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This is something that I got stuck in my head some time ago, and it demanded that I'd do something to it. This was just a test, probably a prologue to a story I'm considering to make. It is actually three pages long, I finished the last page just about an hour ago, but I still have to make the texts to the other two. Don't have enough time right now.
I really need to hear your opinion, people. I will upload the other two pages within the next week or so when I have enough time to do so. But for now I'd like to know what you think about the mixture of "realistic" style and painted/hieroglyph drawings and is it easy to follow.
I could really use comments on this one.
Oh, and tell me if you can spot any grammatical error. I'm not too good in writing stories in English.
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Ribbontail I think this kind of comic is something you'll enjoy, I've been reading it since around 2009 :3
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Hey thank you so much for the rec, Mochni! I'll definitely have to check out this comic someday, I love the style and am impressed by now long-standing it is. Saved to my read-list!
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Its very good and the world building that's gone into it is right up your alley!
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I've just come across this comic and I already love the style! Can't wait to continue reading, very well done
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I just realised that there is a seamonster/dragon/serpent on the map. Makes me wonder if there are other animals that can be effected by the BT besides the hounds and the monster rabbits. lol
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Omg omg omg omg omg I finally found it
Ive read this years ago (like 5 years ago I think) when it wasn't over 50 pages
Im soooo happy
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This sounds interesting.And the art is just beautifull
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This is amazing! You are clearly very talented, I love your unique style!
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this first page says their dogs or hounds but clearly they look more like wolves in this picture. in fact, many of them look kinda like wolves, but most seem more dog like, so it's not entirely false. lol just messing with ya.
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I love this page, and the rest of the comic. One of my most favorites. Great job on it!
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Finally going back and putting the first page into my favs!
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What markers did you use to outline this it's amazing!!!
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i read the 132 pages, and i liked so much, good job (sorry for my bad english, i read but no write 
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Wow, did you paint this by hand or on the computer?
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Just ordinary pencils with marker outlines.
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WOW you have skillz!
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great comic. *_* It's the reason why I joined dA.
Read it since the first page and I have to say keep on!
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this is a beautiful comic! i'm amazed at the design, it's a wonderful piece.
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I love the idea of the monsterous not beeing the evil and the beautiful not beeing the good. life´s never that simple, isn´t it?
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Stumbled across pg 110 time to see where my curiosity leads me. ^_^
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Oh good first page. It reminds me of Watership down. Not so much the art style but the stylised arts for the backstory. Very nice.
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I don't think you needed to use the word envy and envied within the same page.
You did say to point out any grammer errors
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I've read to page 102, but I just wanted to say here that I absolutely adore this story!
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Tämä kääntyy enkuksi? Wou, on kyllä hieno sarjis jonka joskus vaihdoin käsiini, taisi olla viime vuoden Hesan festareiden ehdottomia helmiä! Aina välillä joku palauttaa uskon että festareilta löytyy muutakin kuin keskinkertaista tai sekavaa kuonaa.
Mutta lehtihän oli väreissä, miksei täällä ole niitä värisivuja? Ne on kyllä tosi upeita. Toisaalta näyttää harmaasävytkin toimivan.
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Nice! I like the 'primitive cave drawing' feel to the story images here. I love this kind of stylization for backstories of the "ancient past history" kind.
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I have to say I love this story, its such a different take then most I'v seen on here. I love the art.
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I will definately be reading the rest of the story!
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Ooh... Nice first page! i surrender... I'm hooked.
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A barren crater full of mutated dogs? I wonder where that came from...
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