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Fierce-Dities-Link [2008-06-18 04:22:04 +0000 UTC]
I love your work but do you think you could put the number of the tails the demon has before they talk, so it would look something like this,
8 "How much longer now?"
7 "Silence! Your giving me a headache."
(i thoght if I was going to put something it would at least borderline interesting.) so yeah just a thought. still love you story.
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darkangel0921 [2008-05-19 18:44:05 +0000 UTC]
^^ yay naruhina XD gonna read next chapter now ^^
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gogeta408 [2008-01-03 21:23:12 +0000 UTC]
hehe. bijuu are funny.
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IMNOTCRAZY1 [2007-12-21 04:51:57 +0000 UTC]
uh.....the biju thing was confusing....what happened??? and how is Hinata a jinchuriki??? She can't just magically become a jinchuriki!!! She needs to have a biju sealed in her and no biju would AGREE to that. And even if she WAS the shichibi's jinchuriki, wouldn't Hiashi have hated her as well? He only thought she was useless. He never thought her to be a monster, like he did Naruto.
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to IMNOTCRAZY1 [2008-01-07 23:36:54 +0000 UTC]
if you keep readin, i'll eventually reveal how she became a jinchuriki
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IMNOTCRAZY1 In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2008-01-08 00:42:20 +0000 UTC]
....maybe....but it's still kinda outrageous to have her just BECOME a Jinchuriki out of the blue.
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to IMNOTCRAZY1 [2008-01-08 04:16:06 +0000 UTC]
well this is a fanfic, so whatever i want to happen happens
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IMNOTCRAZY1 In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2008-01-08 04:28:04 +0000 UTC]
meh, true. I'll go along with it. It's good enough to overlook some things.
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to IMNOTCRAZY1 [2008-01-08 04:34:33 +0000 UTC]
T_T then why didn't you just do that in the first place?
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IMNOTCRAZY1 In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2008-01-08 11:12:33 +0000 UTC]
well, you DID just tell me that the mother ISN'T AN OC, which kinda made it too hard to bear, even though it's good.
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IMNOTCRAZY1 In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2008-01-08 23:48:07 +0000 UTC]
but since you told me it ISN'T an OC (unless you are lying, in which case you will never hear the ceasing of my ranting, lol) that puts it back in the realm of ok. now...I think it was ch 13
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TheBluePikachu [2007-09-01 03:35:40 +0000 UTC]
MAKE MORE OR ELSE!!!!!!!
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to TheBluePikachu [2007-09-01 03:40:58 +0000 UTC]
chp 4 is currently in progress
an i hope u won't be dissapointed, but srsly, wut do u thnk of the story, i need to get som possitive feedback over pweeeeeeze!
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TheBluePikachu In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2007-09-01 03:43:47 +0000 UTC]
DOES HINATA REALLY HAVE THE 7 TAILS IN HER? I'VE HEARD RUMORS BUT THATS IT. GREAT STORY, OKAY SPELLING, FOXES RULE, WHAT ELSE? NARUHINA 4 EVA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to TheBluePikachu [2007-09-01 03:46:18 +0000 UTC]
i dont really know if thas true but it'd be really great if it were.XD
thnx, an foxes do rule, NARUHINA FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!
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TheBluePikachu In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2007-09-01 03:50:30 +0000 UTC]
chapter two made me cry... i am the one who usually makes people cry.
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TheBluePikachu In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2007-09-01 03:49:35 +0000 UTC]
READ AUTHOR COMMENTS!!!!!!! IT'S NOT MINE!!!!!!!! *cries* sadly it's not...
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