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Published: 2008-11-27 14:01:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 955; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 107
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ForDedicated to my friend Kiki, who was the first person to introduce me to dA last year, and also just a great person in general.
I drew your OC Kioni since I liked her design (not to mention she happened to be one of your favs).
Here's to you kiki, I hope you like it.
Based on: kikaisaigono.deviantart.com/arβ¦
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Z-z-z-zomg!
Stop it.
Stop being so awesome. I can't take it! D: It's too much awesomeness~~
Damn you and your consistant light sources! Damn you and your awesomely awesome eyes! O:<
No, really, I love this! 
I LOVE IT!
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Haha, thanks for the high praise kiki, but really this was long overdue. As other people have pointed out, it has a number of flaws which I should have fixed but didn't notice, but more importantly I meant it as a way to thank you for all the support you've given me.
Never stop being awesome kiki, and happy holidays.
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Good job
I think that there should be more of an indent, or a curve where the top of the torso leads into the hip (I don't know what that bit is called =/ ) The hands and the face look slightly.....bland. I can't really explain it, the fingers are kinda stiff.
The hair and shading in particular overweigh this though, it's awesome =3
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Thanks sen, I agree with you on all points, I'm pretty disappointing in myself for not correcting these mistakes earlier. At least I know them now though, and as usual, I appreciate the comment d('-'d)
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Yeah, I'm disappointing in myself often too
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Aww, cutie 
I like your way of colouring, the skirt looks very good
I just see one thing in her anatomy: Her upper body is a bit too short, so she looks a little more podgy than the original. But it also seems a bit like a chibi, so I guess, that's no problem at all ;3
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Thanks rika, I only noticed this after you pointed it out, but I must agree that the upper half of her body is too small (where's her ribcage?)
I'll keep it in mind for my next sketch, thanks for the comment!
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You're welcome 
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