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panda-chan98 [2009-02-27 23:13:05 +0000 UTC]
I like it buuuut there no naruhina Kukuku
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Fierce-Dities-Link [2008-11-03 14:24:22 +0000 UTC]
That was great. I loved all the attacks you gave Naruto, and how strong you made him. Plus Haku is a girl and Naruto charmed her. and you ended this chapter off perfectly. Great work pal. I hope you make a ton of chapters for this fanfict. It is VERY promissing. I can't wait to read more.
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to Fierce-Dities-Link [2008-11-04 02:45:55 +0000 UTC]
thanks, i hope it can continue to please all of the people that read my fics...i'm still working on my other fics, and even soe future ones
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Fierce-Dities-Link In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2008-11-04 14:02:49 +0000 UTC]
Is Hake going to dress more like a girl in town and more like a boy on missions, cause that would make things a little easier on Naruto, although it could take a while for people to notice she's a girl, or maybe not if she dresses like a girl in the village. Cuase she does look like a girl. I kinda want to know what Naruto and Haku did on there way back to the Leaf Village. If thats okay.
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to Fierce-Dities-Link [2008-11-05 05:13:25 +0000 UTC]
i was actually still thinking about what haku would be wearing.......still haven't decided on that, plus you could recall that naruto said that he didn't care how haku dressed or what people thought of him........there may also be a flashback that would reveal a plot point that may be revealed in the next chapter, as well as where naruto learned all of his hidden abilities
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Fierce-Dities-Link In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2008-11-05 13:58:12 +0000 UTC]
Cool. Can't wait. Did you read my first fanfict? I know It might be wierd but I, believe it came out good.
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to Worgak [2008-11-01 19:32:11 +0000 UTC]
who said naruto only trained after he was put in squad seven?
as for the fireball, you'll just have to read the next chapter to find out the reason the it was so big
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Worgak In reply to Passionate-Eyes [2008-11-02 09:56:40 +0000 UTC]
k!
Oh, I found another point I like 'bout the story.
THE EPIC LOVE OF NARUHAKU! :sparkle, sparkle:
No, let's be serious, I like where you're going with that part it looks like that hardrelationship thing, what gives the story a better....you know what I mean (damn my germanness, I have no idea what to say there!).
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Passionate-Eyes In reply to Worgak [2008-11-04 02:46:38 +0000 UTC]
just let it out in german to get it out of your system
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