many frames for the crouching part. A quicker crouch, then spring!
But it is mostly awesome, I can believe in my dreams again!
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Really good, think you did a great job with the jump. Can't wait for the update!
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This is awesome! It flows so smoothly. Nice job. ^^
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HOL-Y crap. i only WISH i could animate something that smooth.
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Beautiful work, I really love the angle and the jump as well. It is also so smooth. 
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Wow, it looks awesome and really smooth ^_^ good luck with finishing your project ^.^
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absolutely brilliant animation! It's so fluid and smooth, fantastic job! I love the perspective as he leaps forward! 
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Love the jump. I did it in slow-mo and it looked great. I love the front legs. Lovely job. (:
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Wow, that's really smooth.
I like how you did it traditionally... Good to know I'm not the only one. c:
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Very nice and smooth animation. I really like the paws and how they spread slightly when a step is taken
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Wow. Tuo näyttää mahtavalta o_o Olen niin kadeee. En osaa edes animoida pistettä liikkumaan sulavasti paikasta A paikkaan B.
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Whoa! Awesome! The animation is so smooth! ^-^ Great work! You should get into movies (re-do GDW lol)
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Uuu. o.o
Onko haukun voima sulaminen? @w@ Koska... Se näyttää melkein vedeltä kun se hyppää.
En tie onko se hyvä vai huono, mutta itse ottaisin muutaman ruudun pois siitä kyyristymisestä, niin tulisi pontta. :3
Men jag tycka.
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Ui kiitus! ^^ Miusta vähän tuntuu että kuvaan lopullisen version osittain ykkösillä kakkosten sijaan, niin saisin hypyn puolta nopeammaksi. Olet ihan oikeassa siinä, että tästä puuttuu sitä pontta.
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Riippuen tietenkin mitä ohjelmaa käytät, mutta esim Adobe Imagereadyllä se raamien nopeuksien kokeileminen käy helposti -> Voisi mahdollisesti kokeilla vaihdella nopeutta, esim kyyristymisessä on ehkä kaks ruutua, joiden nopeus on 0,1 sekuntia, ja sitten hyppy on kolme ruutua, joiden nopeus on ehkä 0,05 tai jotakin sinne päin... 
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Tjaa-a, en ole tainnut koskaan vielä käyttää Image Readya... Eikun olempas. Meillä koulussa on käytössä Animo-niminen tajuttoman kallis ammattilais ohjelma, joten mie olen tottunut vähän erilaisiin säätöihin. Mutta mie kyllä väännän tämän vielä kuntoon! Olen päättänyt niin.
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Niin sitä pitää!!
Örr aivot tukossa niin en keksi enää mitään muuta neuvoa. <:3
Te ootte varmaan päntänny ne Animaation 11/28 sääntöä? (Yleensä tyyppien mielestä niitä on 12... Mutta tää joku animaattori väittää että niitä on jopa 28.)
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Excellent, very smooth, fluid movement. I wish we could use 4-legged creatures in 2D animation. But I love my Poko anyways. >w>;
Anyways, very nice. Pencil on paper?
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Well, at our first year here we too created animation characters that had to be bipedal, but as I'm now a final year student working on my own final work that can be just about anything, I choose my hounds. For the simple reason that in the time frame where I can draw one humanoid, I can draw maybe 5-10 dogs. Except if they'd be really simple humanoid-ish-shaped creatures. What kind of character is your Poko?
Yup, pencil on paper. ^^ My favourite media.
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I have his turnaround-in-progress: [link] He's a little yellow dog-like alien. Obsessed with his books so much that he refused to evacuate his disaster-ridden homework because it would mean leaving his precious books behind. xD
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Jeesuskristus, tuota hyppyä! 
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Ui kiitos. ^^ Miulla oli muovailuvahamalli sen päästä apuna perspektiivihommissa. Olisi voinut olla hankalaa vääntää puhtaasti omasta päästä sitä pään kääntymistä.
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The animation is so smooth. The character moves in a very life-like manner, and seems to have it's own life and energy!
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Wow fantastic, a really smooth wonderfully rendered piece of animation!
If you wanted to get more of a weighty powerful jump at the end though, I would suggest stretching or bluring the figure at the start and end of the jump and having 1 less inbetween frame between the take-off and land and the same amount of frames at the top of the jump.
Really lovely piece I can't wait to see more!
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Thank yous! ^^ It's great to get comments from a real professional. I'll see what I can do to the need of blurring in the end. I hope I can do it in After Effects since my animating time is running short, but I think I should shoot the end in ones instead of twos to speed it up.
Huge thank yous for feedback!
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Haha no problem, yes shooting on ones for fast action is definatley a good idea, at the old warner bros they used to do that alot, slow and normal paced stuff on twos fast stuff on ones especially on the roadrunner shorts.
I absolutley love Wurr by the way I'm a big fan, keep up the great work.
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Thats sooo super sexy! ... you know when you finish you should take the clips and some art and make a movie trailer.
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