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Published: 2010-07-30 23:45:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 256; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 2
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Description I fell in love

and fell on my face

He took my heart

and in its place

He put a thorn bush

It twists and
    it bleeds me
         dry

I wonder why

I cry when I say

Goodbye

When I really mean

Hello Despair

Will you be staying permanently

iwhere I used to keep

my self-esteem?

Will you wait patiently

until I sleep

and make me dream,

twisting memories

of him and me?


Fell in love

And fell on my face


Hit the ground

And I lost my crown


I am no longer queen of his world

I am no more than an ordinary girl

And I am losing the struggle

To be okay with...that...
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Comments: 2

sarah-is-nameless [2010-07-31 01:32:49 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, it's clever

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sabeewabeewoo [2010-07-31 00:47:01 +0000 UTC]

This is really good.
I sense so much emotion while reading it, I love how you built the pain between the lines.
Nice!

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