Comments: 37
aaronallen5 [2008-02-21 08:39:29 +0000 UTC]
thier great
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Lovehinadude28 [2007-12-16 23:03:54 +0000 UTC]
awsome simply awsome i just finished reading all of your stories and there really well written with a few mistakes here and there but still very good I hope you keep it up i cant wait to read the next
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to Lovehinadude28 [2008-01-07 23:27:01 +0000 UTC]
workin on chp 5 but it got kinda hard to to all the work on life as a fox
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Lovehinadude28 In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2008-01-08 10:33:41 +0000 UTC]
its ok i was just wondering so please dont think about it and dont rush yourself
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Worgak [2007-12-15 12:51:18 +0000 UTC]
Me want new chappy!
TT^TT
(has been a moth since the last1!)
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Worgak [2007-11-30 12:23:21 +0000 UTC]
YaY! X3
Beeting up the monkey of time worked X3!
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Darkca-Lssj [2007-11-29 23:14:16 +0000 UTC]
Fucking deadly. I am surprised at who the Kitsune clan leader is but them expecting Tsunade was to easy.
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Worgak In reply to Darkca-Lssj [2007-11-30 13:46:23 +0000 UTC]
I had guessed Minato....
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to Worgak [2007-12-03 18:32:46 +0000 UTC]
some of my readers on fanfic also geussed that ^_^
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Darkca-Lssj In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2007-11-29 23:28:00 +0000 UTC]
Ya well, Mwahahahahahaha all ya want. Your still missing one thing though
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Darkca-Lssj In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2007-11-29 23:33:48 +0000 UTC]
A cliff hanger. One thing that really gets ppl wanting more is a cliff hanger
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to Darkca-Lssj [2007-11-29 23:36:01 +0000 UTC]
if you probably already noticed,
I'M NOT THAT GOOD AT CLIFFHANGERS WITH THIS STORY!!!!!
.....and i don't know why, if with my other story is so much easier, then why not this one?
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Darkca-Lssj In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2007-11-29 23:37:46 +0000 UTC]
Maybe cause you KEEP GIVING AWAY WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
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Darkca-Lssj In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2007-11-29 23:47:55 +0000 UTC]
e.g Preview
Chapter 5: Help From Some Friends
???: “Well if it isn’t Naruto-sama! What brings you here?” the old man was happy to see an old friend.
Naruto: “I need your help, can you get me in contact with ‘THEM’?”`
Need i show more
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Worgak In reply to Darkca-Lssj [2007-11-30 13:48:22 +0000 UTC]
yes! dat is something like a cliff hanger (look at ma stories I don't have any cliffys! I don't know y, BUT I JUST CAN'T STOP WRITING THE CHAP BEFOR THER ACTION ENDS!!)
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to Worgak [2007-11-30 23:10:59 +0000 UTC]
don't wrry there might be a flshback ^-^
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Worgak In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2007-12-01 12:09:16 +0000 UTC]
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*runs away in fear from flashback*
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to Darkca-Lssj [2007-11-29 23:54:25 +0000 UTC]
..................................nope, don't see it DJ DOC
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Darkca-Lssj In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2007-11-30 00:21:35 +0000 UTC]
Ya laugh it up, like I haven't dealt with that before
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Worgak In reply to Darkca-Lssj [2007-12-15 19:36:31 +0000 UTC]
Bugs bunny: Neeeeehhhmmm....hi doc!
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